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Good Lord, that was to close for comfort for her!
There will be fallout from this one. Interesting to see where the speculation goes.
Good Lord, that was to close for comfort for her!
There will be fallout from this one. Interesting to see where the speculation goes.
5/15 c117 traceybuie
Bella handled the clean up and talking with folks afterwards with grace, humility and kindness. The crowd was grateful and worried for her until they saw her arm reattached. When she guzzled down that soda without looking grossed out, she helped settle the crowd. Did she ever puke that up? I wish I knew spanish so I could understand what she discussed with that man.
Charlie is never gonna be without his phone ever again after finding out about Bella's latest heroism. Maria's continued breathing on the earth is still confusing. Peter's astounding belief that she "learned" from this disaster is mind boggling.
Edward's new fascination with Bella's hairless pussy was funny at first, then he turned it sexy. LOL They can always go rustle up a criminal later. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Bella handled the clean up and talking with folks afterwards with grace, humility and kindness. The crowd was grateful and worried for her until they saw her arm reattached. When she guzzled down that soda without looking grossed out, she helped settle the crowd. Did she ever puke that up? I wish I knew spanish so I could understand what she discussed with that man.
Charlie is never gonna be without his phone ever again after finding out about Bella's latest heroism. Maria's continued breathing on the earth is still confusing. Peter's astounding belief that she "learned" from this disaster is mind boggling.
Edward's new fascination with Bella's hairless pussy was funny at first, then he turned it sexy. LOL They can always go rustle up a criminal later. Thanks for writing and sharing.
5/14 c117 Marymary123
One of a kind and well written. Thank you
One of a kind and well written. Thank you
5/14 c117 MikeIce
Edward got the perfect life in the end. He had quite the journey. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what the eplogue holds.
Edward got the perfect life in the end. He had quite the journey. Thanks for the update. I can't wait to see what the eplogue holds.
5/14 c117 Rita01tx
Lordamercy! Like the rest of the world, I was holdin' my breath until we got to see her finally take out that demonic monster forever *shudder!* And I'll be here for anything else you write about our favorite vamps!
Lordamercy! Like the rest of the world, I was holdin' my breath until we got to see her finally take out that demonic monster forever *shudder!* And I'll be here for anything else you write about our favorite vamps!
5/14 c117 VryUnique
Awesome! I was so sure Jasper or Edward was going to show up to help.
Your way was so much better, I like that Bella saved herself by herself,
not to mention saving the whole world. Maybe the vampire world has
learned a lesson and will be careful who they change going forward.
I like how you had shown Alice's reaction first, letting us know that Jasper
was not coming to the rescue.
Charlie was fishing, which is funny but he dodged a bullet. He gets to find
out that his daughter is OK before he sees how close to death she actually was.
It was hysterical when Edward that Bella was waxed, I laughed out loud. Just
imaging him making a frantic call to Carlisle was too funny. I wouldn't have
minded a peek into the Cullens living room during the broadcast.
I loved the view of Madison Square Garden, that was great.
Thanks so much for the update. It was awesome as usual. I hate that there is
only an Epilogue left but excited that we will eventually get some outtakes.
Awesome as usual! Thank you!
Awesome! I was so sure Jasper or Edward was going to show up to help.
Your way was so much better, I like that Bella saved herself by herself,
not to mention saving the whole world. Maybe the vampire world has
learned a lesson and will be careful who they change going forward.
I like how you had shown Alice's reaction first, letting us know that Jasper
was not coming to the rescue.
Charlie was fishing, which is funny but he dodged a bullet. He gets to find
out that his daughter is OK before he sees how close to death she actually was.
It was hysterical when Edward that Bella was waxed, I laughed out loud. Just
imaging him making a frantic call to Carlisle was too funny. I wouldn't have
minded a peek into the Cullens living room during the broadcast.
I loved the view of Madison Square Garden, that was great.
Thanks so much for the update. It was awesome as usual. I hate that there is
only an Epilogue left but excited that we will eventually get some outtakes.
Awesome as usual! Thank you!
5/14 c117 Sammy
Loved the chapter. Perfect way to end the story but I'm very sad to see it end. I've never read a Twilight story like this.
Loved the chapter. Perfect way to end the story but I'm very sad to see it end. I've never read a Twilight story like this.