
5/13 c19 The Provocateur
I look forward to seeing the relationship between Naruto and Kurama develop.
"Google translate"
I look forward to seeing the relationship between Naruto and Kurama develop.
"Google translate"
5/12 c8 Kaguya's feet
Too many status screens. 80% of all words in this fic are about the screen elements.
Too many status screens. 80% of all words in this fic are about the screen elements.
5/12 c4 Kaguya's feet
So u nerfed him lol
So u nerfed him lol
4/18 c6 Guest
*Hands in the air: alraight just take the review and go!
It really does get bogged down in all the boxes, i do love that i love them boxes but i can see why a lot of people have a lot of very real concerns over them
*Hands in the air: alraight just take the review and go!
It really does get bogged down in all the boxes, i do love that i love them boxes but i can see why a lot of people have a lot of very real concerns over them
4/5 c16 Dabi
Something everyone always get confused, is the difference with the Raikiri and the Chidori, while similar, they're not nearly the same, that's why raikiri is listed as an S rank Jutsu while Chidori is only an A rank Jutsu, there's visible differences between them, Chidori us used with the hand in a claw shape, while raikiri has a pointed end and all 4 fingers extended, just like the 3rd raikage's lightning spear, while both Jutsu seemingly give the user an speed boost, raikiri allows the user to move faster than lightning, point in case Kakashi managed to cut lightning in half with it as it fell down from the sky, another visible difference is that with Chidori, the lightning is concentrated only around the user's hand and part of their forearm, every single time Kakashi uses Raikiri in the manga there's a lightning circle forming around his body as several lightning bolts flow from the Raikiri to this circle, when Kakashi only uses Chidori, the lightning circle around him is never present, this differences are visible both in the manga and anime, Sasuke managed to learn many Chidori variations, making it his own Jutsu, yet Chidori still remains only an A rank Jutsu, while Raikiri is the direct evolution to it, Kakashi too has a variation of the Raikiri that Sasuke has never used in ration: Raiden(Lightning Style: Lightning God/Lightning Cable), when Kakashi uses this jutsu he moves much faster than he or Sasuke use the Chidori, reaffirming the point, you can check this out yourself.
Something everyone always get confused, is the difference with the Raikiri and the Chidori, while similar, they're not nearly the same, that's why raikiri is listed as an S rank Jutsu while Chidori is only an A rank Jutsu, there's visible differences between them, Chidori us used with the hand in a claw shape, while raikiri has a pointed end and all 4 fingers extended, just like the 3rd raikage's lightning spear, while both Jutsu seemingly give the user an speed boost, raikiri allows the user to move faster than lightning, point in case Kakashi managed to cut lightning in half with it as it fell down from the sky, another visible difference is that with Chidori, the lightning is concentrated only around the user's hand and part of their forearm, every single time Kakashi uses Raikiri in the manga there's a lightning circle forming around his body as several lightning bolts flow from the Raikiri to this circle, when Kakashi only uses Chidori, the lightning circle around him is never present, this differences are visible both in the manga and anime, Sasuke managed to learn many Chidori variations, making it his own Jutsu, yet Chidori still remains only an A rank Jutsu, while Raikiri is the direct evolution to it, Kakashi too has a variation of the Raikiri that Sasuke has never used in ration: Raiden(Lightning Style: Lightning God/Lightning Cable), when Kakashi uses this jutsu he moves much faster than he or Sasuke use the Chidori, reaffirming the point, you can check this out yourself.
4/5 c7
1Pungis
Enjoying story so far, still quite a few chapters to go. Probably the thing I appreciate most is how mechanical the system has been. A lot of story’s like this use the system to be snarky and do fourth wall breaks while taunting the main character so seeing markedly little of that is nice. Other Gamer stories also tend to just have the failure condition on even minor events be death, it gets old after a while and you haven’t fallen down that hole yet.
Hoping the trend keeps up as I go on, but these first handful of chapters are great

Enjoying story so far, still quite a few chapters to go. Probably the thing I appreciate most is how mechanical the system has been. A lot of story’s like this use the system to be snarky and do fourth wall breaks while taunting the main character so seeing markedly little of that is nice. Other Gamer stories also tend to just have the failure condition on even minor events be death, it gets old after a while and you haven’t fallen down that hole yet.
Hoping the trend keeps up as I go on, but these first handful of chapters are great
4/3 c13 Guest
Really good story telling so far.
Really good story telling so far.
4/3 c19 omega823
great story i just binge the series after reading the first chapter a couple months ago. I hope you keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter
great story i just binge the series after reading the first chapter a couple months ago. I hope you keep it up and I can't wait for the next chapter
4/1 c19 myafroatemydog
I really like this fic. Glas you update this regularly hope you continue it. Also solo leveling is great
I really like this fic. Glas you update this regularly hope you continue it. Also solo leveling is great
4/1 c19 surya25addanki
Excellent chapter i especially love how Naruto is progressing mentally too, looking forward to more
Excellent chapter i especially love how Naruto is progressing mentally too, looking forward to more
4/1 c19 Gilgamesh99
well i must say, ive binged all published chapters in one go and this is by far the best of the GAmer Naruto stories ive come across. You've done well at making this Naruto more serious about training and becoming Hokage whilst still retaining the more endearing aspects of his canon personality. And im impressed at how you managed to make the system feel beneficial without making it seem like Naruto has life set on easy mode, it still feels like he has genuine problems and struggles. i also appreciate Kakashi being the way he is in this story, all the cast is great but i definitely enjoy your portrayal of the scarecrow
well i must say, ive binged all published chapters in one go and this is by far the best of the GAmer Naruto stories ive come across. You've done well at making this Naruto more serious about training and becoming Hokage whilst still retaining the more endearing aspects of his canon personality. And im impressed at how you managed to make the system feel beneficial without making it seem like Naruto has life set on easy mode, it still feels like he has genuine problems and struggles. i also appreciate Kakashi being the way he is in this story, all the cast is great but i definitely enjoy your portrayal of the scarecrow