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91TMI Fairy
Mandalorians? Amoral, ruithless but efficient murders for hire. Make yakuza look like schoolchildren.
"Obi smiled and leaned upon the desk" - my mind went into the gutter and had her flash her decolettage ...
91TMI FairyMandalorians? Amoral, ruithless but efficient murders for hire. Make yakuza look like schoolchildren.
"Obi smiled and leaned upon the desk" - my mind went into the gutter and had her flash her decolettage ...
1/9 c11 Romodhg
Whoo! I love this fic. My favorite parts are where you explore her previous abilitys and the tyana perspective viewing of the galixy far away. Excited to see if tyana gets inducted into the mando ways. Its the best when inserts to the universe mix and match the best the universe has to offer of both trainibg and gear.
Whoo! I love this fic. My favorite parts are where you explore her previous abilitys and the tyana perspective viewing of the galixy far away. Excited to see if tyana gets inducted into the mando ways. Its the best when inserts to the universe mix and match the best the universe has to offer of both trainibg and gear.
1/9 c11 8Maxxus Herald
So, I noticed that you never actually mention what the gift Tanya gave to Obi-Wan is. Since Obi's bangs cover it up, is it something that goes on the forehead? Some sort of sci-fi/fantasy reusable fake tattoo? Some sort of colored hair extension? I assume it's spider or web shaped, based on the clan the Nightsister was from?
I would have guessed some sort of brow piercing, but I have no idea how long you've made Obi-Wan's hair as it's been a while since it was mentioned. Probably an issue of reading chapters as they update rather than your writing itself, but something to look in to. Anyway, as a result my mental image doesn't have her bangs reaching her brow, so a brow piercing didn't cross my mind until I'd taken a few minutes to think about it.
8Maxxus HeraldSo, I noticed that you never actually mention what the gift Tanya gave to Obi-Wan is. Since Obi's bangs cover it up, is it something that goes on the forehead? Some sort of sci-fi/fantasy reusable fake tattoo? Some sort of colored hair extension? I assume it's spider or web shaped, based on the clan the Nightsister was from?
I would have guessed some sort of brow piercing, but I have no idea how long you've made Obi-Wan's hair as it's been a while since it was mentioned. Probably an issue of reading chapters as they update rather than your writing itself, but something to look in to. Anyway, as a result my mental image doesn't have her bangs reaching her brow, so a brow piercing didn't cross my mind until I'd taken a few minutes to think about it.
1/8 c10 NB132
Oh this story is so good. Tanya just vibing with dooku is so great for me, I'm really hoping her presence prevents old palps getting his grubby hands on him. I'm invested in everyone, dooku, tanya and fem-obi are lovely characters, and I look forward to seeing what they get up too. I also like the jedi so far, they are arrogant and judgemental, but I like how you haven't made then completely incompetent or malicious like so many fics seem to like doing. Thanks for the story, I look forward to what happens next.
Oh this story is so good. Tanya just vibing with dooku is so great for me, I'm really hoping her presence prevents old palps getting his grubby hands on him. I'm invested in everyone, dooku, tanya and fem-obi are lovely characters, and I look forward to seeing what they get up too. I also like the jedi so far, they are arrogant and judgemental, but I like how you haven't made then completely incompetent or malicious like so many fics seem to like doing. Thanks for the story, I look forward to what happens next.
1/8 c10 2kishinokurobi
Wow, another chapter so fast? Whoever TheMaskedMaruader is has great taste and my thanks, as well as you! I loved the confrontation and Tanya equipping herself. I can't wait to see the waves tech like the computation orb will make!
2kishinokurobiWow, another chapter so fast? Whoever TheMaskedMaruader is has great taste and my thanks, as well as you! I loved the confrontation and Tanya equipping herself. I can't wait to see the waves tech like the computation orb will make!
1/8 c10 Guest
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1/8 c9 kishinokurobi
At first I was worried this part of the story could drag, but the time skip did come and I feel like it's going to hit some extremely interesting times!
At first I was worried this part of the story could drag, but the time skip did come and I feel like it's going to hit some extremely interesting times!
1/8 c9 91TMI Fairy
Yay, Dooku scored!
Ship - indeed, why use flat if a cube or sphere would had been so much more effective? Stupid Jedi ...
91TMI FairyYay, Dooku scored!
Ship - indeed, why use flat if a cube or sphere would had been so much more effective? Stupid Jedi ...
1/7 c9 1WeirdWeirdoWally
Tanya when Shugel made the Type 95: more defective than an Italian red devil, is a death trap, would literally go to the front lines again
Tanya when Being X made it work and not blow up every time with the low low cost of a prayer (and a little brainwashingCURSED ITEM IF I COULD DESTROY IT I WOULD
Tanya when she hasn't had a computation orb in a few years: Ah, the Type 95, old reliable, we had good times together, time to make a new one bestie
1WeirdWeirdoWallyTanya when Shugel made the Type 95: more defective than an Italian red devil, is a death trap, would literally go to the front lines again
Tanya when Being X made it work and not blow up every time with the low low cost of a prayer (and a little brainwashingCURSED ITEM IF I COULD DESTROY IT I WOULD
Tanya when she hasn't had a computation orb in a few years: Ah, the Type 95, old reliable, we had good times together, time to make a new one bestie