
6/4/2024 c1
4Pa Trizia 88
Wow, girl! Your brain is something else. How did you come up with this one and will there be a bit more of it? Congratulations on your wins (sorry, I only skimmed over the contest news).
You never seize to impress:)

Wow, girl! Your brain is something else. How did you come up with this one and will there be a bit more of it? Congratulations on your wins (sorry, I only skimmed over the contest news).
You never seize to impress:)
6/4/2024 c1 Debs0608
Wow. Was not expecting that twist. So very satisfying. I really hope you continue the story. Thank you for writing
Wow. Was not expecting that twist. So very satisfying. I really hope you continue the story. Thank you for writing
6/3/2024 c1 agatona
From what I concluded, Edward is suffering from PTSD. But it also seems that he is a highly functioning autistic person.
It is a very relevant story. Not sure if you will expand to . But it would be interesting to find out what happens to Edward or if Bella would be able to calm him down a bit.
Thank you.
From what I concluded, Edward is suffering from PTSD. But it also seems that he is a highly functioning autistic person.
It is a very relevant story. Not sure if you will expand to . But it would be interesting to find out what happens to Edward or if Bella would be able to calm him down a bit.
Thank you.
6/3/2024 c1 Rita01tx
Still goin' with my contest review: Awww, he's human? And here I had images of Kyle Reese dancin' around my head *sniff!*
And yet no one realized it was Bella who started that house fire LOL!
Clearly, we're gonna need more back story as well as future story for our beautiful lost soul!
Still goin' with my contest review: Awww, he's human? And here I had images of Kyle Reese dancin' around my head *sniff!*
And yet no one realized it was Bella who started that house fire LOL!
Clearly, we're gonna need more back story as well as future story for our beautiful lost soul!
6/2/2024 c1 la-geologia
Ahh I'm so excited to find out this entry was yours! It was such a fun one. I really loved it! And I would love to see you continue it, if you've got more story to tell. It would be great to see what happens next - will Bella and Edward be able to navigate his illness and get a happy ending? I'm so curious!
Thanks for sharing. I always love your writing. :)
Ahh I'm so excited to find out this entry was yours! It was such a fun one. I really loved it! And I would love to see you continue it, if you've got more story to tell. It would be great to see what happens next - will Bella and Edward be able to navigate his illness and get a happy ending? I'm so curious!
Thanks for sharing. I always love your writing. :)
6/2/2024 c1 Mistydeb
Aww, that was a twist and a bit. So many coincidences, like knowing what page in the book it talks about sex and all the other weird stuff. I’m still wondering if he is as he thinks or has a MH problem, Debbie
Aww, that was a twist and a bit. So many coincidences, like knowing what page in the book it talks about sex and all the other weird stuff. I’m still wondering if he is as he thinks or has a MH problem, Debbie