for Sign of the White Horse7/30 c21 James Birdsong
Awesome!
Awesome!
7/17 c21 lileep07
That was a fun ride. I am very excited for the sequel. Whilel the blue spine universe is not my personal favorite, I feel like you’ve been true to cannon and I look forward to what you come up with next. If I can make a request. I would love to see Frank and callie get back together.
That was a fun ride. I am very excited for the sequel. Whilel the blue spine universe is not my personal favorite, I feel like you’ve been true to cannon and I look forward to what you come up with next. If I can make a request. I would love to see Frank and callie get back together.
7/17 c1 lileep07
When I first read the description about this being a Nancy and ned story, I wasn’t really interested in reading. However, curiosity got the better of me and I checked some of the other reviewers and got super excited to see that they were going to be other characters from my favorite fandom in it. Just started reading and I’m already thoroughly enjoying what you written. Can’t wait to see what unfolds as I continue.
When I first read the description about this being a Nancy and ned story, I wasn’t really interested in reading. However, curiosity got the better of me and I checked some of the other reviewers and got super excited to see that they were going to be other characters from my favorite fandom in it. Just started reading and I’m already thoroughly enjoying what you written. Can’t wait to see what unfolds as I continue.
7/3 c21 
27Drumboy100
Thank goodness, I was feeling apprehensive while reading this chapter, worried I would have to tell you that it feels there are still so many loose ends! That explains it, there will be a sequel. A lot of information this chapter. The Network is partially evil, as expected; I don't think Serena White's involvement was mentioned, or maybe I missed it or no one has figured it out. Bad guys need catching, yes. I appreciate the "better" Network agent giving us the speech of light versus darkness, yet Nancy is already aware of that and the agent would do well to look in the mirror and consider her own network's ethical roles. But of course the most important role of the sequel is to get various couples together, and we can figure out who those couples will be by now. Great job hooking us in!
27Drumboy100Thank goodness, I was feeling apprehensive while reading this chapter, worried I would have to tell you that it feels there are still so many loose ends! That explains it, there will be a sequel. A lot of information this chapter. The Network is partially evil, as expected; I don't think Serena White's involvement was mentioned, or maybe I missed it or no one has figured it out. Bad guys need catching, yes. I appreciate the "better" Network agent giving us the speech of light versus darkness, yet Nancy is already aware of that and the agent would do well to look in the mirror and consider her own network's ethical roles. But of course the most important role of the sequel is to get various couples together, and we can figure out who those couples will be by now. Great job hooking us in!
7/3 c20 Drumboy100
I can't believe Frank let Callie leave! They're certainly not done with each other, but hasn't Frank read a book or watched a movie ever?! That was his cue to call her back! Good reunion between the brothers, hmm, they're getting right to logistics without processing their feelings...again. The last chapter certainly has a lot to tie up.
I can't believe Frank let Callie leave! They're certainly not done with each other, but hasn't Frank read a book or watched a movie ever?! That was his cue to call her back! Good reunion between the brothers, hmm, they're getting right to logistics without processing their feelings...again. The last chapter certainly has a lot to tie up.
6/29 c21 MargaretA66
Oh Wow, So the ending for Nancy and Ned. I will be counting on an ending from Frank and Joe's point of view. You really sucked me into this story. Great job!
Oh Wow, So the ending for Nancy and Ned. I will be counting on an ending from Frank and Joe's point of view. You really sucked me into this story. Great job!
6/28 c21 caseykam
Thank you for the story!
Lots of potential questions leading into a sequel (or two). I'm looking forward to it. Have a great Summer. :)
Thank you for the story!
Lots of potential questions leading into a sequel (or two). I'm looking forward to it. Have a great Summer. :)
6/27 c21 Candylou
The conclusion explains a lot. Katrina did give Nancy so many answers, but still not all the answers. Arthur Gray was the only agent that could have been trusted, since the Hardys always worked with him Arthur tried to keep those undercover safe if possible. That is why frank and Joe expected that. Since he was killed, the others agents won't do that now I don't know if Katrina is really sincere or just doesn't want Nancy to find anything. To me, Nancy needs to talk to Fenton about what she found out, though frank and Joe need to not put it off, and let Fenton know everything. It was not their faults and they need to stop letting their guilt and fears get the best of them. Looking forward to the next story
The conclusion explains a lot. Katrina did give Nancy so many answers, but still not all the answers. Arthur Gray was the only agent that could have been trusted, since the Hardys always worked with him Arthur tried to keep those undercover safe if possible. That is why frank and Joe expected that. Since he was killed, the others agents won't do that now I don't know if Katrina is really sincere or just doesn't want Nancy to find anything. To me, Nancy needs to talk to Fenton about what she found out, though frank and Joe need to not put it off, and let Fenton know everything. It was not their faults and they need to stop letting their guilt and fears get the best of them. Looking forward to the next story
6/25 c19 27Drumboy100
Yup, Katie's distraction provided all that Joe and Fenton needed. The good guys are now an indomitable force, reunited. Either I missed something or it hasn't been revealed who fired the first distracting shot. Nancy's theory is bad guys conspiring against bad guys, no surprise there, yet there is something about the whole thing that's an awful lot of work and risk for not too much gain, again unless I'm missing something...looks like we are nearing the end and there might be a reveal or two yet.
27Drumboy100Yup, Katie's distraction provided all that Joe and Fenton needed. The good guys are now an indomitable force, reunited. Either I missed something or it hasn't been revealed who fired the first distracting shot. Nancy's theory is bad guys conspiring against bad guys, no surprise there, yet there is something about the whole thing that's an awful lot of work and risk for not too much gain, again unless I'm missing something...looks like we are nearing the end and there might be a reveal or two yet.
6/25 c19 Candylou
It is also a relief that ned, Nancy, the girls, and the other Hardys are back together again. Maybe frank can get the information Sam needs. I think Nancy is on the right track about his theory. Update as soon as possible
It is also a relief that ned, Nancy, the girls, and the other Hardys are back together again. Maybe frank can get the information Sam needs. I think Nancy is on the right track about his theory. Update as soon as possible
6/24 c19 Candylou
It is also a relief that ned, Nancy, the girls, and the other Hardys are back together again. Maybe frank can get the information Sam needs. I think Nancy is on the right track about his theory. Update as soon as possible
It is also a relief that ned, Nancy, the girls, and the other Hardys are back together again. Maybe frank can get the information Sam needs. I think Nancy is on the right track about his theory. Update as soon as possible
6/24 c19 Candylou
Thank goodness Katie was able to distract the gunmen , and Fenton and Joe were able to turn the tables on him.
Thank goodness Katie was able to distract the gunmen , and Fenton and Joe were able to turn the tables on him.
6/22 c18 27Drumboy100
Action-packed chapter here! I guess we're nearing the end. We all knew there were phony agents, and apparently many of them, and we're lucky no one's hurt yet. Very clever to use Joe's bum leg as part of the plan, which was also risky; the baddies are thrilled about Joe's lack of mobility and would be delighted to make him even less mobile. Laura is a hero here, understanding that the children are the number one priority, leaving her husband and son to care for them. I knew that Katie would have a big role here. But how will she not get shot herself? Ned will get there right in time. Also Ned might be a tad irate with the bad guys.
27Drumboy100Action-packed chapter here! I guess we're nearing the end. We all knew there were phony agents, and apparently many of them, and we're lucky no one's hurt yet. Very clever to use Joe's bum leg as part of the plan, which was also risky; the baddies are thrilled about Joe's lack of mobility and would be delighted to make him even less mobile. Laura is a hero here, understanding that the children are the number one priority, leaving her husband and son to care for them. I knew that Katie would have a big role here. But how will she not get shot herself? Ned will get there right in time. Also Ned might be a tad irate with the bad guys.