
3/18/2006 c9
1fujiapplesgoBOOM
meep! that story was awesome! some of the details are a little confusing at first, but you eventually get the hang of it. you have a great writing style! please update soon! i know i'm speaking for a lot of people when i say that i have a low-tolerance for cliffhangers(even though they're really cool sometimes)

meep! that story was awesome! some of the details are a little confusing at first, but you eventually get the hang of it. you have a great writing style! please update soon! i know i'm speaking for a lot of people when i say that i have a low-tolerance for cliffhangers(even though they're really cool sometimes)
3/6/2006 c9
5Black Sorceress
This is AMAZING! I love it! Sheik/Link slash is fantastic! Where is the slash? The kissing? The admitting? Please update soon! PLEASE!

This is AMAZING! I love it! Sheik/Link slash is fantastic! Where is the slash? The kissing? The admitting? Please update soon! PLEASE!
3/5/2006 c9 Anonomyi
Very good, I like the choice of words you use, and I anticipate the next chapter.
Very good, I like the choice of words you use, and I anticipate the next chapter.
2/28/2006 c9
26emeraldwolf
this was a great chapter. the scene with Link looking at Sheik's scars gave me goosebumps. so well written. the tension was palpable. ^_^ interesting idea with Faneer. very very unique. i love this fic to death, and will be here whenever you update next.

this was a great chapter. the scene with Link looking at Sheik's scars gave me goosebumps. so well written. the tension was palpable. ^_^ interesting idea with Faneer. very very unique. i love this fic to death, and will be here whenever you update next.
2/27/2006 c9 Holly
Excellent! I've been waiting for this chapter for some time. It's even better than I had hoped. I can't wait to read about what happens next.
Excellent! I've been waiting for this chapter for some time. It's even better than I had hoped. I can't wait to read about what happens next.
2/25/2006 c9 Anon
This is a wonderful story, and this chapter was well worth the wait. Your characterizations are wonderful, and the little twists you put to the actual cannon story are great. Seriously, in some points, if you just changed the names, you could have your own story.
This is a wonderful story, and this chapter was well worth the wait. Your characterizations are wonderful, and the little twists you put to the actual cannon story are great. Seriously, in some points, if you just changed the names, you could have your own story.
2/24/2006 c9 Ryukai-MJ
rho! One more chapter and the mystery have not change... u.u
but we know some little thing that will be certainly important someday XD
rho! One more chapter and the mystery have not change... u.u
but we know some little thing that will be certainly important someday XD
2/24/2006 c9 Watch Me
That was lovely. I love your characterizations. I think you portray Shiek in a great fashion. Also, your chapters are long! That's a rarity.
Anyways, this story is great and I'm pleased that you posted the next chapter. I can't wait for the next installment.
That was lovely. I love your characterizations. I think you portray Shiek in a great fashion. Also, your chapters are long! That's a rarity.
Anyways, this story is great and I'm pleased that you posted the next chapter. I can't wait for the next installment.
2/23/2006 c9
3Mentle
Wow it has been a long time since you last updated. To long me thinks, 1 year! Wah! Anyway you finally did and I am happy. When I first saw it on my favorites update list I thought I had clicked the wrong button and sorted everything alphabetically. Thank goodness that wasn't the case!
Ok enough of that you made a wonderful chapter, as allways!, and I was so happy. Things are heating up between Link and Shiek now. Hohoho! It makes me happy. But now they are sorta fighting! But that will lead to something right? Right?
Zelda was sorta creepy. I liked it when she was back to her old self for a bit. I want to see her get better.
Anyways thank you so much for the update! And for keeping me entertained on DA with all your wonderful art work. If it isn't to much trouble to ask could you perhaps make it so that this update time isn't so long as the last one? Please? Or if it is could you keep putting up art to keep me entertained? Cause I might start bugging you. Since I cannot leave reviews here anymore on your story since I have reviewed on every chapter.
Ok I rambled! Umm thank you for updating!
Your Lord and Master Cantido aka Funky-Pinapple

Wow it has been a long time since you last updated. To long me thinks, 1 year! Wah! Anyway you finally did and I am happy. When I first saw it on my favorites update list I thought I had clicked the wrong button and sorted everything alphabetically. Thank goodness that wasn't the case!
Ok enough of that you made a wonderful chapter, as allways!, and I was so happy. Things are heating up between Link and Shiek now. Hohoho! It makes me happy. But now they are sorta fighting! But that will lead to something right? Right?
Zelda was sorta creepy. I liked it when she was back to her old self for a bit. I want to see her get better.
Anyways thank you so much for the update! And for keeping me entertained on DA with all your wonderful art work. If it isn't to much trouble to ask could you perhaps make it so that this update time isn't so long as the last one? Please? Or if it is could you keep putting up art to keep me entertained? Cause I might start bugging you. Since I cannot leave reviews here anymore on your story since I have reviewed on every chapter.
Ok I rambled! Umm thank you for updating!
Your Lord and Master Cantido aka Funky-Pinapple
2/23/2006 c9
3Shadow of ZAFT
Beautiful work! I do so like this and all the fun that's happening. And beautiful touch with the temple.
And the lurking feelings...I LIKE!
Do keep writing!

Beautiful work! I do so like this and all the fun that's happening. And beautiful touch with the temple.
And the lurking feelings...I LIKE!
Do keep writing!
2/23/2006 c9 orekii
hee...its an update! Its been so long (2 years!) but still its been definitely worth the wait! It’s a wonderful chapter, as usual. I can't wait for the next! Lovely dynamic developing between Sheik and Link. Your fanart is also very talented. Hopefully chapter ten will be coming sooner. *loves*
hee...its an update! Its been so long (2 years!) but still its been definitely worth the wait! It’s a wonderful chapter, as usual. I can't wait for the next! Lovely dynamic developing between Sheik and Link. Your fanart is also very talented. Hopefully chapter ten will be coming sooner. *loves*
2/23/2006 c9
10Winter-Eyes
i can't believe that this has finally been updated...i'd pretty much given up hope! i have to say though, despite the long wait, it was worth it. another brilliant chapter, again with oc's that are a joy to read about. i wish nintendo would make this into a game...

i can't believe that this has finally been updated...i'd pretty much given up hope! i have to say though, despite the long wait, it was worth it. another brilliant chapter, again with oc's that are a joy to read about. i wish nintendo would make this into a game...
2/22/2006 c9
5Red RoseDragon
Yay, you updated! (Thankyouthankyouthankyou... heh, I needed something to distract me from the horrors of OChem...) Wow, that was a good one. Lots of plot, a bit of sexual tension, some hints at fluff... I kinda like the idea of the keatons. Like Japanese fox demons, a little. Fun stuff. What I wanna know, though, is what's up with Zelda? She sounds like she's all there some of the time, but then she goes freaky-psychic-psycho on everybody, and that can't be good. *jumps impatiently up and down* Damn your fabulous writing. I already can't wait 'til the next installment. If I give you a working* hookshot replica, will you update soon? (*=not fused together with excessive superglue)

Yay, you updated! (Thankyouthankyouthankyou... heh, I needed something to distract me from the horrors of OChem...) Wow, that was a good one. Lots of plot, a bit of sexual tension, some hints at fluff... I kinda like the idea of the keatons. Like Japanese fox demons, a little. Fun stuff. What I wanna know, though, is what's up with Zelda? She sounds like she's all there some of the time, but then she goes freaky-psychic-psycho on everybody, and that can't be good. *jumps impatiently up and down* Damn your fabulous writing. I already can't wait 'til the next installment. If I give you a working* hookshot replica, will you update soon? (*=not fused together with excessive superglue)