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1/6/2008 c1 LittleBlue33
wow beuityful
11/15/2003 c1 42Talking Hawk
(Feels an overwhelming urge to cry...)

Dangit, why? (finally chuckles softly) That was a REALLY good story. I actually felt a little disappointed when you wrote that Dori and Marlin were just friends, but then because it was so good, I shrugged my shoulders and continued on. However, I felt a lot happier when you mentioned the ambiguous friend/romantic love thing that I think might be going on. =) Thank you. In either case, AWESOME story. I really did enjoy it. Oh, and good song too (I've never heard it before, but it went really well with your story). Keep up the good work!
8/5/2003 c1 13Aeris Tiniel Mirime
Gosh, that's so sad! The lyrics fit perfectly with the feeling of this fic. Also, you have an excellent writing style.
7/30/2003 c1 5screaming truth
Hey, that was good.

You should put on the fic somewhere who the song is by. So people can get if they like it. :) Usually people put an Author's note for things like that.

Are you going to try to add to this, I think you could. There are many options on where you could go with this.

GOOD JOB!

LYLAS

Lauren
7/30/2003 c1 1I Love Lance-a-Lot
OOh... that's very good! Poor Dory; she can't remember much. Good work!
7/25/2003 c1 i-luv-markMD fan
Oh, that was so good! Write more Finding Nemo fanfics!

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