for Age of the Great Dragon5/13 c11 DarthEmrys
While I will say that the chapter is good, and I liled the time skips to get back to Westetos, this whole chapter said nothing and everything all at once.
I admire your writing, and I can say, from my interaction with your stories, that this was not the standard I was familiar with from The Legacy of House Ordo.
Nonetheless, a good chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
While I will say that the chapter is good, and I liled the time skips to get back to Westetos, this whole chapter said nothing and everything all at once.
I admire your writing, and I can say, from my interaction with your stories, that this was not the standard I was familiar with from The Legacy of House Ordo.
Nonetheless, a good chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
5/11 c11 Shadow Wolf 15846
wow! That's all I can really say, your story has me on the edge of my seat every time you post a new chapter! I'm really looking forward to what you will right next.
wow! That's all I can really say, your story has me on the edge of my seat every time you post a new chapter! I'm really looking forward to what you will right next.
5/8 c11 
11skyjadeprincess
Oh my God. I have no words. Aerys and Cersei together are like Joffrey and Ramsay Bolton on steroids. Please make sure they never reproduce. I shudder to think what kind of children they would have. I know Cersei supposedly came up with methods to make sure she never conceived a child, but you never know. At this rate, there won't be any Westeros for Harry to rule, much less recognize. Cersei was stupid enough to send the "Bloodmen" out there to do her bidding. This is just as stupid as her allowing the Faith to revive the Faith Militant in canon. Well, Rhaegar and Elia are married. I just hope and pray that Elia and her children don't suffer the same fates as they do in the books and the show. Uh-oh, Harry and company are heading to Asshai? Are they going to proclaim him the Azor Ahai reborn, or are they going to claim his future son is? Keep his wives and unborn children away from them. After all, there is "Power in King's Blood" as Melisandre would say and they are way too fond of burning people alive.
11skyjadeprincessOh my God. I have no words. Aerys and Cersei together are like Joffrey and Ramsay Bolton on steroids. Please make sure they never reproduce. I shudder to think what kind of children they would have. I know Cersei supposedly came up with methods to make sure she never conceived a child, but you never know. At this rate, there won't be any Westeros for Harry to rule, much less recognize. Cersei was stupid enough to send the "Bloodmen" out there to do her bidding. This is just as stupid as her allowing the Faith to revive the Faith Militant in canon. Well, Rhaegar and Elia are married. I just hope and pray that Elia and her children don't suffer the same fates as they do in the books and the show. Uh-oh, Harry and company are heading to Asshai? Are they going to proclaim him the Azor Ahai reborn, or are they going to claim his future son is? Keep his wives and unborn children away from them. After all, there is "Power in King's Blood" as Melisandre would say and they are way too fond of burning people alive.
5/6 c6 1Pont1ac-Band1t
My only issue with eventing gunpowder in game of thrones fictions is that the moment it becomes widespread, drsgons become effectively obselete. Its only a matter of time before people start shooting them out of the sky.
1Pont1ac-Band1tMy only issue with eventing gunpowder in game of thrones fictions is that the moment it becomes widespread, drsgons become effectively obselete. Its only a matter of time before people start shooting them out of the sky.
5/6 c11 Immaterium
Jolly good, and here I was sadly beginning to think they are already heading back to the boiling cauldron that is Westeros without visiting Asshai - I have been very much looking forward to that. Looks like I will not be disappointed after all :-)
Jolly good, and here I was sadly beginning to think they are already heading back to the boiling cauldron that is Westeros without visiting Asshai - I have been very much looking forward to that. Looks like I will not be disappointed after all :-)
5/4 c11 Blaze1992
. . . She has fully gone into the deep end here, Jon likely won't have to do anything the commoners at this rate might kill those two themselves
. . . She has fully gone into the deep end here, Jon likely won't have to do anything the commoners at this rate might kill those two themselves
5/3 c11 6WolfbrotherTitan
I get that sending them off to Asshai let’s Westeros get worse and gives you a chance to visit pretty much the whole world except maybe New Ghis, or extremely far off places like Ibben, but is there a reason they don’t just kill the Red Priests? Yes, if that got out, it might be bad for Haeron, and with magic involved it could get out no matter how careful Haeron was, but I guess I’m just not sure how big of a deal the Red Priests are. At any rate, it looked like we’d be getting to Westeros to deal with Aerys and Cersei, and can I just say how horrible all that is? Anyway, the bit with Jon Arryn is interesting, it really makes me wonder if you’re going for some level of rebellion in spite of how strong Haeron is, but Robert is being Robert, so unless you have his parents disinherit him in favor of Stannis…actually, that could work, and he’s closer to Lyanna’s age, but then Robert becomes a huge problem…well, at least this Stannis might be a bit more charismatic since he didn’t witness his parents death and hasn’t spent years resenting his older brother. He and Lyanna might even get along if Stannis can let her be herself. Okay, I’m done with my thoughts, now I’ll be eagerly awaiting your next chapters to see where you’ll take this.
P.S. I like Tywin’s new wife too.
6WolfbrotherTitanI get that sending them off to Asshai let’s Westeros get worse and gives you a chance to visit pretty much the whole world except maybe New Ghis, or extremely far off places like Ibben, but is there a reason they don’t just kill the Red Priests? Yes, if that got out, it might be bad for Haeron, and with magic involved it could get out no matter how careful Haeron was, but I guess I’m just not sure how big of a deal the Red Priests are. At any rate, it looked like we’d be getting to Westeros to deal with Aerys and Cersei, and can I just say how horrible all that is? Anyway, the bit with Jon Arryn is interesting, it really makes me wonder if you’re going for some level of rebellion in spite of how strong Haeron is, but Robert is being Robert, so unless you have his parents disinherit him in favor of Stannis…actually, that could work, and he’s closer to Lyanna’s age, but then Robert becomes a huge problem…well, at least this Stannis might be a bit more charismatic since he didn’t witness his parents death and hasn’t spent years resenting his older brother. He and Lyanna might even get along if Stannis can let her be herself. Okay, I’m done with my thoughts, now I’ll be eagerly awaiting your next chapters to see where you’ll take this.
P.S. I like Tywin’s new wife too.
5/2 c11 ABadRomCom
I've noticed this entire ark is repetition. Haeron arrives at a new port; the local lord makes a show of greeting him; tells him about their problems; and offers a deal if Haeron solves the problem; Haeron immediately agrees than solves the problem. Rinse and repeat it's gotten old and I'm looking forward to the actual plot when we get back to Westeros because as of now I'm over thislong-windedd adventure.
I've noticed this entire ark is repetition. Haeron arrives at a new port; the local lord makes a show of greeting him; tells him about their problems; and offers a deal if Haeron solves the problem; Haeron immediately agrees than solves the problem. Rinse and repeat it's gotten old and I'm looking forward to the actual plot when we get back to Westeros because as of now I'm over thislong-windedd adventure.
5/2 c11 2AvidReader2425
Thank you very much for another excellence and very entertaining chapter. They are certainly gathering quite a collection of things to start selling, and a hell of a lot of gold lol. Also, hopefully once they are out to see, they can transfigure or conjure someone lead, and then toss those crazy Fanatical red priests deep into the sea. Also, I wonder if any of them have the knowledge or if there is some form of recreation of various Asian pastes that are absolutely delicious? Things like red and white miso, red, yellow, and green curry paste, and maybe something along the lines of Gochujang.
Another thing that could be fun and interesting is using some of those mystical metals they have access to, and when their dragons are fully grown, or close to it, make some armor for the dragons. Something similar you can find in Eragon, imbued with a few protective enchantments, and using runes of some kind for the feather light charm. No ballista arrows are going to get their dragons that way.
Anyway, once again, thanks for the enjoyable chapter. Hope you’re doing well.
2AvidReader2425Thank you very much for another excellence and very entertaining chapter. They are certainly gathering quite a collection of things to start selling, and a hell of a lot of gold lol. Also, hopefully once they are out to see, they can transfigure or conjure someone lead, and then toss those crazy Fanatical red priests deep into the sea. Also, I wonder if any of them have the knowledge or if there is some form of recreation of various Asian pastes that are absolutely delicious? Things like red and white miso, red, yellow, and green curry paste, and maybe something along the lines of Gochujang.
Another thing that could be fun and interesting is using some of those mystical metals they have access to, and when their dragons are fully grown, or close to it, make some armor for the dragons. Something similar you can find in Eragon, imbued with a few protective enchantments, and using runes of some kind for the feather light charm. No ballista arrows are going to get their dragons that way.
Anyway, once again, thanks for the enjoyable chapter. Hope you’re doing well.
5/2 c11 Regtech
Harrys group feels so poorly guarded. Where is the lookout? Given rheir shio size and enemies, shouldnt they have multiple spotters? Because this feels so forced.
Also, the information moves too fast or you need to mention how long it has been
Harrys group feels so poorly guarded. Where is the lookout? Given rheir shio size and enemies, shouldnt they have multiple spotters? Because this feels so forced.
Also, the information moves too fast or you need to mention how long it has been
5/2 c11 LrLlak
Thanks for writing. Overall, I have been enjoying the story, but do have some concerns about this upcoming adventure.
I don't want to try to tell you what to write, but this trip to Asshai just feels ridiculous and forced. The red priests have burned people alive. They gave up all rights to living when they murdered innocent people. Kill them and move on. Even if Harry returns them to Asshai, they'll just go somewhere else and kill more innocent people. He should end the problem here and now rather than wasting months going out of their way.
Thanks again for sharing your great work with all of us!
Thanks for writing. Overall, I have been enjoying the story, but do have some concerns about this upcoming adventure.
I don't want to try to tell you what to write, but this trip to Asshai just feels ridiculous and forced. The red priests have burned people alive. They gave up all rights to living when they murdered innocent people. Kill them and move on. Even if Harry returns them to Asshai, they'll just go somewhere else and kill more innocent people. He should end the problem here and now rather than wasting months going out of their way.
Thanks again for sharing your great work with all of us!
5/2 c11 R
For fucks sake man, this is starting to become ridiculous. This oddesey shit is becoming REALLY tired you manufacture a serious problem at every port that just keeps pushing actual plot development further and further away, and each of them become incresingly more stupid and pointless as harry grows in power and resources. Either finish fapping, or put you dick away.
The red priests are not gods, they may not even have all that much power, so why the hell does the local leader or even Harry not simply kill them and move on to matters of actual importance?
For fucks sake man, this is starting to become ridiculous. This oddesey shit is becoming REALLY tired you manufacture a serious problem at every port that just keeps pushing actual plot development further and further away, and each of them become incresingly more stupid and pointless as harry grows in power and resources. Either finish fapping, or put you dick away.
The red priests are not gods, they may not even have all that much power, so why the hell does the local leader or even Harry not simply kill them and move on to matters of actual importance?
5/2 c11 Mark1
Damn, Cersei has really gone bonkers! A true Nutcase! I am glad Ned is truly seeing what kind of person Robert Baratheon is! A selfish pig who loves no one but himself. Jon Arryn is really Senile if he is so blind not to see Robert for what he is becoming and still insists on putting him on the iron throne.
Damn, Cersei has really gone bonkers! A true Nutcase! I am glad Ned is truly seeing what kind of person Robert Baratheon is! A selfish pig who loves no one but himself. Jon Arryn is really Senile if he is so blind not to see Robert for what he is becoming and still insists on putting him on the iron throne.
5/2 c11 keeperofthevoid
Great story and I'm really enjoying it but this whike extended trip away from Westeros seems to be gettinf forced at this point, looking forward to something new soon
Great story and I'm really enjoying it but this whike extended trip away from Westeros seems to be gettinf forced at this point, looking forward to something new soon