for Konosuba: The Year after5/10 c2 
1cheesebakedcrackers
Good story but had some weird inclusions, the internal turmoil at the start is strange… Kazuma never considered Iris a romantic possibility a single point in his life. And Kazuma is surprisingly loyal proven when he rejected darkness in volume 12. Also darkness’s reaction to Kazuma “proposing?” To Megumin feels OOC, she already accepted that Kazuma loved Megumin when he rejected her, and she’s a pretty tame person so screaming and crying then storming off isn’t like her.
Overall nice story!
1cheesebakedcrackersGood story but had some weird inclusions, the internal turmoil at the start is strange… Kazuma never considered Iris a romantic possibility a single point in his life. And Kazuma is surprisingly loyal proven when he rejected darkness in volume 12. Also darkness’s reaction to Kazuma “proposing?” To Megumin feels OOC, she already accepted that Kazuma loved Megumin when he rejected her, and she’s a pretty tame person so screaming and crying then storming off isn’t like her.
Overall nice story!