for Harry Black Book 1: The Hero Returns (Definitive Edition)10/26/2024 c7 T
I read and followed the Harry Black series a while ago, and I recently saw that you had started a definitive edition. Your style of writing has definitely improved, and I love the changes that you have made so far. Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
I read and followed the Harry Black series a while ago, and I recently saw that you had started a definitive edition. Your style of writing has definitely improved, and I love the changes that you have made so far. Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next chapter!
10/26/2024 c7 
3Lord Raihu
I think this will be somewhat better without Dumbledore's mind attacks from the previous version. It will also be interesting to see if Michael still will have romantic problems with Susan,
3Lord RaihuI think this will be somewhat better without Dumbledore's mind attacks from the previous version. It will also be interesting to see if Michael still will have romantic problems with Susan,
10/26/2024 c1 lartessier44
a great story abd nice to see Snape get a little thrown at him. chap 1-6 A great read. looking forward to more,
a great story abd nice to see Snape get a little thrown at him. chap 1-6 A great read. looking forward to more,
10/25/2024 c6 1wjhastings
Good chapter, there was a small spelling error in Dolores’s name in this chapter and McGonagall’s in the previous chapter though.
1wjhastingsGood chapter, there was a small spelling error in Dolores’s name in this chapter and McGonagall’s in the previous chapter though.
10/25/2024 c6 F13rc3D3ity
What's a story without an edge? A dull story, that's what. Bring the edge on!
What's a story without an edge? A dull story, that's what. Bring the edge on!
10/25/2024 c6 stacygrrl2002
Gawd, Snape is such a turd, even here. Good actor, bad character. You'd think by now, he's seen so many student potions, he'd recognize it and know better than to stick his face in an off potion.
Gawd, Snape is such a turd, even here. Good actor, bad character. You'd think by now, he's seen so many student potions, he'd recognize it and know better than to stick his face in an off potion.
10/25/2024 c5 Guest
Great new chapter.
Great new chapter.
10/24/2024 c5 6DashesNotHyphens
SHORT STACK IS BACK I'M SO HAPPY YOU KEPT THE NICKNAME
man this chapter really had it all. i do love how you're shaping the storyline around Daphne's healer apprenticeship. A lot more subtlety and nuance this time around and im really enjoying it. i love that you preserved the really sweet moments like Harry sitting with Astoria or Harry and Michael's little staring contest after the former got sorted. the little moments maketh the story and your story has done phenomenal ones so far
6DashesNotHyphensSHORT STACK IS BACK I'M SO HAPPY YOU KEPT THE NICKNAME
man this chapter really had it all. i do love how you're shaping the storyline around Daphne's healer apprenticeship. A lot more subtlety and nuance this time around and im really enjoying it. i love that you preserved the really sweet moments like Harry sitting with Astoria or Harry and Michael's little staring contest after the former got sorted. the little moments maketh the story and your story has done phenomenal ones so far
10/24/2024 c5 40Concolor44
I'm rather glad you didn't stick Harry into a different House. Regardless of what the Hat said, the boy is a born Gryff.
40Concolor44I'm rather glad you didn't stick Harry into a different House. Regardless of what the Hat said, the boy is a born Gryff.