for Soul Art Online9/2/2024 c11 Shinixy
This is really good. I think I like this story the most from what you’ve written.
This is really good. I think I like this story the most from what you’ve written.
9/2/2024 c3 St Pat
The character development of MC is forced and does not feel natural/gradual. He is described as someone with suffering with condition which brings him closer to Sociopath. Yet, he is apologetic/docile in social matter. His getting along suddenly with someone whose background is unknown and suspicious is forced too. Given how this development is going on, it wont be long before MC aquires Harem and turns out to be Hero/Good Guy.
The character development of MC is forced and does not feel natural/gradual. He is described as someone with suffering with condition which brings him closer to Sociopath. Yet, he is apologetic/docile in social matter. His getting along suddenly with someone whose background is unknown and suspicious is forced too. Given how this development is going on, it wont be long before MC aquires Harem and turns out to be Hero/Good Guy.
9/2/2024 c2 St Pat
Is this Harem fanfic? If yes, then please Tag/Mark/describe it as one in summary. So, people like me can avoid it.
Is this Harem fanfic? If yes, then please Tag/Mark/describe it as one in summary. So, people like me can avoid it.
9/2/2024 c2 St Pat
That was dissapointing. Arthas's secret of him being reincarnator found out by Game Master was truly dissapointing. Given how careless the Game Master is, i was expecting him to be idiot/ignorant.
That was dissapointing. Arthas's secret of him being reincarnator found out by Game Master was truly dissapointing. Given how careless the Game Master is, i was expecting him to be idiot/ignorant.
9/2/2024 c1 St Pat
Cringe after kill acting. Killing someone and acting like it bothered you afterwards is simply sus. He knows reality, hen why act so sus. It kill or be killed. Accept reality and purge the world for EXP!
Cringe after kill acting. Killing someone and acting like it bothered you afterwards is simply sus. He knows reality, hen why act so sus. It kill or be killed. Accept reality and purge the world for EXP!
8/31/2024 c11 Copycat981
Very nice sory so far. He s most definitely going to be getting into a relationship with Venelana but i wonder if he will also be i a relationship with Rias and her peerage. Then there is Grayfia and Kuroka and if he will start one with them as well.
Very nice sory so far. He s most definitely going to be getting into a relationship with Venelana but i wonder if he will also be i a relationship with Rias and her peerage. Then there is Grayfia and Kuroka and if he will start one with them as well.
8/31/2024 c11 Crywolf178
Pretty cool story so far, I love how you created this game world and don’t just have the creator being some crazy coder and instead of just some super bored crazy strong reincarnator.
I was half expecting the MC to taut Dwain by calling him maidenless or something and unlocking another perk from the death word of Elden ring.
Pretty cool story so far, I love how you created this game world and don’t just have the creator being some crazy coder and instead of just some super bored crazy strong reincarnator.
I was half expecting the MC to taut Dwain by calling him maidenless or something and unlocking another perk from the death word of Elden ring.
8/30/2024 c11 B127
Good to see this have its own Story Thread. Also good to see Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū introduced to the story
Good to see this have its own Story Thread. Also good to see Hiten Mitsurugi-ryū introduced to the story
8/30/2024 c11 demissedwaifu
Well, I just binged through the entire thing, and as expected from you the quality was top tier,.I loved it!, I wasn't sure if Shiroe was the one from log horizon but I was right, yay.
I'm more surprised about our dear mc reaction to Venelana bomb (yes, he's a transmigrator and knowns about DxD) he took it well, as expected, everything has been a joy to read, I felt like I was truly reading a top tier LN, and the world building? AMAZING!, I know you just dumped so many chapters but I truly can't wait for the next ones, much love! 333
Well, I just binged through the entire thing, and as expected from you the quality was top tier,.I loved it!, I wasn't sure if Shiroe was the one from log horizon but I was right, yay.
I'm more surprised about our dear mc reaction to Venelana bomb (yes, he's a transmigrator and knowns about DxD) he took it well, as expected, everything has been a joy to read, I felt like I was truly reading a top tier LN, and the world building? AMAZING!, I know you just dumped so many chapters but I truly can't wait for the next ones, much love! 333
8/30/2024 c11 BurntWang
A mass release of such a well written work, you are truly spoiling us crossedge. I love the humor and all the references
A mass release of such a well written work, you are truly spoiling us crossedge. I love the humor and all the references
8/29/2024 c5 sid99
...still a decent story but the MC is really becoming the anchor that is dragging it down...ill keep trying to read it, cause i love your stories but the MC needs to become something else...also, since when did he have a major sense of justice? that came out of nowhere and did not fit the description from the beginning.
...still a decent story but the MC is really becoming the anchor that is dragging it down...ill keep trying to read it, cause i love your stories but the MC needs to become something else...also, since when did he have a major sense of justice? that came out of nowhere and did not fit the description from the beginning.