
5/18 c29 Guest
nice going in the demon dungeon
nice going in the demon dungeon
5/18 c29
36Star-Eyes Pendulum Dragon
I am both eager and disappointed. Eager for next chapter to see how everyone's doing and that Issei will meet Kuroka finally. Disappointed because you had Issei give up Monach's Domain, that would have powered up his Shadow Soldiers big time!
Please don't take too long for the next chapter. I think you took a week and 2 days to complete this one. Still, good luck.

I am both eager and disappointed. Eager for next chapter to see how everyone's doing and that Issei will meet Kuroka finally. Disappointed because you had Issei give up Monach's Domain, that would have powered up his Shadow Soldiers big time!
Please don't take too long for the next chapter. I think you took a week and 2 days to complete this one. Still, good luck.
5/17 c29
8T-Biggz
Nothing big, since I LOVE this story despite not really liking High Scholl DxD because of al the Plot, but made a grammar mistake early in the chapter. Issei chose to put a level into Shadow Monarch, you instead have him confirm putting it into Dragonsworn. Just a minor inconsistency I spotted while reading.

Nothing big, since I LOVE this story despite not really liking High Scholl DxD because of al the Plot, but made a grammar mistake early in the chapter. Issei chose to put a level into Shadow Monarch, you instead have him confirm putting it into Dragonsworn. Just a minor inconsistency I spotted while reading.
5/17 c29 naruto
great chapter keep it up
great chapter keep it up
5/17 c29
29Kairan1979
Thanks for the chapter.
I wonder is Ingvid's singing really affects him thanks to Sacred Gear.

Thanks for the chapter.
I wonder is Ingvid's singing really affects him thanks to Sacred Gear.
5/11 c15 Jas308
Does Sieghart come back at some point because in a early chapter it says party members will revive unless player dies
Does Sieghart come back at some point because in a early chapter it says party members will revive unless player dies