for I'm Sure Elvis Had His Bad Days Too8/11/2024 c3 reviewr
i feel u made gil abit to rude gil does have an ego but he also has a soft spot for kids example fate strange towards tine etc
i feel u made gil abit to rude gil does have an ego but he also has a soft spot for kids example fate strange towards tine etc
8/7/2024 c3 Lean
This is something I never knew I wanted until I read it. Please continue!
This is something I never knew I wanted until I read it. Please continue!
5/23/2024 c1 TTY7
You're far too sweet to me, especially when I am too lazy to log-in and review properly. XD lol. I remember this chapter from when you first showed it to me and it's still hilarious. Nani's section is easily my favorite. She's just done with everything and everyone and can't get a break.
I look forward to seeing more! My only critique is just that there are places where Gil's sections come back to the forefront without warning. The transition from Lilo's section to Gil's was especially jarring because I thought the teacher had the headache but then realized it was Gil.
Other than that, this chapter is basically perfect. I love that you finally decided to post it. I can't wait to see the rest! Best wishes and God bless you!
You're far too sweet to me, especially when I am too lazy to log-in and review properly. XD lol. I remember this chapter from when you first showed it to me and it's still hilarious. Nani's section is easily my favorite. She's just done with everything and everyone and can't get a break.
I look forward to seeing more! My only critique is just that there are places where Gil's sections come back to the forefront without warning. The transition from Lilo's section to Gil's was especially jarring because I thought the teacher had the headache but then realized it was Gil.
Other than that, this chapter is basically perfect. I love that you finally decided to post it. I can't wait to see the rest! Best wishes and God bless you!