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5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Apparently just stumbled upon this chapter up,oad before being notified, but it is a beautiful chapter. Love how a phoenix was gifted to Banner. They'd be the perfect combo.
5Planar-Walking-EntertainmentApparently just stumbled upon this chapter up,oad before being notified, but it is a beautiful chapter. Love how a phoenix was gifted to Banner. They'd be the perfect combo.
5/15 c18 louvedor09
j'aime cette histoire, j'apprécie le fait que malgré qu'il soit fort il continue toujours d'apprendre, de perfectionner, mais surtout de s'émerveiller de chaque chose même les plus simple.
j'aime cette histoire, j'apprécie le fait que malgré qu'il soit fort il continue toujours d'apprendre, de perfectionner, mais surtout de s'émerveiller de chaque chose même les plus simple.
5/13 c63 Ep
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
5/12 c63 3WhiteElfElder
That is not quite the same as gaining control, but it is a step in the right direction. I wonder how the Hulk would respond to Solace when he is out?
3WhiteElfElderThat is not quite the same as gaining control, but it is a step in the right direction. I wonder how the Hulk would respond to Solace when he is out?
5/10 c62 Ep
Sympa
Bonne continuation
Sympa
Bonne continuation
5/7 c15 Guest
this reads like ai wrote it
this reads like ai wrote it
5/9 c62 WhiteElfElder
Loki is an idiot and he is going to get his arse handed to him. I just wonder if it will be Hela or if it will be Harry? Personally, I would love for it to be Harry to show Loki that he is not the God of Magic as he thinks.
Loki is an idiot and he is going to get his arse handed to him. I just wonder if it will be Hela or if it will be Harry? Personally, I would love for it to be Harry to show Loki that he is not the God of Magic as he thinks.
5/6 c56 Guest
sigh guess ill read so0mething else ... i hate crossover story's that seem to do every thing they can to stick to main story line ... if i wanted that i read the original story in first place
sigh guess ill read so0mething else ... i hate crossover story's that seem to do every thing they can to stick to main story line ... if i wanted that i read the original story in first place
5/7 c1 3SamIthuriel
Was this writting with A.I.? If so, what percentage is? If not, my apologies for any unintentional offense to your work.
3SamIthurielWas this writting with A.I.? If so, what percentage is? If not, my apologies for any unintentional offense to your work.
5/6 c61 5Planar-Walking-Entertainment
Bet odin's going to be ticked and confused. Is there another Hela in the Universe Harry and Hela joined, or did Hela's arrival overwrite the Hela that was sealed? If first, going to be major confusion involved. If Latter, or worse, wasn't there in the first place (history sealed that named her dead)... there's going to be some angry parents running around.
My personal opinionated bet is on the former. The previous chapter wouldn't be true if Hela hadn't been mentioned from Heimdall's pov.
5Planar-Walking-EntertainmentBet odin's going to be ticked and confused. Is there another Hela in the Universe Harry and Hela joined, or did Hela's arrival overwrite the Hela that was sealed? If first, going to be major confusion involved. If Latter, or worse, wasn't there in the first place (history sealed that named her dead)... there's going to be some angry parents running around.
My personal opinionated bet is on the former. The previous chapter wouldn't be true if Hela hadn't been mentioned from Heimdall's pov.
5/6 c61 3WhiteElfElder
Well, if a certain watcher was able to read lips or hear then Hela's identity is completely out of the bag now.
3WhiteElfElderWell, if a certain watcher was able to read lips or hear then Hela's identity is completely out of the bag now.
5/4 c60 Ep
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
Excellent
Merci pour la lecture
5/4 c53 Blackholelord
Author's Note: Enjoying the story?
I was enjoying it in the beginning, but you went making it OP type of story, it was okay, but then shifting to dimensional travel, which was off to say the least, but after you decided to take Harry Potter and remove the important element from his character, magic. You made him become Spider-Man and even continue to Iron Man film he isn't there, they are acting like background characters.
I had hoped that the story would eventually lead to the films, with Harry using magic with Hela at his side, but what I found the primary characters becoming secondary characters in their own story, even then the world happening around them was still in the background.
So, am I enjoying this? The answer is no. I started like a great read, but you decided to jump around with different ideas, and I had followed the story for a while as you seen from this chapter posting of this review. The point that left me struggling to even bother to even reading as it was no longer what I wanted, was Harry becoming Spider-Man. So, I am leaving this story behind and saying goodbye.
Author's Note: Enjoying the story?
I was enjoying it in the beginning, but you went making it OP type of story, it was okay, but then shifting to dimensional travel, which was off to say the least, but after you decided to take Harry Potter and remove the important element from his character, magic. You made him become Spider-Man and even continue to Iron Man film he isn't there, they are acting like background characters.
I had hoped that the story would eventually lead to the films, with Harry using magic with Hela at his side, but what I found the primary characters becoming secondary characters in their own story, even then the world happening around them was still in the background.
So, am I enjoying this? The answer is no. I started like a great read, but you decided to jump around with different ideas, and I had followed the story for a while as you seen from this chapter posting of this review. The point that left me struggling to even bother to even reading as it was no longer what I wanted, was Harry becoming Spider-Man. So, I am leaving this story behind and saying goodbye.
5/4 c1 Yarpen890
This story lost its spark after just a few opening chapters. Harry and Hela have lived so many years and are so powerful that they had to specifically nerf themselves in order to continue travelling the multiverse. And they have had some kind of dilemma almost every chapter for a long time.
This story lost its spark after just a few opening chapters. Harry and Hela have lived so many years and are so powerful that they had to specifically nerf themselves in order to continue travelling the multiverse. And they have had some kind of dilemma almost every chapter for a long time.