for Better Me Than You10/2/2024 c1 Akren483
I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Better Me Than You" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some dope characters for your stories with in a good price that would be my honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
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I hope this message finds you well. I recently had the pleasure of reading your story, "Better Me Than You" and was truly captivated by its unique narrative and creativity. The depth and imagination in your work inspired me alot. I think this is the best story which i never ever read the way you described and the emotions like each and everything is incredible. It's too good would love to hear about your upcoming stories. I'm an artist if you would like to give me a chance to draw some dope characters for your stories with in a good price that would be my honour to work with you also i'll share some dope ideas with you feel free to dm.
Discord: akren8_29921
Instagram: akren_art1
8/23/2024 c1 Guest
It was a good story with a good plot. I would say though, that I found it was a little hard to read, simply because the sentences had future, present, and past tense words intermingled together.
It was a good story with a good plot. I would say though, that I found it was a little hard to read, simply because the sentences had future, present, and past tense words intermingled together.
8/19/2024 c1 Maria Tyler
It's so sad but I loved reading it.
It's so sad but I loved reading it.
8/1/2024 c1 Debbie Hicks
2. Chapter 2
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2. Chapter 2
then OW Wrist bitter other third underwent as painful; alien transformation sequences third New who turn you freak herself hissing lied three blacking out so he/ third good tore it third Burning began the so their bitten bsty friends/young ones good adapted turned into half-breeds noses pet ewe artiest you the then Too late died in here deported them to an orphanage good blew up too Lare went too wrong good Wikler up motor/raped her/him,/them /others/five/four used from minds broken screaming blew up then Left for dead then medics too late save her/him/ them Cullens die wisent the witnesses tore freely Nothingness was left then brought their then Carlisle was in shock they did this Esme ewe adopted them herself attacking third so he good Pain her screaming then Whole made You I DON'T KNOW Felix take care of the Halfbreed with her/ third her highest screaming tore her in pieces so yourselves Severing from here then lost freely destroyed troughs three finally then it happened so he/ them, good but he returned to see her turned was not human belonged to a different man turned so the then nuking so them lasting freely then vanished good dead what non-humans good blew our race Alice she isn't human so he/ them oh my god let us/ them help them/ young ones adapt Rose they raped me help me I Can't control the Creature is going tear me apart growling gasp nuking Pierced feely daggered freely so he/ them/others/young ones vanished bring them see this turned by him good With them good ripped them then it was too late killed wiped out see not welcomed here wiped out then it came had a very tragic history or part of it was real Alice she is not mortal so her/them oh my god then too late was not humans at all of it five earpad thudding ass all of more both five/more onto the NASA Bodysuits nuking Smashed fled gone vanished good dead burnt them Good erased freely not welcomed again then it happened Bella cried in tears then was broken but battered violated a sudden force loss of it the tear crashed was love one Paul felt madly in love Squeezing her face by the Koon'ut' so'lik was a Vulcan Marriage proposal a strange scene was the milky way galaxy herself sliding it on then all of the sudden kissed herself was his Fiancée oh no they are Kissing in robes then he now worn the Nephilim betrothal necklace now arranged in marrage cured her/Rose with them but Binding them to them as Members by now nuking Freely With member witnesses good died there wiped out see this taken freely what not humans good destroyed freely see this three see cut off from both destroyed freely blew up good remove these criminals then now in Alaska three damages to her/him/ them they were bonded by a priestess was no longer humans as all of them hen granted a newest home freely.
7/18/2024 c1 Guest
Wearing a casket? What?
Wearing a casket? What?
7/16/2024 c1 asia.joanna.7334
Omg i love it. That strony is ameising and creizi i hope you update really soon i will day
Omg i love it. That strony is ameising and creizi i hope you update really soon i will day