for Dominion Summons7/10/2024 c2 Kieffer
I know nothing about Japan Summons and am interested in where you take this. Hope to see more.
I know nothing about Japan Summons and am interested in where you take this. Hope to see more.
7/7/2024 c2 Destroyer lemark
I hope the author can fully utilize all the other series in the NHS genre or related to it, which already have more than 30 chapters published, such as "Summoning America," the original NHS story (Light Novel), "Nihonkoku Shoukan: Beyond," "Galactic Empire in the New World," "NHS Kai". "Manifest Fantasy" and the original "Gate: Jieitai." This way, they can learn from the mistakes of these stories and improve their own.
I hope they make good use of the Protoss and Zerg in the story, whether by playing a supporting role in the swift recovery of Idum after the transfer or in the nation's growth so it is not at a disadvantage against the new world. It’s clear that if they go to war with a developed country in the future, it will be difficult for them to respond to attacks appropriately.
It would be interesting to see how the ghosts infiltrate enemy countries, monitor their leaders closely, and even use psychological warfare against them.
I also hope the author doesn’t forget that the units in the Starcraft 2 campaigns are heavily nerfed for better gameplay within the game, and in reality, they should be incredibly terrifying in real-world scenarios.
I hope the author can fully utilize all the other series in the NHS genre or related to it, which already have more than 30 chapters published, such as "Summoning America," the original NHS story (Light Novel), "Nihonkoku Shoukan: Beyond," "Galactic Empire in the New World," "NHS Kai". "Manifest Fantasy" and the original "Gate: Jieitai." This way, they can learn from the mistakes of these stories and improve their own.
I hope they make good use of the Protoss and Zerg in the story, whether by playing a supporting role in the swift recovery of Idum after the transfer or in the nation's growth so it is not at a disadvantage against the new world. It’s clear that if they go to war with a developed country in the future, it will be difficult for them to respond to attacks appropriately.
It would be interesting to see how the ghosts infiltrate enemy countries, monitor their leaders closely, and even use psychological warfare against them.
I also hope the author doesn’t forget that the units in the Starcraft 2 campaigns are heavily nerfed for better gameplay within the game, and in reality, they should be incredibly terrifying in real-world scenarios.
6/29/2024 c2 THOR
GET ME BACK INTO THE FIGHT!
GET ME BACK INTO THE FIGHT!
6/26/2024 c2 Gan315
Hey man and i just finish reseach on summon japan and i say your story has massive potential and i want see more of it.I want see more melee combat because its cool and there are times guns won't u did mention on not making some chapters as a documentary but i suggest u should put one chapter to explaine what happens after 50 years at Falmart and the 3 alliances.
You have a Zerg Oc which is cool and glad to see the Zerg has taken the beauty and strength of nature as their part of u introduce some Zerg oc's like a warrior type because of the situation the Dominion in.I would love to see a Unique Ultralisk that looks like a Mythical Hercules Beetle mix with whatever nature evolution to fight other monters from the different kingdoms that Dominion mechs has trouble.
Please continue and can't wait for the next chapter.U can Pm me for ideals.
Hey man and i just finish reseach on summon japan and i say your story has massive potential and i want see more of it.I want see more melee combat because its cool and there are times guns won't u did mention on not making some chapters as a documentary but i suggest u should put one chapter to explaine what happens after 50 years at Falmart and the 3 alliances.
You have a Zerg Oc which is cool and glad to see the Zerg has taken the beauty and strength of nature as their part of u introduce some Zerg oc's like a warrior type because of the situation the Dominion in.I would love to see a Unique Ultralisk that looks like a Mythical Hercules Beetle mix with whatever nature evolution to fight other monters from the different kingdoms that Dominion mechs has trouble.
Please continue and can't wait for the next chapter.U can Pm me for ideals.
6/26/2024 c1 Gan315
OMG my favourite Gate crossover has a sequal!Overall good intro of the 2 chapters and would to see how many more things happen after the first fic.I might be out of touch of the original web novel but i suggest u expand it with your imagination and don't fully follow situation that Idunn currently having is unique and i want them to struggle and first fic is basiclly the Dominion vs the corrupt Empire which is very one sided but This sequeal is one continel size advanced city agaisnt the world surrounded by hostile rival kingdoms and powerful entities.
I would like to see u expand your own with your friends and go wild.I would love to see advanced power armoured knights fighting hostile monsters which will be epic.
OMG my favourite Gate crossover has a sequal!Overall good intro of the 2 chapters and would to see how many more things happen after the first fic.I might be out of touch of the original web novel but i suggest u expand it with your imagination and don't fully follow situation that Idunn currently having is unique and i want them to struggle and first fic is basiclly the Dominion vs the corrupt Empire which is very one sided but This sequeal is one continel size advanced city agaisnt the world surrounded by hostile rival kingdoms and powerful entities.
I would like to see u expand your own with your friends and go wild.I would love to see advanced power armoured knights fighting hostile monsters which will be epic.
6/24/2024 c2 Trigger2019
I'm still under the fog of war here and it's been months since I finished reading The Dominion has Fought There.
I'm still under the fog of war here and it's been months since I finished reading The Dominion has Fought There.
6/22/2024 c2 Saif Omar
I'd like to read more of this story but I can't say I'm not disappointed about where you started this story.
I'd have really liked to see more diplomatic and cultural exchanges between Dominion and Qua-toyne instead of jumping head first into another modern army curbstomping Medieval army. That was the reason I dropped the manga. Instead of showing us the ramifications and reactions to introducing modern technology in Qua-toyne and Japan's reaction to magic, it became another Gate with JSDF completely overpowering the Louria army.
It would've been better if you started at the same time that canon started, a few months before Louria attacks. You could've shown Qua-toyne and Dominion exchanging culture, technology and products. And then when Louria attacks Dominion could've helped their allies swiftly instead of the roundabout way that Japan helped in canon.
I'd like to read more of this story but I can't say I'm not disappointed about where you started this story.
I'd have really liked to see more diplomatic and cultural exchanges between Dominion and Qua-toyne instead of jumping head first into another modern army curbstomping Medieval army. That was the reason I dropped the manga. Instead of showing us the ramifications and reactions to introducing modern technology in Qua-toyne and Japan's reaction to magic, it became another Gate with JSDF completely overpowering the Louria army.
It would've been better if you started at the same time that canon started, a few months before Louria attacks. You could've shown Qua-toyne and Dominion exchanging culture, technology and products. And then when Louria attacks Dominion could've helped their allies swiftly instead of the roundabout way that Japan helped in canon.
6/19/2024 c2 
1Davinator61
Well, with you giving Adem a VERY-MUCH-DESERVED Early Kill Off, in order to save Moishi, and his family, from a grizzly fate, that Minoru chose to pursue at the characters' expense, as well as getting rid of a REALLY NASTY PRICK of a Secondary Character in a MOST Satisfying Manner, you've opened the way for Moishi's daughter to have a role in the story, beyond being just a hapless corpse.
1Davinator61Well, with you giving Adem a VERY-MUCH-DESERVED Early Kill Off, in order to save Moishi, and his family, from a grizzly fate, that Minoru chose to pursue at the characters' expense, as well as getting rid of a REALLY NASTY PRICK of a Secondary Character in a MOST Satisfying Manner, you've opened the way for Moishi's daughter to have a role in the story, beyond being just a hapless corpse.
6/5/2024 c1 x-x-TheBurnedMan-x-x
'Landmass getting transported because of some gods' interference'
Everybody in there:OHHH SHIITT
Wohoo, we're off to another adventure. Please continue it because if you do, I'll be looking forward to it.
'Landmass getting transported because of some gods' interference'
Everybody in there:OHHH SHIITT
Wohoo, we're off to another adventure. Please continue it because if you do, I'll be looking forward to it.