for Harry's Solution5/30 c23 gaul1
Wonderful story greatly enjoyed! There was a great build up and lots of action. Good balance.
Wonderful story greatly enjoyed! There was a great build up and lots of action. Good balance.
5/20 c23 BeyondTheDive
I would very much like to request an epilogue or short sequel, good wordsmith. You've left a glaring hole, that being the very murder-y intent of one Albus Dumbledore! Just because Riddle is gone didn't mean Albus can't, or won't, invent some catastrophic event to kill Harry (and steal all his stuff) to become the "Greatest Wizard Ever".
Plus, I very much want to know how many kiddos Harry ends up with, seeing how many women are actively flocking to him like moths to a bug zapper.
I would very much like to request an epilogue or short sequel, good wordsmith. You've left a glaring hole, that being the very murder-y intent of one Albus Dumbledore! Just because Riddle is gone didn't mean Albus can't, or won't, invent some catastrophic event to kill Harry (and steal all his stuff) to become the "Greatest Wizard Ever".
Plus, I very much want to know how many kiddos Harry ends up with, seeing how many women are actively flocking to him like moths to a bug zapper.
5/20 c23 Bryce Hackley
Amazing story as usual, my only problem with it is that it doesn’t feel finished. Voldemort may be dead, but you portrayed Dumbeldor as a genuine threat to Harry and those around him. With Snape now Squibed and proof that Voldemort is dead, Dumbledor’s plans lay in ruins and he now represents a wild card antagonist. Unless you do a sequel or epilogue, that plot thread is left unfinished. Aside from this, the story is absolutely amazing and I can’t wait to see what you write next.
Amazing story as usual, my only problem with it is that it doesn’t feel finished. Voldemort may be dead, but you portrayed Dumbeldor as a genuine threat to Harry and those around him. With Snape now Squibed and proof that Voldemort is dead, Dumbledor’s plans lay in ruins and he now represents a wild card antagonist. Unless you do a sequel or epilogue, that plot thread is left unfinished. Aside from this, the story is absolutely amazing and I can’t wait to see what you write next.
5/20 c23 SunPho3n1x
This has been a very fun story! I very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing this.
This has been a very fun story! I very much enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing this.
5/3 c12 MatteusN
So from underage, to gender bend to zoophilia... I'm afraid of what you're going to write about next. From the way you keep talking about swingers, I guess there's going to be some cuckold action, and it's probably some girl changing into a boy and doing it with Hermione. I don't kink shame, you do you, but you should put warnings for people that don't necessarily share the same interests. The story is really good, if there was no sex going on I'd probably read everything but I'll stop here while the story is on a somewhat positive note, minus the egregious sexual topics.
So from underage, to gender bend to zoophilia... I'm afraid of what you're going to write about next. From the way you keep talking about swingers, I guess there's going to be some cuckold action, and it's probably some girl changing into a boy and doing it with Hermione. I don't kink shame, you do you, but you should put warnings for people that don't necessarily share the same interests. The story is really good, if there was no sex going on I'd probably read everything but I'll stop here while the story is on a somewhat positive note, minus the egregious sexual topics.
4/30 c10 Kitten Arina
As I said is this M or T and using T is being generous at this point it seems that you are trying to make this K with how you are trying to let kids read this with the choice wordsa you are using. I find that action disgusting. Seriously why is it a problem for you to respect your readers by at least using the apporite words? At least that way it would seem more like a T rating instead of this K crud that you are trying to make it with this fake M rating that it has!
As I said is this M or T and using T is being generous at this point it seems that you are trying to make this K with how you are trying to let kids read this with the choice wordsa you are using. I find that action disgusting. Seriously why is it a problem for you to respect your readers by at least using the apporite words? At least that way it would seem more like a T rating instead of this K crud that you are trying to make it with this fake M rating that it has!
4/30 c9 Kitten Arina
I am really starting to get annoyed with the attempts to keep this PG-13 when I could have sworn you marked it as M for safety reasons. Is this T or M? I am tired of you trying to straddle the line between the two!
I am really starting to get annoyed with the attempts to keep this PG-13 when I could have sworn you marked it as M for safety reasons. Is this T or M? I am tired of you trying to straddle the line between the two!
4/29 c23 
18Katphysh
good ending.
remember to check the 'complete' tab on the manage story page.
awaiting your next story.
18Katphyshgood ending.
remember to check the 'complete' tab on the manage story page.
awaiting your next story.
4/29 c23 3alix33
I like Harry's having learnt the names of so many of his ancestors.
You meant "No vault ever opened", "Except my Personal Vault" and "avoid being targeted by Voldemort".
3alix33I like Harry's having learnt the names of so many of his ancestors.
You meant "No vault ever opened", "Except my Personal Vault" and "avoid being targeted by Voldemort".
4/29 c21 alix33
Every brain cell I have and my very well-developed vengeful side loved Harry, Hermione and Argus Filch squibbing any and all Death Eaters.
Every brain cell I have and my very well-developed vengeful side loved Harry, Hermione and Argus Filch squibbing any and all Death Eaters.