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9/10/2003 c1 4Goblin Queen22
Hello I had to read you story because of the title. Because that is me name so I thought that was funny. Anyway I really lkie it so far keep going.
7/30/2003 c1 31Born-Of-Elven-Blood
oh...i didnt expect that twist! I love it, i nearly cried! Beautiful work, acolades all around, bravo!
7/30/2003 c1 14Sierra-Falls
Hey, I liked it. It actually seems to be the start of a good plot, if you ever get around to it.

Such questions as: How did Jareth die? What really happened leading up to the big transfer of power? What is the Labrynth's situation now? You can describe a routine day in the Goblin Queen's schedule. Does she still keep with the child takings? etc.

These can all be subjects to bring up. If you wanted, you can try to add hints of nostalgic romance for Jareth while another suitor tries to claim Sara's hand.

But hey, I would seriously like you to consider writing another chapter to this. Make this oneshot a plotted story.

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