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12Eternally Addicted
Mmmmmmmm I think I'll have what she's having! They had a lot of fun and I get the feeling they are just getting started! Loved it!
12Eternally AddictedMmmmmmmm I think I'll have what she's having! They had a lot of fun and I get the feeling they are just getting started! Loved it!
5/17 c11 Guest
I have a feeling that the bit about unprotected sex will have significance down the line. I have a feeling that Bella is gonna get pregnant and heal Edward's broken heart. I have a feeling that Rose is not gonna like it.
I have a feeling that the bit about unprotected sex will have significance down the line. I have a feeling that Bella is gonna get pregnant and heal Edward's broken heart. I have a feeling that Rose is not gonna like it.
5/17 c11 Guest
Love your stories. Love to read the reviews to see what other people thought of the story. Its like a book club to me. It does get weird when some start to judge other people's reviews though. Cant imagine what must go on in one's head to review the reviews of others. Talk about entitled. Like... just review the chapter and move on. Its akin to villains who try to control people and turn mankind into mindless, soulless robots.
Anyway. Loved your story. Great chapter. This goes without saying, but I need more like asap.
Love your stories. Love to read the reviews to see what other people thought of the story. Its like a book club to me. It does get weird when some start to judge other people's reviews though. Cant imagine what must go on in one's head to review the reviews of others. Talk about entitled. Like... just review the chapter and move on. Its akin to villains who try to control people and turn mankind into mindless, soulless robots.
Anyway. Loved your story. Great chapter. This goes without saying, but I need more like asap.
5/16 c11 kstewandy
some comments about the unprotected sex, come on who cares, its really all you got out of the chapter? they are consenting adults/characters and the author is free to do/write what she wants and tbh it makes sense with the all vibe of the story
cant wait for the nexr chapter, pretty please update soon but no stress meg
some comments about the unprotected sex, come on who cares, its really all you got out of the chapter? they are consenting adults/characters and the author is free to do/write what she wants and tbh it makes sense with the all vibe of the story
cant wait for the nexr chapter, pretty please update soon but no stress meg
5/16 c11 Guest
LOL why are people acting like this story affects their lives? They didn't use a condom, big fkn deal. Don't you think that might be intentional for the story?
LOL why are people acting like this story affects their lives? They didn't use a condom, big fkn deal. Don't you think that might be intentional for the story?
5/16 c11 Guest
uuuuuuggggghhhhhhhhh! unprotected sex? why?
uuuuuuggggghhhhhhhhh! unprotected sex? why?
5/15 c11 Guest
I get that Edward is horny for our girl. But can just divorce his wife before having unprotected sex with other women?
Bella deserves better.
And really? Unprotected sex?
Come on! If she gets preggers this becomes a bigger mess. This is why people used to have sex only in wedlock. Less mess.
I get that Edward is horny for our girl. But can just divorce his wife before having unprotected sex with other women?
Bella deserves better.
And really? Unprotected sex?
Come on! If she gets preggers this becomes a bigger mess. This is why people used to have sex only in wedlock. Less mess.
5/14 c11 Moltz
The banter between these two will always keep it fresh. This lemon encapsulated all their previous interactions. Building upon a deeper connection.
They both agreed to something so much more than spoken words.
Well done.
The banter between these two will always keep it fresh. This lemon encapsulated all their previous interactions. Building upon a deeper connection.
They both agreed to something so much more than spoken words.
Well done.
5/13 c11 Guest
Oh noes! Unprotected sex meaning Bella gets pregnant and Edward dumps her because he won't be able to handle it.
Oh noes! Unprotected sex meaning Bella gets pregnant and Edward dumps her because he won't be able to handle it.
5/13 c11 8Heewonjay
FINALLY! All that time she spent denying herself this man. So thankful she finally gave in! Levitating right now i’m so happy lmao
I love that she touched on the consent thing. The way he described sleeping with those other women as feeling obligated instead of wanting to was so sad. Then the way she’s basically been insatisfied sleeping with anyone until him. Yeah, they definitely need each other lol
SO MANY FIRSTS but that last first she mentioned nearly had me flipping the table (in a good way lmao). We need more to make up for all their lost time. Also hoping he opens up to her soon. She’ll so good for him.
Thank you for the update! This was exactly what was needed for them lol I’d expect nothing less!
8HeewonjayFINALLY! All that time she spent denying herself this man. So thankful she finally gave in! Levitating right now i’m so happy lmao
I love that she touched on the consent thing. The way he described sleeping with those other women as feeling obligated instead of wanting to was so sad. Then the way she’s basically been insatisfied sleeping with anyone until him. Yeah, they definitely need each other lol
SO MANY FIRSTS but that last first she mentioned nearly had me flipping the table (in a good way lmao). We need more to make up for all their lost time. Also hoping he opens up to her soon. She’ll so good for him.
Thank you for the update! This was exactly what was needed for them lol I’d expect nothing less!
5/10 c11 tpea1288
I'm hoping Edward files for divorce. No point in remaining in a marriage where no one keeps their vows. What do he & Rosalie have? Compatibility? Fun together? Then, they can transition to friends. Don't have that? Respect & civility then.
I wonder how Edward would respond to a pregnancy or pregnancy scare? Probably freak out!
If he liked being a dad, he should consider moving on those lines someday. His reaction to his children's death [as I believed happened] is extremely dysfunctional for all. I hope he gets help-maybe a bereaved parents support too.
I'm hoping Edward files for divorce. No point in remaining in a marriage where no one keeps their vows. What do he & Rosalie have? Compatibility? Fun together? Then, they can transition to friends. Don't have that? Respect & civility then.
I wonder how Edward would respond to a pregnancy or pregnancy scare? Probably freak out!
If he liked being a dad, he should consider moving on those lines someday. His reaction to his children's death [as I believed happened] is extremely dysfunctional for all. I hope he gets help-maybe a bereaved parents support too.