
6/30/2007 c14 Celes
Upon reading this entire fanfiction, I totally want to strike the last comment from the record.
This is amazing. Even your OCs are just... wonderful! It takes a considerable amount of talent to work them in flawlessly, and yet...~ I must say, I'm eagerly waiting for more when they come. The quality is superb.
Upon reading this entire fanfiction, I totally want to strike the last comment from the record.
This is amazing. Even your OCs are just... wonderful! It takes a considerable amount of talent to work them in flawlessly, and yet...~ I must say, I'm eagerly waiting for more when they come. The quality is superb.
6/27/2007 c2 celes
I think your descriptions of scenes and body motions are really spot on. I like to read things usually a bit more detailed and linked to other things. (wow, for someone who likes to read it I sure do fail in writing it :P)...
But I really like how clean-cut this feels. I was sent here by a friend... never knew you wrote as well! Awesome work, I feel compelled to read further.
And I really love your Sheik. You made me fall in love with him all over again ^_^
I think your descriptions of scenes and body motions are really spot on. I like to read things usually a bit more detailed and linked to other things. (wow, for someone who likes to read it I sure do fail in writing it :P)...
But I really like how clean-cut this feels. I was sent here by a friend... never knew you wrote as well! Awesome work, I feel compelled to read further.
And I really love your Sheik. You made me fall in love with him all over again ^_^
6/22/2007 c14 thekeshia
...this isnt the first time ive reviewed...but i still like the story a lot...you obviously have a hell of a lot of talent in writing and drawing, ive seen them both
your ever loyal fan,
~thekeshia~
...this isnt the first time ive reviewed...but i still like the story a lot...you obviously have a hell of a lot of talent in writing and drawing, ive seen them both
your ever loyal fan,
~thekeshia~
6/21/2007 c14 anonymous
amazing story! you have really captured the characters and i love all of the attention to details; especially in the way you describe the all of the areas, from the Sun Temple to the rice-paddies and fields. Trully amazing job! i also am completely head-over-heals on how you developed the sheikah race and their language. And i found it adorable how you've included majora mask's "doubles" theme in the other lands (such as in Romani Valley!) fantastic job; more, more!
amazing story! you have really captured the characters and i love all of the attention to details; especially in the way you describe the all of the areas, from the Sun Temple to the rice-paddies and fields. Trully amazing job! i also am completely head-over-heals on how you developed the sheikah race and their language. And i found it adorable how you've included majora mask's "doubles" theme in the other lands (such as in Romani Valley!) fantastic job; more, more!
6/16/2007 c14 a better whirlpool
wow... I typically enjoy reading one-shots because I get tired from reading chapter after chapter but when I started reading this from the beginning last night, I couldn't stop! This fic is so excellent, to say the least. Thanks for the great writing that really held my attention. :)
wow... I typically enjoy reading one-shots because I get tired from reading chapter after chapter but when I started reading this from the beginning last night, I couldn't stop! This fic is so excellent, to say the least. Thanks for the great writing that really held my attention. :)
6/14/2007 c14
21Link-luvr
Another masterpiece of a chapter. Very creepy, and sad with the whole infected Sheikah euthanasia (to use a euphemism) subject.
Hope you update soon! :D

Another masterpiece of a chapter. Very creepy, and sad with the whole infected Sheikah euthanasia (to use a euphemism) subject.
Hope you update soon! :D
6/14/2007 c14
6Moonlight Mile
Joy of joys! You have updated! *giddiness*
As always, it has been highly enjoyable. Always very creative, always keeping me on the edge of my computer chair. And as always, it always leaves me wanting more.
A wonderful and very satisfying break from cleaning around the house.
Can't wait until the next one!

Joy of joys! You have updated! *giddiness*
As always, it has been highly enjoyable. Always very creative, always keeping me on the edge of my computer chair. And as always, it always leaves me wanting more.
A wonderful and very satisfying break from cleaning around the house.
Can't wait until the next one!
6/14/2007 c14
10Raven the Joker
Wow took you long enough to update -laughs-, but tis' a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :)

Wow took you long enough to update -laughs-, but tis' a great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. :)
6/13/2007 c14 T420000
arg lol i love the chapters u write but they always leave us hanging and asking for more XD what will happen i dont nkow..poor link and sheik never get it on lol they need snuggle time. well another great chapter, cant wait for more : D
arg lol i love the chapters u write but they always leave us hanging and asking for more XD what will happen i dont nkow..poor link and sheik never get it on lol they need snuggle time. well another great chapter, cant wait for more : D
6/13/2007 c14
32Seraphyne
Yeah! Another chapter... Dum dum dum! Poor Link and Sheik can't they have their manly love?

Yeah! Another chapter... Dum dum dum! Poor Link and Sheik can't they have their manly love?
6/12/2007 c14
1Rubysaphire
YES! Thank you for another chapter!
I love this story! I can't beleive that you're only planning on making it 19 chapters...

YES! Thank you for another chapter!
I love this story! I can't beleive that you're only planning on making it 19 chapters...
6/12/2007 c14
22Aurora-Kayd
Surprisingly, (at least to me) I am relieved that they were interrupted. I get rather paranoid about bad feelings.
The depth of this story continues to impress. Thanks for updating!

Surprisingly, (at least to me) I am relieved that they were interrupted. I get rather paranoid about bad feelings.
The depth of this story continues to impress. Thanks for updating!
6/12/2007 c14 Bourgeois Sounds Swell
love it as always. I am most forgot about this story but not quite. cant wait for more.
One thing thoug, the he/she thing bugged me, it was distracting you should have just picked one or layed off the pronouns.
love it as always. I am most forgot about this story but not quite. cant wait for more.
One thing thoug, the he/she thing bugged me, it was distracting you should have just picked one or layed off the pronouns.
6/12/2007 c14
40an awesome blossom
Haha, poor Sheik. ALMOST.
Anyway, Hellhounds? Hmm. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Haha, poor Sheik. ALMOST.
Anyway, Hellhounds? Hmm. Looking forward to the next chapter!