for Shake Up My Life9/11/2005 c8 redwolf
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MORE REALLY GOOD
8/29/2005 c8 crazedy
i just now read this story and i wish you'd update!
I must read more!
i just now read this story and i wish you'd update!
I must read more!
8/27/2005 c1 Dark Angel Lytha
*twitches* Hey! Have you given up on this or do you still plan on writting on it some more? Have you quit writting and don't even visit this site, or are you stumped as to what you had planned on doing with this fic? Are you uncertain about continueing after so long or are you just too busy? Cause if it's just that you're uncertain about picking this back up after soo long, don't be, I've seen writers who've taken longer on this site. If it's you're out of ideas, give a shout-out in your bio or something, and your fans will answer, I will answer and try to help you in any way possible. If it's that you've quit writting, would you please tell us that somewhere? I want to know. If you're too busy, please tell us that too. If you need a beta, there are plenty of willing people, me included. You're right when you state that there aren't many werewolf fics out there. This happens to be the only one I've ever seen and by not continueing it you not only dissappoint all the people who are waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, you let a REALLY good fic and one of the only and few werewolf fics around die and leave everyone with less werewolf goodness to read. I have to say that I don't review very often. Most fics I read, while good, aren't good enough for me to stir myself to the effort needed to give a well rounded review or have so many I think (as well as many others I'm sure), What's ONE more review? However this is more than good enough for me to review and to try and get you to write more. You have a really good idea going here and I'd absouletly HATE to see it die or be left like this. This is a well written fic and I appreaciate the effort that must have gone into it, but you've left me hanging and I want more. You captured my attention and held it throughout your fic and left me wanting, something I know all writers try for. You made me regret not having the end, and I've come back to this fic a few times to re-read it. Please, I'm begging you, would you write just a little more, or at least tell us what is going on? Tell me? If, even all our begging and pleading can't get you to write more, could you pass the story on to some one else to finish? It won't be anywhere near the same, but at least things would be resolved. Anyway, the reason I'm reviewing at ch 1 is 'cause I'm re-reading it again. If I had to review every chapter for you to write again, and keep reviewing every new one too, I would think it a small price to pay for the ending of the wonderful fic. *sighs* Well, I'm beggining to ramble so I'll leave you here. Just please, if you still check your reviews, tell us something! Even if it is a (in your eyes) "lame" excuse. My e-mail is if you need/want me for a beta or just to tell me what's going on. Later.
*twitches* Hey! Have you given up on this or do you still plan on writting on it some more? Have you quit writting and don't even visit this site, or are you stumped as to what you had planned on doing with this fic? Are you uncertain about continueing after so long or are you just too busy? Cause if it's just that you're uncertain about picking this back up after soo long, don't be, I've seen writers who've taken longer on this site. If it's you're out of ideas, give a shout-out in your bio or something, and your fans will answer, I will answer and try to help you in any way possible. If it's that you've quit writting, would you please tell us that somewhere? I want to know. If you're too busy, please tell us that too. If you need a beta, there are plenty of willing people, me included. You're right when you state that there aren't many werewolf fics out there. This happens to be the only one I've ever seen and by not continueing it you not only dissappoint all the people who are waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, you let a REALLY good fic and one of the only and few werewolf fics around die and leave everyone with less werewolf goodness to read. I have to say that I don't review very often. Most fics I read, while good, aren't good enough for me to stir myself to the effort needed to give a well rounded review or have so many I think (as well as many others I'm sure), What's ONE more review? However this is more than good enough for me to review and to try and get you to write more. You have a really good idea going here and I'd absouletly HATE to see it die or be left like this. This is a well written fic and I appreaciate the effort that must have gone into it, but you've left me hanging and I want more. You captured my attention and held it throughout your fic and left me wanting, something I know all writers try for. You made me regret not having the end, and I've come back to this fic a few times to re-read it. Please, I'm begging you, would you write just a little more, or at least tell us what is going on? Tell me? If, even all our begging and pleading can't get you to write more, could you pass the story on to some one else to finish? It won't be anywhere near the same, but at least things would be resolved. Anyway, the reason I'm reviewing at ch 1 is 'cause I'm re-reading it again. If I had to review every chapter for you to write again, and keep reviewing every new one too, I would think it a small price to pay for the ending of the wonderful fic. *sighs* Well, I'm beggining to ramble so I'll leave you here. Just please, if you still check your reviews, tell us something! Even if it is a (in your eyes) "lame" excuse. My e-mail is if you need/want me for a beta or just to tell me what's going on. Later.
7/30/2005 c8 Dartz'LoyalServant
Oh! Good fic! Very very good fic! ^-^ Yay! Werewolves! I LOVE WEREWOLVES! *Does insanely funny happy dance* I hope Seto gets his ass kicked! He deserves it! No one should be able to harm little Yuugi! I hope Yami, AKA Atemu, will kick his ass for that! Bwahahahahahahahaha! ^_^ Bye bye! Update soon!
Oh! Good fic! Very very good fic! ^-^ Yay! Werewolves! I LOVE WEREWOLVES! *Does insanely funny happy dance* I hope Seto gets his ass kicked! He deserves it! No one should be able to harm little Yuugi! I hope Yami, AKA Atemu, will kick his ass for that! Bwahahahahahahahaha! ^_^ Bye bye! Update soon!
7/26/2005 c8 
7Devil's Demon Bird
*Blink*... 0.0 ...*Blink*...*Looks at KawaiiWhiteWolf*...*Charges at her and tackleglomps her to the ground and beams loudly*...Whaie! This story is so kawaii and cool! ^_^-b I've lost the words for describing how much I love this story!I've -never- seen anything like this one! It's so awesome! #^_^#
*Starts sobbing quietly*B-but...why haven't you updated! I so looked forward to find out how it all ended and now I can't...*Sniffles and looks up at you with chibi eyes* Why haven't you updated?...are you busy?...too sad to write?...If I can help you in any way to write the next chapter I would be very glad to help you you know!(I could be your beta too ^^) =^.^= I would do anything to make you write the last few chapters! ^^ *Bounces around you in circles* Please, please write more! =^.^=
And I totally agree with you, it's too few werewolf stories out there! ToT So you can imagine how happy I was to find your story! ^_~ It's uniqué and so cutely written! I totally adore you for the way you were able to capture all the characters personalities when they were in wolf form (and humans too, of course!), it was so incredibly done and I love you for that! #^_^# *Blushes and nuzzles your neck affectionately* I really do love you for this story and your own way of writing, it's fantastic! ^^-b And you made Yugi and Yami so cute! =^.^= Oh, and I really, really like your OC's! ^^ They are all really cool and sweet, some of the best OC's I have read about actually =^.^= *Nuzzles you sensless* And all the cute werewolves, ah, I could go on forever and ever about all the things that's great with this story...but I'm afraid I will bore the life out of you.. ^^;; ...So I will have to hold myself in check when I write this review XD
*Huggles you tight and rocks you back and forth* But you just can't leave us here girl. I'm dying to know how Yugi is able to "know" things that he "shouldn't", and I really wish to know about the marking he and Yami has (the "pyramid") ^_^ This is undoubedly one of the best stories I have ever read, and I have read a lot ^_~ And I promise you, I'm not saying this cause I want you to update (but I still want you to XD), I say it because I can't leave this review without telling you myself how incredible you are, cause you are! =^.^=
*Pats you on the head* I really wish you would update this story...but I fret it's been too long before I discovered this and that you might not write the end of this...That would be just too sad! ToT ...Please, please, update as soon as you can, this is one awesome fic! =^.^=
(Sorry if I sound crazy or something, but I really awe you! You write so good and this fic's plot is a killer!) =^.^=
And to tell you, I loved every chapter just as much! ^^
*Puts you in my lap* Please update, I love this story too much to se it end here! ^_~ But I also love you too much to force you to write it if you don't want to. ^^ But I still wish =^.^= *Suddenly looks at her review O.o) Oh my, I'm so sorry! *Huggles* I didn't mean to talk this much, but it's so hard when this story is so great...I really hope I haven't made you fall asleep or anything!...Well, better end here, but once again, I treasure this fic and you ^^
Ja ne!
Yugi's (hyper) Little MoonAngel ^-^
7Devil's Demon Bird*Blink*... 0.0 ...*Blink*...*Looks at KawaiiWhiteWolf*...*Charges at her and tackleglomps her to the ground and beams loudly*...Whaie! This story is so kawaii and cool! ^_^-b I've lost the words for describing how much I love this story!I've -never- seen anything like this one! It's so awesome! #^_^#
*Starts sobbing quietly*B-but...why haven't you updated! I so looked forward to find out how it all ended and now I can't...*Sniffles and looks up at you with chibi eyes* Why haven't you updated?...are you busy?...too sad to write?...If I can help you in any way to write the next chapter I would be very glad to help you you know!(I could be your beta too ^^) =^.^= I would do anything to make you write the last few chapters! ^^ *Bounces around you in circles* Please, please write more! =^.^=
And I totally agree with you, it's too few werewolf stories out there! ToT So you can imagine how happy I was to find your story! ^_~ It's uniqué and so cutely written! I totally adore you for the way you were able to capture all the characters personalities when they were in wolf form (and humans too, of course!), it was so incredibly done and I love you for that! #^_^# *Blushes and nuzzles your neck affectionately* I really do love you for this story and your own way of writing, it's fantastic! ^^-b And you made Yugi and Yami so cute! =^.^= Oh, and I really, really like your OC's! ^^ They are all really cool and sweet, some of the best OC's I have read about actually =^.^= *Nuzzles you sensless* And all the cute werewolves, ah, I could go on forever and ever about all the things that's great with this story...but I'm afraid I will bore the life out of you.. ^^;; ...So I will have to hold myself in check when I write this review XD
*Huggles you tight and rocks you back and forth* But you just can't leave us here girl. I'm dying to know how Yugi is able to "know" things that he "shouldn't", and I really wish to know about the marking he and Yami has (the "pyramid") ^_^ This is undoubedly one of the best stories I have ever read, and I have read a lot ^_~ And I promise you, I'm not saying this cause I want you to update (but I still want you to XD), I say it because I can't leave this review without telling you myself how incredible you are, cause you are! =^.^=
*Pats you on the head* I really wish you would update this story...but I fret it's been too long before I discovered this and that you might not write the end of this...That would be just too sad! ToT ...Please, please, update as soon as you can, this is one awesome fic! =^.^=
(Sorry if I sound crazy or something, but I really awe you! You write so good and this fic's plot is a killer!) =^.^=
And to tell you, I loved every chapter just as much! ^^
*Puts you in my lap* Please update, I love this story too much to se it end here! ^_~ But I also love you too much to force you to write it if you don't want to. ^^ But I still wish =^.^= *Suddenly looks at her review O.o) Oh my, I'm so sorry! *Huggles* I didn't mean to talk this much, but it's so hard when this story is so great...I really hope I haven't made you fall asleep or anything!...Well, better end here, but once again, I treasure this fic and you ^^
Ja ne!
Yugi's (hyper) Little MoonAngel ^-^
7/11/2005 c7 2SpirtGoddess
Please update soon I really really like your story it's got style and also got heart and soul please update soon.
xXAmethyst no HikariXx
PS:I wonder who is dealing with Seto he going to get what he gets for doing that to Yuugi right?
Bye!
2SpirtGoddessPlease update soon I really really like your story it's got style and also got heart and soul please update soon.
xXAmethyst no HikariXx
PS:I wonder who is dealing with Seto he going to get what he gets for doing that to Yuugi right?
Bye!
7/4/2005 c8 4Renoirkmk
Great idea but you definitley(sp?) need someone to proofread yoour work for you. I found a ton of mistakes in it, ortherwise it's wonderful.
4RenoirkmkGreat idea but you definitley(sp?) need someone to proofread yoour work for you. I found a ton of mistakes in it, ortherwise it's wonderful.
7/4/2005 c3 Renoirkmk
As I was reading I noticed some spelling errors. I am listing them below and hope that you proofread your work more carefully or get someone to proofread it for you.
It's 'their' not 'there' when it's used possessively; 'our' and not 'are' when saying "our dream"; it's 'senses' not 'seneses'; and it's 'since' not 'sense' when saying, 'since the dawn of time'.
As I was reading I noticed some spelling errors. I am listing them below and hope that you proofread your work more carefully or get someone to proofread it for you.
It's 'their' not 'there' when it's used possessively; 'our' and not 'are' when saying "our dream"; it's 'senses' not 'seneses'; and it's 'since' not 'sense' when saying, 'since the dawn of time'.
6/29/2005 c8 3kkwyDragonflame
No don't stop there, not when it's so close to being finished! Onegai, please, finish this! I'm dying to read the end of it! I loved the whole werewolf idea, not many people write that, it's mostly vampires or demons, but this is really great. I love the way you describe things and the whole plot...onegai update!
3kkwyDragonflameNo don't stop there, not when it's so close to being finished! Onegai, please, finish this! I'm dying to read the end of it! I loved the whole werewolf idea, not many people write that, it's mostly vampires or demons, but this is really great. I love the way you describe things and the whole plot...onegai update!
5/16/2005 c8 ktkt
Like someone already asked you...
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