for The Winter Wizard5/14 c6 fridgeraiderz
I was hoping for a intelligent Harry just for him to shout hey instead of just sneak attacking
I was hoping for a intelligent Harry just for him to shout hey instead of just sneak attacking
5/13 c19 
3kyjori
Jon is written so fucking pathetically, sometimes I like him written out of the story. Reminds me too much of. Alstyne bitch from japanese anime main protagonists. Holy shit. Cry some more you little girl.
3kyjoriJon is written so fucking pathetically, sometimes I like him written out of the story. Reminds me too much of. Alstyne bitch from japanese anime main protagonists. Holy shit. Cry some more you little girl.
5/8 c2 kerikheuer.01
they definitely learned episkey in the books. good for small cuts like a knife stab
they definitely learned episkey in the books. good for small cuts like a knife stab
5/5 c13 juan.gar
dude... i dont understand why harry didnt say to lord stark that there were more people on the tower that just bran, he had evidence that he was pushed
dude... i dont understand why harry didnt say to lord stark that there were more people on the tower that just bran, he had evidence that he was pushed
4/28 c30 kosmas100
i dont recall any interactions with sansa. oh well i ll take it as the author forgot about it
i dont recall any interactions with sansa. oh well i ll take it as the author forgot about it
4/28 c17 kosmas100
whats with your obsesion with eyes looking over and was nice but this is the 3rd or 4rth time now
whats with your obsesion with eyes looking over and was nice but this is the 3rd or 4rth time now
4/27 c30 Blaze1992
I just hope we they meet the treat each other equally not sub or dom like so many other stories do.
I just hope we they meet the treat each other equally not sub or dom like so many other stories do.
4/20 c30 insanecoop
He owes the Starks more than he can ever repay huh.
I'd think it was the other way around.
Save a guards daughter, saving a Stark daughter, saving a Stark son, saves a daughter again from striking a prince, save both Stark daughters...
For room and board for a couple of months...
Yea that math doesn't add up.
So kinda silly to say such a thing.
He owes the Starks more than he can ever repay huh.
I'd think it was the other way around.
Save a guards daughter, saving a Stark daughter, saving a Stark son, saves a daughter again from striking a prince, save both Stark daughters...
For room and board for a couple of months...
Yea that math doesn't add up.
So kinda silly to say such a thing.
4/20 c30 5Monkey D. Conan
Nicely done. Curious how long it will be before Jon shows signs of his abilities and if they will only be the vanilla warging or if Harry will be able to teach jon and possibly Dany more. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
5Monkey D. ConanNicely done. Curious how long it will be before Jon shows signs of his abilities and if they will only be the vanilla warging or if Harry will be able to teach jon and possibly Dany more. Excellent work as always! Can’t wait for more!
4/20 c30 Hawkmoon888
The story is getting somewhat confusing since I did a reread recently. Mostly when characters talk about past events in the early chapters. For example the situation with Arya had a single deserter and not 3 bandits.
Also I didn't really see much interactions between Harry and Sansa. He was mostly keeping an eye on Arya (why he was asked to join in the water dancing lessons). Unless I missed something the only interactions with Sansa "on screen" were the "eye spy" game and the incident with Joffrey where he stopped the situation from escalating so the wolves were alive.
The story is getting somewhat confusing since I did a reread recently. Mostly when characters talk about past events in the early chapters. For example the situation with Arya had a single deserter and not 3 bandits.
Also I didn't really see much interactions between Harry and Sansa. He was mostly keeping an eye on Arya (why he was asked to join in the water dancing lessons). Unless I missed something the only interactions with Sansa "on screen" were the "eye spy" game and the incident with Joffrey where he stopped the situation from escalating so the wolves were alive.