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6/4/2006 c12 Incineration617
I love your writing. I actually think it's pretty amazing. I'd love to see more written, personally, because I love your LinkxSheik stuff haha...Plus suspense is murder.
6/1/2006 c12 11Phoenix Noir
Oh no! You've stopped! And I was really looking foreward to seeing the buliding tension between the two explode! As I have said before, you are a wonderful author. The pictures you paint with your words are vivid and easily picturable...It's that's a word. I doubt it is... I hope you continue soon!
5/31/2006 c3 Phoenix Noir
I quite enjoyed the Marshland scene! Nolan had it coming to him. -shrugs- But I was wondering why, every so often, you have a paragraph of italics of a scene that is happening currently. Flash back, mayhaps? I suppose I'll figure it out as I read more... Or you can tell me . ^^ Good work, I love it!
5/31/2006 c2 Phoenix Noir
I have a tendancy to review chapter by chapter, if I like the story, and this one has piqued my intrest. I noted in the first chapter, and a little in this, that you use elipses frequently. I am a big fan of the '...' , so I see no real problem in it, since I do it myself. Though they are many, it seems to fit where you have put them, unlike my work were there is an elipse every three words @.@ I just thought I would point it out to you that you are doing well on this. It is easy to read, and, as I said, the elipses add to the suspense. Keep up the wonderful work!
5/31/2006 c1 Phoenix Noir
I loved he spacing in this peice! And the general mood of suspense you've placed in the story. You are an excellent writer, and i hope to see more of your work very soon!
5/30/2006 c12 Red Valentino
are those people that got link shiekans? and y didn't they listen to sheik?
5/26/2006 c11 33kinneas
Holy crap. Thank you, dear babe, for keeping me up after a long hospital stay reading your damn fic and your damn journals and your damn art because it's just so incredibly good I cannot put any of it down. I LJ-friended you as well, if that's okay.

But yeah. This? = awesome. You've really managed to absolutely capture the feeling of sheer vastness and exploration and atmosphere we all long for in our Zelda games, and that's something that is incredibly difficult to do without a broad imagination and the talent to back it up. in a nutshell: omg write more. And draw more. Omg.
5/25/2006 c12 shadowededen

Amazing, as always. I liked the lull of action in the middle. It was more realistic than it would have been had the entire thing been all action packed.

You is love.
5/24/2006 c12 divdiv
absolutely love your fic! i was so glad to see it updated again after so long! please update soon!
5/19/2006 c12 94Elf Asato
THANK YOU for writing so soon! I...only hope you'll write at the same pace because...omg! Link! Sheik! I know they're going to be okay because they have to be, but...ah what's going to happen next? Is the girl important? And Sheik, Sheik...he has to think too much of things, doesn't he? ;) If I were him, I'd be more interested in continuing the encounter hehe.
5/19/2006 c12 5Red RoseDragon
Gah! The cliffhangers! o.o

Oh, I was wondering about the rationale behind the Sheik-as-a-guy premise. :D A credible idea (as opposed to some others I've heard... XP) Good job. This one seemed to go a little slow in the middle, but since it was pretty contemplative at that point, it fits. And the beginning and end were action-packed enough. :3 Fun stuff. I love summer-it means I get my 'fics so much faster. ^.^ More, please?
5/19/2006 c12 6Smiley-chan
ooh, please continue... I should cry if you don't. If I'm to take a guess, I'd say they're the mountain sheikah people, but then again what do I know?
5/19/2006 c12 26emeraldwolf
hm. very exciting. i have to wonder who this new group are. i have an idea...we'll just have to see. ^_^ again, wonderful work on the quick update. as always it is a lovely surprise to come home to. ^_~ rock on!
5/19/2006 c12 Watch Me
Do you purposely leave on cliff hangers to ensure that we will read the next chapter? Trust me, we will! You're writing is amazing. You capture such a great characterization for Shiek; it's fun to read!

As always, eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
5/19/2006 c1 xslashx
Yes! another update!

just keep it up


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