for Chess Fight Marv Style5/20 c1 
161snheetah
This was such a creative story revolving around Harry and Marv that didn't require breaking into houses. I thought it was interesting that chess was the centerpiece for this story. I must say Harry had the patience of a saint keeping up with Marv's antics. You really kept Harry's seriousness and some intellect into the rules of the game while Marv had a high-spirited personality regarding the rules and the pieces of the game. I found it amusing how at the end of the story, even Harry stopped playing by the rules and fell into Marv's game.
Wonderful job!
161snheetahThis was such a creative story revolving around Harry and Marv that didn't require breaking into houses. I thought it was interesting that chess was the centerpiece for this story. I must say Harry had the patience of a saint keeping up with Marv's antics. You really kept Harry's seriousness and some intellect into the rules of the game while Marv had a high-spirited personality regarding the rules and the pieces of the game. I found it amusing how at the end of the story, even Harry stopped playing by the rules and fell into Marv's game.
Wonderful job!
5/13 c1 areianjacks
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.
Hi areianjacks here,
I just finished reading your story, and I wanted to take a moment to say how much I loved it! The way you crafted the characters, the storyline, and the emotions throughout was truly Absorbing. It kept me hooked from start to finish, and I really appreciate the effort and creativity you put into it.
Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of work, I genuinely enjoyed every moment of it! Keep up the great work, and I look forward to reading more from you.