for The X-Factor1/12 c1 XxWildHeartXIIIxX
Nice story, looking forward to more…also have you ever played warframes? Might want to look into Gauss and volt for some inspiration when it comes to speed related powers…
Nice story, looking forward to more…also have you ever played warframes? Might want to look into Gauss and volt for some inspiration when it comes to speed related powers…
1/11 c1 Chue19
Interesting though he power seems similar to quicksliver so not really that powerful and Minato being a teleporter makes sense
Interesting though he power seems similar to quicksliver so not really that powerful and Minato being a teleporter makes sense
11/20/2024 c1 
55kira444
I can't wait for more! We don't get a lot of decent looking Naruto/x-men stories on this site and this is looking promising.
55kira444I can't wait for more! We don't get a lot of decent looking Naruto/x-men stories on this site and this is looking promising.
10/14/2024 c1 Guest
I like it
I like it
10/10/2024 c1 naedinefebruary2.0
Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, The X-Factor, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
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Wassup,
Having read your absorbing Story, The X-Factor, I found many things to admire in the weighty narrative and imaginative flair. Your storytelling is truly remarkable, and I really do think that it can reach a wider audience as a comic. I'm a commission artist with broad experience in converting literature into striking comic format. I will be proud to reformat your story into this dynamic format. Let me just take you through some of my portfolio samples of previous works. Your literature is a masterpiece, and as goes the proverb, A comic can capture the essence of the story, so that would add more power to your literature. I look forward to the possibility of working together. As I am open to commission I'd really appreciate that if you could commission me for this. Do message me on discord or twitter with your story name.
Here is my Contacts
discord : naedinefebruary
Twitter : naedinefebruary
Instagram: naedinefebruary
Hope to hear back from you soon.
9/30/2024 c1 Crywolf178
I liked how you snuck in the names of various speedsters in the story such as Flash, kid flash, impulse and Godspeed.
I’m looking forward to more of this story, people never seem to take the flash’s powers seriously as writers have to constantly nerf him or he would never struggle against non speedsters or godlike beings.
I mean he literally can just chill mid battle for relatively eternity to make a plan if needed. He has gone from not using his powers to being able to activate them in the space of far far less than aere second. I mean if I remember correctly he was shot in the back by a sniper without hearing the sound or seeing anything the exact moment he felt the bullet touch him he was able to move away from it before it could even pierce his skin.
To say nothing of the time travel aspects nor his ability to absorb kinetic energy from people and things to basically freeze them in place. I mean he’s touched shards of metal from explosions and bullets just casually to drain all energy from them leaving them to just drop where they lie and even freeze people permanently in time.
The fact that writers have him somehow not be able to react to a normal human throwing marbles or freezing the floor under him making him slip is outrageous. If he was that inept at reacting at super speed that he couldn’t see a normal human make those kinds of hazards he would constantly be running into random people on the street as they walked or drove past.
I liked how you snuck in the names of various speedsters in the story such as Flash, kid flash, impulse and Godspeed.
I’m looking forward to more of this story, people never seem to take the flash’s powers seriously as writers have to constantly nerf him or he would never struggle against non speedsters or godlike beings.
I mean he literally can just chill mid battle for relatively eternity to make a plan if needed. He has gone from not using his powers to being able to activate them in the space of far far less than aere second. I mean if I remember correctly he was shot in the back by a sniper without hearing the sound or seeing anything the exact moment he felt the bullet touch him he was able to move away from it before it could even pierce his skin.
To say nothing of the time travel aspects nor his ability to absorb kinetic energy from people and things to basically freeze them in place. I mean he’s touched shards of metal from explosions and bullets just casually to drain all energy from them leaving them to just drop where they lie and even freeze people permanently in time.
The fact that writers have him somehow not be able to react to a normal human throwing marbles or freezing the floor under him making him slip is outrageous. If he was that inept at reacting at super speed that he couldn’t see a normal human make those kinds of hazards he would constantly be running into random people on the street as they walked or drove past.
9/27/2024 c1 Guest
Not Fate But Destiny needs your attention ASAP
Not Fate But Destiny needs your attention ASAP
9/27/2024 c1 Yeetfam79
This looks so good and i love how you've actually made his speed useful instead of situationary like with the flash lmao. Cant wait for the next updates.
This looks so good and i love how you've actually made his speed useful instead of situationary like with the flash lmao. Cant wait for the next updates.
9/26/2024 c1 WarzPark
it would have been better if naruto had Red Or Black Lightning it would have look much better well looking forward to your progress
it would have been better if naruto had Red Or Black Lightning it would have look much better well looking forward to your progress
9/17/2024 c1 Borello
interesting idea
interesting idea
9/17/2024 c1 72Helghy
Great start. Definitely looking forward to more, and a very interesting selection for his mutant ability. Keep up the good work.
72HelghyGreat start. Definitely looking forward to more, and a very interesting selection for his mutant ability. Keep up the good work.
9/16/2024 c1 FoxSage001
Nice first chat! I can’t wait to see where this goes. By the way, I think it would be cool as Naruto went to Outer space more than just a one off thing. Maybe they can even create a Moonbase? Also, having rivals in Quicksilver and the silver surfer would be pretty cool. The races with quicksilver across the world and silver surfer throughout solar systems would be legendary. Quicksilver and Naruto could be friends/enemies because Wanda likes Naruto because he helped her out/saved her so she flirts with him and quicksilver hates that but he also thinks that Naruto a pretty cool guy so he can’t truly hate him.
Nice first chat! I can’t wait to see where this goes. By the way, I think it would be cool as Naruto went to Outer space more than just a one off thing. Maybe they can even create a Moonbase? Also, having rivals in Quicksilver and the silver surfer would be pretty cool. The races with quicksilver across the world and silver surfer throughout solar systems would be legendary. Quicksilver and Naruto could be friends/enemies because Wanda likes Naruto because he helped her out/saved her so she flirts with him and quicksilver hates that but he also thinks that Naruto a pretty cool guy so he can’t truly hate him.
9/16/2024 c1 1SH-Speccy
Not to be crude or anything, but I personally can't wait for Naruto to score when he's old enough. Because you know how awkward and clumsy he could potentially be during his first time(Likely with Jean, Rogue or even Kitty I'd guess) and I'll probably fall off my chair laughing if that happens!
1SH-SpeccyNot to be crude or anything, but I personally can't wait for Naruto to score when he's old enough. Because you know how awkward and clumsy he could potentially be during his first time(Likely with Jean, Rogue or even Kitty I'd guess) and I'll probably fall off my chair laughing if that happens!