for The Last Call11/5/2024 c26 cocotinha.rk
Awwww you did it again! Love this! Please please please give me more glimpses of my little family of 3
Awwww you did it again! Love this! Please please please give me more glimpses of my little family of 3
11/5/2024 c17 hohi.rose
omaGOD that was truly heart wrenchingly painful but this type of pain usually results in healing and closure...
kudos to the author who wrote it so beautifully, but here lies my issue: if two people feel what our fl and ml do to each other wouldn't they gravitate toward each other sooner? 19 yrs? it feels like suuuch a waste and also the pull they felt at the beginning and through the next 2 decades shows how deep their emotions run.
i can relate to them to a certain degree, i had a similar falling out with a bestie in high school and that was between friends not lovers...i had moved to another country at the time but it took us 9 years of radio silence and no contact to face each again via social media and reach out and we had a big load of bs to resolve but after a few years we are just starting to heal but it never heals the same as it was before its broken
we used to be soul sisters but alas i digress...
what i mean is when you feel so deeply for another and they stay in your mind even the most mangled issues of the bleeding heart demand resolution... i highly doubt they could last 19 years without one... i just wish the time jump was shorter. the same emotions can be portrayed in a lesser time gap
omaGOD that was truly heart wrenchingly painful but this type of pain usually results in healing and closure...
kudos to the author who wrote it so beautifully, but here lies my issue: if two people feel what our fl and ml do to each other wouldn't they gravitate toward each other sooner? 19 yrs? it feels like suuuch a waste and also the pull they felt at the beginning and through the next 2 decades shows how deep their emotions run.
i can relate to them to a certain degree, i had a similar falling out with a bestie in high school and that was between friends not lovers...i had moved to another country at the time but it took us 9 years of radio silence and no contact to face each again via social media and reach out and we had a big load of bs to resolve but after a few years we are just starting to heal but it never heals the same as it was before its broken
we used to be soul sisters but alas i digress...
what i mean is when you feel so deeply for another and they stay in your mind even the most mangled issues of the bleeding heart demand resolution... i highly doubt they could last 19 years without one... i just wish the time jump was shorter. the same emotions can be portrayed in a lesser time gap
11/4/2024 c26 agatona
What a wonderful conclusion to this adorable story.
What a cute name they gave their daughter!
So glad that even though Alice is estranged with them, she still maintains a connection , even if it’s not
too deep.
Thank you!
What a wonderful conclusion to this adorable story.
What a cute name they gave their daughter!
So glad that even though Alice is estranged with them, she still maintains a connection , even if it’s not
too deep.
Thank you!
11/2/2024 c1 2loveybunnies
I hate to start a review with this statement, but poor Bella! I know Edward was probably a nice enough guy and did care about her, but the drive for success and fame is intoxicating. Other people may be influencing or pressuring him to make the record and do the tour so his personal life doesn't matter anymore. It's really shitty to make promises you know you can't keep, no matter what your intentions are. I hope that phone call is to break up with him since it sounds like he's already blown her off, and things will not change. I can't wait for more!
I hate to start a review with this statement, but poor Bella! I know Edward was probably a nice enough guy and did care about her, but the drive for success and fame is intoxicating. Other people may be influencing or pressuring him to make the record and do the tour so his personal life doesn't matter anymore. It's really shitty to make promises you know you can't keep, no matter what your intentions are. I hope that phone call is to break up with him since it sounds like he's already blown her off, and things will not change. I can't wait for more!
11/2/2024 c26 Bevey99
This was so good. Up and down, but real. Serendipity that B opened that metal door. Thanks for writing and sharing.
This was so good. Up and down, but real. Serendipity that B opened that metal door. Thanks for writing and sharing.
11/1/2024 c26 dowlingnana
And another one bites the dust. You certainly have given B&E another HEA. Your originality always amazes me. From the way Edward proposed, to how she broke the pregnancy news, the name of their daughter, Edward and that loaf of bread, lol, right down to Leah's review; and that's just a tad bit of it all. I hope you never give up writing for us. thanx again ;o)
And another one bites the dust. You certainly have given B&E another HEA. Your originality always amazes me. From the way Edward proposed, to how she broke the pregnancy news, the name of their daughter, Edward and that loaf of bread, lol, right down to Leah's review; and that's just a tad bit of it all. I hope you never give up writing for us. thanx again ;o)
11/1/2024 c1 TwiFanfictionRecs
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10/30/2024 c26 
22beegurl13
This was such a perfect ending for these two! It makes me want to go back and read the story all over again!Thank you for writing them in such a beautiful way, and for sharing them with us. It's a wonderful story!
22beegurl13This was such a perfect ending for these two! It makes me want to go back and read the story all over again!Thank you for writing them in such a beautiful way, and for sharing them with us. It's a wonderful story!
10/29/2024 c25 beegurl13
I really have fallen in love with these two. I'm so sad we're almost done with them, but so happy they've found each other again. They're clearly meant to be together, and I love that they are together again.
I really have fallen in love with these two. I'm so sad we're almost done with them, but so happy they've found each other again. They're clearly meant to be together, and I love that they are together again.
10/28/2024 c12 debnin
You are one of my favorite Edward and Bella fiction writers. And this one I started reading yesterday and I cannot stop reading. Keep the good work please
You are one of my favorite Edward and Bella fiction writers. And this one I started reading yesterday and I cannot stop reading. Keep the good work please