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4/13 c27 JonnyBoboThe1st
Great chapter, the fight was intense!
Go Simon!
4/13 c27 Jaegerbomb1527
Absolutely amazing chapter, love that he stood up to team rocket and hopefully with the info he can give/stopping them here he can cut a deal with the league. And hell yah Simon! SS is cool and all, but becoming brave is what really made me smile. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
4/13 c27 loytaf
Awesome chapter!
4/13 c27 1Sennin Modo
Op chapter
4/13 c27 Hwang Manuel
Fucking love epic evolutions. Too bad now he is openly against rockets though.

Wonder what Grundy thinks of Golurk now
4/13 c27 jvargo0216
This was a great chapter. I never liked the fact that Bradley worked for Team Rocket in this story, this was a bridge that needed to get burned. Good news: Simon evolved, Bad news: the whole confrontation got recorded and everyone is going to know that Bradley worked for Team Rocket. A whole bunch of bad things can happen from this. From Bradley being branded a criminal, to being arrested, to having his Pokemon confiscated. At the very least, I'm not sure if he'll still be allowed to participate in the Indigo Conference. I'm looking for to when the next chapter comes out.
4/13 c27 5Monkey D. Conan
Beautiful. It’s nice to see Brad making the right choice in regards Team Rocket here. Hopefully, things don’t go too poorly for him for his past ties to them. Between the more benign nature of his previous help to Team Rocket, combined with his actions here and the information he can give, both firsthand and meta disguised as firsthand, he can at least play the inside man vilgilante route as believable enough. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
4/13 c27 3coldblue2015
Thanks for updating!

...Honestly, this is Simon/Golurk chapter! He has reached Legendary Rank status and I am curious on what a SS Potential can reach. Probably Simon one-shot many, MANY Pokemon and is the ultimate sparring partner for Ma Ma/Ursaluna and Solomon Grundy/Alpha Gene Nidoking...Unless Bubbles Junior manage to reach the same Potential as well.

I'm glad Bradley went against Team Rocket, but most like the Pokemon League will have Questions for Bradley, especially if Samantha the Olivine Reporter caught a verbal recorded message of Bradley addressing Team Rocket Administrator Petrel as his 'Boss'...It is going to be pain in the but to explain away this and Bradley is going to either be recruited in the Pokemon League as a Elite Ace Trainer that can Sub in for a Elite Four Member or...Bradley might get some prison time and get interrogated.

...Honestly? I think we need to circle back on Quagsire and see what that Pokemon capable with Celebi Blessing...Quagsire is a Champion Level Pokemon do to his Limiter Removed off itself with Mystical Pokemon Blessing. We don't Quagsire Level, Rank or Nature; which is going to be interesting...I figure Quagsire is AA WITHOUT his Limits, but Celebi Blessing could have bump up Quagsire Rank to S. No clue on the Nature, but I figure the Level is extremely High. Also...I wonder what Quagsire name will be in the group.

Grundy just going to be MAD he missed the biggest fight with Team Rocket, given he could have REALLY cut loose on Battle/Fighting here!
4/13 c27 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Hell of a chapter, hopefully the lad can get ahead of things.
4/13 c27 Pjo crossovers
So, Bradley is going to get in big trouble for this, both with Team Rocket and maybe the league depending on how much Samantha got on that camera. And whether it had a good enough microphone to pick up that last conversation. And then there’s Simon! He was able to snatch victory from defeat with a well timed evolution! And he’s SS rank?! Jeez he’s going to be extremely powerful once he gets some more levels on him.
4/13 c27 Caragor
This chapter was awesome! Simon was the MVP! Everything is coming out now though, Brad needs to call Lorilei or a league official that he trusts and come clean about everything. There is no hiding his affiliation with Team Rocket. Great chapter!
4/13 c27 myafroatemydog
Pretty awesome chapter wasn’t expecting an update.
4/13 c27 insanecoop
A really great chapter.
His going to be a monster now as a SS
4/13 c27 12Victori
This chapter was insane and I can't wait for the shit that hits the wall in the next few chapters
4/13 c27 Tribernator
Oooooh *&% this is going to be rough going forward. You dont screw over a multinational criminal group all by your lonesome. I don hope he hurries up on getting all his pokemon strong because he is really going to need it. I wonder what he will do now for at least some temporary safety. He has the King as a final trump card, but as we saw here its absolutely possible to block him from coming out and there are times and places where you DONT let him out, like on board this vessel.
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