for Unreal8/27/2004 c4 PompousPrick
woo I'm back again ^_^ now you could call me by this name, and in case you wanna know why, i got booted some months back and returned with my former name bwahahah.
+_+ i'm not gonna say anything related to 'enlighten me' in any way. since, i'm liking this one. yeah, so keep me guessing. very bice descriptions, and i like how it shifts from scene to scene just like that, feel the vagueness. you understand that i cannot comment on anything else right? [which could only mean my skull can only go this far...hahah]
still december? sucks. gonna wait anyway. [*gets shot* like i'm not a stalling writer...bleh.]
*pats you for a job well done*
ja ne,
fu-fu
woo I'm back again ^_^ now you could call me by this name, and in case you wanna know why, i got booted some months back and returned with my former name bwahahah.
+_+ i'm not gonna say anything related to 'enlighten me' in any way. since, i'm liking this one. yeah, so keep me guessing. very bice descriptions, and i like how it shifts from scene to scene just like that, feel the vagueness. you understand that i cannot comment on anything else right? [which could only mean my skull can only go this far...hahah]
still december? sucks. gonna wait anyway. [*gets shot* like i'm not a stalling writer...bleh.]
*pats you for a job well done*
ja ne,
fu-fu
6/30/2004 c4 
18Mayumi
*blink* Bezzy! you just made EVERYTHING confusing... :) hahahaa *glomps* glad you wrote the next part... even though i'm still confused... hope you get to finish it so that i'll FINALLY understand... no wait... maybe I won;t. :D haha! mwah
18Mayumi*blink* Bezzy! you just made EVERYTHING confusing... :) hahahaa *glomps* glad you wrote the next part... even though i'm still confused... hope you get to finish it so that i'll FINALLY understand... no wait... maybe I won;t. :D haha! mwah
6/29/2004 c4 anon
pretty interesting premise so far.
i would like to suggest that when you're switching between scenes to add a divider or even a simple *. Eg. in chap4, there's a switch of scene between where Fujima & co. is and where Sakuragi & co. is before it goes back to Fujima & co. again. It would help if a divider was placed so readers will know that there's a switch in scenes. Other than that, nothing much to pick on, looking forward to more and good luck with your O's. :)
pretty interesting premise so far.
i would like to suggest that when you're switching between scenes to add a divider or even a simple *. Eg. in chap4, there's a switch of scene between where Fujima & co. is and where Sakuragi & co. is before it goes back to Fujima & co. again. It would help if a divider was placed so readers will know that there's a switch in scenes. Other than that, nothing much to pick on, looking forward to more and good luck with your O's. :)
5/24/2004 c3 13HalKJAkiko
Hi! No... this chapter is not confusing, I understand it well... basically because I've read even more confusing stories before, LOL... ^^ Anyway... I guess this is gonna be a fun story, ne? I'll be checking for updates regularly, so you better update! Haha... oh ya, do review for my stories as well! Thanks and ja-ne!
~~ Luv from Hal*KJ*Akiko
13HalKJAkikoHi! No... this chapter is not confusing, I understand it well... basically because I've read even more confusing stories before, LOL... ^^ Anyway... I guess this is gonna be a fun story, ne? I'll be checking for updates regularly, so you better update! Haha... oh ya, do review for my stories as well! Thanks and ja-ne!
~~ Luv from Hal*KJ*Akiko
2/21/2004 c3 PompousPrick sign-in sign in my ass
hey there! sorry it took so long for the review... i was so busy these past few months... anyway, another enlightening (or was that confusing?) chappie to add eh? lol, told you i was looking out for this ^_^ don't usually do AU, but hey, AU once every once in a while can't do any harm, will it? LOL.
you're very welcome(i understand why you chose not to mention my name, i know it freaks people out i know). update soon! ^_^
~TRMB (
hey there! sorry it took so long for the review... i was so busy these past few months... anyway, another enlightening (or was that confusing?) chappie to add eh? lol, told you i was looking out for this ^_^ don't usually do AU, but hey, AU once every once in a while can't do any harm, will it? LOL.
you're very welcome(i understand why you chose not to mention my name, i know it freaks people out i know). update soon! ^_^
~TRMB (
12/8/2003 c3 8kikumarustarr
oh, nice AU fic. *thumbs up* waiting to read more! i find my slamdunk craze creeping up on me again. ^_^
8kikumarustarroh, nice AU fic. *thumbs up* waiting to read more! i find my slamdunk craze creeping up on me again. ^_^
12/3/2003 c3 7Amona
I don't think it's confusing, I love to read Aus from time to time and will be looking forward to your next chapter!
7AmonaI don't think it's confusing, I love to read Aus from time to time and will be looking forward to your next chapter!
11/9/2003 c1 1BlackKuroneko
Okay. I'm starting to think that this is Yaoi. It may be not, right? Just have to read the next chapter. Anyway, it's quite wierd for Fujima to be a pianist cum singer when we actually know that he's a pro basktballer. I don't mean that it's not good (lah), just saying that it's wierd. I like your fic so far so this review should be a compliment to you right?
1BlackKuronekoOkay. I'm starting to think that this is Yaoi. It may be not, right? Just have to read the next chapter. Anyway, it's quite wierd for Fujima to be a pianist cum singer when we actually know that he's a pro basktballer. I don't mean that it's not good (lah), just saying that it's wierd. I like your fic so far so this review should be a compliment to you right?
10/29/2003 c3 16frozenfemale
Not bad... this is an interesting story. not many stories are like this out there in this fanfiction realm...
you're not bad.
this chapter by itself isn't hard to understand, but well, the whole story hadn't been uploaded in a long time, (not that i would have been online even if it were to be uploaded sooner), and my memory of the beginning chapters were kinda rusty... that makes it harder to understand. this chapter was not confusing... good job!
16frozenfemaleNot bad... this is an interesting story. not many stories are like this out there in this fanfiction realm...
you're not bad.
this chapter by itself isn't hard to understand, but well, the whole story hadn't been uploaded in a long time, (not that i would have been online even if it were to be uploaded sooner), and my memory of the beginning chapters were kinda rusty... that makes it harder to understand. this chapter was not confusing... good job!
10/26/2003 c2 PompousPrick
yo there... i jus decided to check out your URL since ya reviewed for me one time and you mentioned you liked ToruFuji...oh yeah, thet's enough to attract muh attention^_^
AU?
it confused me in he beginning, but im used to bein confused and i stir in time, so whatcha gotta do is finish this thing up so i could understand it (it's not all the time that i read AU's ya know).
an, about your profile, you said you like Fujima? well fortunately, i do too^_^ oh by the way, check my URL when you got the time, i have a new ToruFuji fic (angst, the way i like it)titled "Spit The Past Out".
i'll wait for your updates and review for me again, ne? ja!
yo there... i jus decided to check out your URL since ya reviewed for me one time and you mentioned you liked ToruFuji...oh yeah, thet's enough to attract muh attention^_^
AU?
it confused me in he beginning, but im used to bein confused and i stir in time, so whatcha gotta do is finish this thing up so i could understand it (it's not all the time that i read AU's ya know).
an, about your profile, you said you like Fujima? well fortunately, i do too^_^ oh by the way, check my URL when you got the time, i have a new ToruFuji fic (angst, the way i like it)titled "Spit The Past Out".
i'll wait for your updates and review for me again, ne? ja!
8/22/2003 c2 7Amona
Hey, like your writing style!
I just kind of got into Slam Dunk and I have many eps still to watch, but it's nice reading a story or two. The fantasy theme is great, looking forward to where you take this.
7AmonaHey, like your writing style!
I just kind of got into Slam Dunk and I have many eps still to watch, but it's nice reading a story or two. The fantasy theme is great, looking forward to where you take this.
8/12/2003 c2 1Unquestionable
Ohayo~!
Glad to see you didn't take too long to upload... UNlike me! AHHah... ^_^
Call me crazy but I think the bunny is cute! ahaha...
Who's the newcomer! Is it Hanagata! Just guessin! =)
PLz upload soon, ne!
1UnquestionableOhayo~!
Glad to see you didn't take too long to upload... UNlike me! AHHah... ^_^
Call me crazy but I think the bunny is cute! ahaha...
Who's the newcomer! Is it Hanagata! Just guessin! =)
PLz upload soon, ne!
8/11/2003 c2 16frozenfemale
ek!
why did you end it like that? continue continue continue! soon!
good chappie, mate!
16frozenfemaleek!
why did you end it like that? continue continue continue! soon!
good chappie, mate!
7/30/2003 c1 1Unquestionable
Cool story you got here! very promising start!
Ahaha.. the little bunny seemed cute! ^_^ Hmm.. I wonder who's the two guys that appeared! Sounds nice!
I can't wait for the next chapter,ne! Plz hurry up!
1UnquestionableCool story you got here! very promising start!
Ahaha.. the little bunny seemed cute! ^_^ Hmm.. I wonder who's the two guys that appeared! Sounds nice!
I can't wait for the next chapter,ne! Plz hurry up!
7/30/2003 c1 16frozenfemale
wow... this is SO cool!
there aren't many stories of fanfiction now that are really nice... but this fic is great!
upload quickly! please!
16frozenfemalewow... this is SO cool!
there aren't many stories of fanfiction now that are really nice... but this fic is great!
upload quickly! please!