
6/3/2024 c1 Rita01tx
Standin' by my contest review: Southern discomfort from the toxic family gatherin' to the club showdown to downright murder, not that the world will miss the likes of Jacob Black!
Standin' by my contest review: Southern discomfort from the toxic family gatherin' to the club showdown to downright murder, not that the world will miss the likes of Jacob Black!
6/2/2024 c1 lillianolivia.white
I loved this. Jake got exactly what he deserved. I cant stand him. What a lowlife douche. I loved reading East TN colloquial sayings. Thats the neck of the woods I was raised in. This was such a cool story/
I loved this. Jake got exactly what he deserved. I cant stand him. What a lowlife douche. I loved reading East TN colloquial sayings. Thats the neck of the woods I was raised in. This was such a cool story/
6/2/2024 c1
20iambeagle
So twisted! Love your dark mind and so wasn’t expecting this at all! So curious about the after, but I doubt anyone will miss Jake… haha congrats on your win!

So twisted! Love your dark mind and so wasn’t expecting this at all! So curious about the after, but I doubt anyone will miss Jake… haha congrats on your win!
6/2/2024 c1
31Rebadams7
And as much as he
Bragged
Ragged
Now he’s still
A monsters
I think not
For love
Not a thought
R

And as much as he
Bragged
Ragged
Now he’s still
A monsters
I think not
For love
Not a thought
R
6/1/2024 c1 GorGirl
Oh man! Didn't see that coming. But J shouldn't have said that about his sisters.
Oh man! Didn't see that coming. But J shouldn't have said that about his sisters.
6/1/2024 c1 SassYNoleS
LOVED!
This was amazing and I am so glad that Jacob got what he deserved and Edward was the one to deliver it to him ;)
Thanks for sharing my dear xX
LOVED!
This was amazing and I am so glad that Jacob got what he deserved and Edward was the one to deliver it to him ;)
Thanks for sharing my dear xX
6/1/2024 c1 ChristyWIX
Unexpected ending. Quite unexpected. Not sure it should’ve come to him killing him, but Jake’s mouth wouldn’t stop spewing shit. Cannot blame Knox for having an out of body brutal response. Let’s hope nobody’s ever finds him. Or if they do, they don’t find the burned items right next to him. Hoping he had the good sense to at least burn the shit far from where he dropped the body for the animals. Family was fun and quite varied. Giant family he has. Fun bunch of personalities. I’m happy he’s got quite a few working with him while he’s traveling. It helps if you can trust the people. Really liked how Bella and he talked it all out and realized where they’d gone wrong years earlier. Figured it out and are now together.
Unexpected ending. Quite unexpected. Not sure it should’ve come to him killing him, but Jake’s mouth wouldn’t stop spewing shit. Cannot blame Knox for having an out of body brutal response. Let’s hope nobody’s ever finds him. Or if they do, they don’t find the burned items right next to him. Hoping he had the good sense to at least burn the shit far from where he dropped the body for the animals. Family was fun and quite varied. Giant family he has. Fun bunch of personalities. I’m happy he’s got quite a few working with him while he’s traveling. It helps if you can trust the people. Really liked how Bella and he talked it all out and realized where they’d gone wrong years earlier. Figured it out and are now together.