for Soul Art Online5/8 c10 ImaginativeFury
Gou are missing chances here to show players at the town markets shouting names or with banners with specific words or names like they are searching for lost friends and family in the game.
I mean Veena could also hire people to post player made pamflets with keywords that her daughter and Grayfia could understand. It adds a little bit realism to the story and just takes a couple of extra words per chapter.
Right now it is as if nobody is acyually bothering to look for each other and that is very unrealistic.
Gou are missing chances here to show players at the town markets shouting names or with banners with specific words or names like they are searching for lost friends and family in the game.
I mean Veena could also hire people to post player made pamflets with keywords that her daughter and Grayfia could understand. It adds a little bit realism to the story and just takes a couple of extra words per chapter.
Right now it is as if nobody is acyually bothering to look for each other and that is very unrealistic.
5/7 c5 ImaginativeFury
dies for real? makes no sense. in an earlier chapter you mentioned how the Game Mastwr mentioned that he removed the dying part since that would be lame for him. And now you mention here that they do die for real?
dies for real? makes no sense. in an earlier chapter you mentioned how the Game Mastwr mentioned that he removed the dying part since that would be lame for him. And now you mention here that they do die for real?
5/1 c27 Kouteikuro
The girl is definitely Lavinia.
Although I was hoping it would be Arthas and the girls who saved them, I want to see a reunion between some of the other parties. Gasper and Veena is good, but you're putting so much emphasis on Akeno and Rias that I thought they'd be the first to reunite with Arthas and company.
The girl is definitely Lavinia.
Although I was hoping it would be Arthas and the girls who saved them, I want to see a reunion between some of the other parties. Gasper and Veena is good, but you're putting so much emphasis on Akeno and Rias that I thought they'd be the first to reunite with Arthas and company.
5/1 c27 light world
is it levinia?
is it levinia?
5/1 c27 Guest
Now that things are cleared up on who kuroka is and they found gasper there that much closer to finding everyone who’s trapped
Now that things are cleared up on who kuroka is and they found gasper there that much closer to finding everyone who’s trapped
5/1 c27 Guest
guess Jaina and Antinodas has entered the stage
guess Jaina and Antinodas has entered the stage
5/1 c27 Fanboy101
Please update the Drawn to power and bune farmer
Please update the Drawn to power and bune farmer
15/1 c27 insanecoop
I personally feel like this is slowing down to much, that the forward momentum has stalled.
I personally feel like this is slowing down to much, that the forward momentum has stalled.