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6/13 c22 Crag1991
A clone fusion of the two? That's a pretty dangerous combination.
I'm glad Naruto and Karin are going together. You don't see to many stories with them, either as friends/family or in a relationship. And they get to know about their people, so that's always a bonus.
It just shows how cowardice the other Villages are when they gang up on a single unaligned island country. Cowards and thieves.
Could Naruto heal Kimimaro? Get him to turn his allegiance from Orochimaru to someone else, and then heal him. Kimimaro is too good to not have on your side, and getting him back to 100% would be of importance.
Can't wait to see more.
A clone fusion of the two? That's a pretty dangerous combination.
I'm glad Naruto and Karin are going together. You don't see to many stories with them, either as friends/family or in a relationship. And they get to know about their people, so that's always a bonus.
It just shows how cowardice the other Villages are when they gang up on a single unaligned island country. Cowards and thieves.
Could Naruto heal Kimimaro? Get him to turn his allegiance from Orochimaru to someone else, and then heal him. Kimimaro is too good to not have on your side, and getting him back to 100% would be of importance.
Can't wait to see more.
5/10 c22 Guest
Muy buena historia
Espero el siguiente capítulo
Ojalá la actualizaran más seguido
Muy buena historia
Espero el siguiente capítulo
Ojalá la actualizaran más seguido
5/9 c15 DaHaze
Im glad you went with dark sasuke imagine reading a story without a charaters responsible for 70% of the plot thats just fluff
Im glad you went with dark sasuke imagine reading a story without a charaters responsible for 70% of the plot thats just fluff
5/4 c22 HalfmoonSilver80
The fic is good. I was hoping for Sasuke too also get a Rinnegan but your the fic is logical in way so... good.
The fic is good. I was hoping for Sasuke too also get a Rinnegan but your the fic is logical in way so... good.
4/14 c1 Ama Beck
Shisui, determined and running out of time, chose Naruto as the heir to his power. The boy's immense chakra and unwavering spirit made him the ideal candidate to carry on Shisui's mission. Little did he know, this choice would awaken a force within Naruto far beyond the Sharingan.
I've some Ideas for you and I want to collaborate with you.
Shisui, determined and running out of time, chose Naruto as the heir to his power. The boy's immense chakra and unwavering spirit made him the ideal candidate to carry on Shisui's mission. Little did he know, this choice would awaken a force within Naruto far beyond the Sharingan.
I've some Ideas for you and I want to collaborate with you.
4/10 c22 x
interesting
interesting
4/11 c22 StormyTempest
Think the Uzumaki can condense their Chakra into other constructs apart from chains? Like forming barriers directly instead of with seals, or spectral swords that can be fused into a singular form, or giving physical forms attached to illusions.
Also, if it is possible to use those personality seals on the animal path summons, would you do it? They're quite boring imo.
Think the Uzumaki can condense their Chakra into other constructs apart from chains? Like forming barriers directly instead of with seals, or spectral swords that can be fused into a singular form, or giving physical forms attached to illusions.
Also, if it is possible to use those personality seals on the animal path summons, would you do it? They're quite boring imo.
4/10 c22 liongeartech
Good chapter, but you made the bird slower than a car, literally you made it go 100 kmh/ 62 miles per hour
Good chapter, but you made the bird slower than a car, literally you made it go 100 kmh/ 62 miles per hour
4/10 c22 Flying Raijin
unlikely that all the villages were all able to find suitable hosts that mastered and synchronised with the bijuu, even less 2 perfect hosts at the same time in each village.
unlikely that all the villages were all able to find suitable hosts that mastered and synchronised with the bijuu, even less 2 perfect hosts at the same time in each village.
4/10 c12 biob1
Why nerf naruto if your giving him the rinnegan? How can naruto's control suck and sasuke have good control when they BOTH only learned the same two control exercises so far?
Why nerf naruto if your giving him the rinnegan? How can naruto's control suck and sasuke have good control when they BOTH only learned the same two control exercises so far?
4/10 c22 shapeshifter340
great new chapter cannot wait to see what happens next continue this story as soon as you can please
great new chapter cannot wait to see what happens next continue this story as soon as you can please