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7/31/2004 c1 6carby4ever
hey you say you're thirteen and i honestly think that for a 13 year old you write really well! i'm only a year older and i write even worse! continue the good writing!

xoxoxo

Alex
11/14/2003 c1 1Silver Crystal Tear
I like the story line, you need to tidy up the grammar but apart from that its excellent!

One part you're syaing she and such on in third person and then you jump to 1st person, i and me. Just thought you would like to know for future note!

Thanx for the review...

Lora
7/29/2003 c1 ER's Da Best
Hey!

Wow i only just read this ive been meaning to for a while! That was MAD! Please do continue i dont have any things other to say then COOLIES that was great! Ok well PLEASE WRITE MORE!

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