
4/5 c15 liggachad
It's cool, but it's transforming to different genre. Hope, this supernatural fighting arc will end
It's cool, but it's transforming to different genre. Hope, this supernatural fighting arc will end
3/31 c15 WilAntWar
And so the plot thickens, by a lot. Poor Hachiman, I got a good feeling he won't be able to rest easy for a while. The semi-clueless secret organization is unexpected twist. Though, I did completely forget about the sci-fi part of the sci-fi fantasy, so in hindsight it makes sense to go this route.
And so the plot thickens, by a lot. Poor Hachiman, I got a good feeling he won't be able to rest easy for a while. The semi-clueless secret organization is unexpected twist. Though, I did completely forget about the sci-fi part of the sci-fi fantasy, so in hindsight it makes sense to go this route.
3/27 c15 Hachiman fan
Ooh. Anyway. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
Ooh. Anyway. Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
3/28 c9 WilAntWar
Hi, just been rereading 1-10 because I haven't kept up and forgot a lot of stuff. Wanted to say that you manage to write Hachiman in such a perfect way for me, I love it. He feels like Hachiman, he's got just the right amount of loser with the sprinkling of cool that I love. Plus, he's just perfectly imperfect with his hypocrisy and cowardice.
While rereading there was stuff that I either completely missed or forgot, so I was wondering if I could get your input. When Zaimokuza is talking about how he could give each god in his story a special weapon was that reference to Hachiman getting his spear, like, the next chapter? I imagine the other gods also have their own weapons. Is Komachi actually suspecting Hachiman has powers of some kind or is there a different reason for her reaction to esp? Those crows are totally watching him right? Honestly, I think I had more, but I forgot.
Hi, just been rereading 1-10 because I haven't kept up and forgot a lot of stuff. Wanted to say that you manage to write Hachiman in such a perfect way for me, I love it. He feels like Hachiman, he's got just the right amount of loser with the sprinkling of cool that I love. Plus, he's just perfectly imperfect with his hypocrisy and cowardice.
While rereading there was stuff that I either completely missed or forgot, so I was wondering if I could get your input. When Zaimokuza is talking about how he could give each god in his story a special weapon was that reference to Hachiman getting his spear, like, the next chapter? I imagine the other gods also have their own weapons. Is Komachi actually suspecting Hachiman has powers of some kind or is there a different reason for her reaction to esp? Those crows are totally watching him right? Honestly, I think I had more, but I forgot.
3/9 c14 Hachiman fan
Dang, what's with people and yamcha stuff? Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
Dang, what's with people and yamcha stuff? Until next time, stay healthy and stay safe.
3/3 c14 ARK.T.Maxwell
So 8man has finally had his first proper battle! Pretty sure his without his improved strength and reflexes, the spheroid thing would have pasted him. He’s definitely going to be glad Oiz forced him to exercise and train.
I do wonder if these supernatural creatures are detected on modern security systems like cameras and such. If someone shot a whole video of Hachiman fighting the spheroid, will they just see Hachiman jumping around dodging invisible strikes? Or will the spheroid be actually seen? Or will the they just see Hachiman or the warehouse getting hit by something invisible? Interesting to think about…
As for who tazed Hachiman, well it’s either a patrolling police officer, the person who summoned/created the spheroid, or perhaps Kamiki the elder himself. Can’t really think of anyone else.
Overall that was a great chapter! Love to see the story picking up speed now! Not to mention the deeper lore of the world!
Keep up the good work!
Cheers!
ARK
So 8man has finally had his first proper battle! Pretty sure his without his improved strength and reflexes, the spheroid thing would have pasted him. He’s definitely going to be glad Oiz forced him to exercise and train.
I do wonder if these supernatural creatures are detected on modern security systems like cameras and such. If someone shot a whole video of Hachiman fighting the spheroid, will they just see Hachiman jumping around dodging invisible strikes? Or will the spheroid be actually seen? Or will the they just see Hachiman or the warehouse getting hit by something invisible? Interesting to think about…
As for who tazed Hachiman, well it’s either a patrolling police officer, the person who summoned/created the spheroid, or perhaps Kamiki the elder himself. Can’t really think of anyone else.
Overall that was a great chapter! Love to see the story picking up speed now! Not to mention the deeper lore of the world!
Keep up the good work!
Cheers!
ARK
3/3 c14
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chapter link is buggy again, the fix is by removing this from the url of the chapter link:
My-Religious-Experience-Is-Complete-Nonsense-as-I-Expected
To make the link look like this:
/s/14385760/14/

chapter link is buggy again, the fix is by removing this from the url of the chapter link:
My-Religious-Experience-Is-Complete-Nonsense-as-I-Expected
To make the link look like this:
/s/14385760/14/
3/3 c1 adamfranklin.uu
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. It would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece. I look forward to hearing more of your stories!
2/20 c13 0x66 0x6f 0x63 0x6b 0x65 0x72
emails are wonky again, didn't see an update had occurred till I checked today, nice chapter BTW.
emails are wonky again, didn't see an update had occurred till I checked today, nice chapter BTW.