12/9/2003 c6 CharmedFan11
Great job with this chapter! i cant believe it was Prue who was Leona's whitelighter! ah! : ) keep up the great work! that would make a great episode for the show too!
Great job with this chapter! i cant believe it was Prue who was Leona's whitelighter! ah! : ) keep up the great work! that would make a great episode for the show too!
9/7/2003 c6 stephanie
Lol, thanks for the lolli, its to bad that ur busy, i thought the story was pretty good.
Lol, thanks for the lolli, its to bad that ur busy, i thought the story was pretty good.
9/5/2003 c4 agentpiperh
The story's pretty good, but there's just one thing- Darklighter poison only affects (is deadly to) whitelighters, not witches. I know that kinda defeats the purpose of the first coupla chapters, but I thought i should share. if you're itching to find out what happened in the earlier seasons of charmed, go to charmedscripts.tv- he has every script up. I've written one fic- Soul possession, if u wana r&r that.
The story's pretty good, but there's just one thing- Darklighter poison only affects (is deadly to) whitelighters, not witches. I know that kinda defeats the purpose of the first coupla chapters, but I thought i should share. if you're itching to find out what happened in the earlier seasons of charmed, go to charmedscripts.tv- he has every script up. I've written one fic- Soul possession, if u wana r&r that.
8/31/2003 c4 CharmedFan11
hey, i think you did a great job wrting the story, but...for chapter four DEMON, something went wrong, i dont know if it happening to everyone or just me, but when i tried to press 4, i got chapter two but it still said that it was chapter four DEMON on the bottom...is there a way you can fix it? i really would like to read chapter 4!
hey, i think you did a great job wrting the story, but...for chapter four DEMON, something went wrong, i dont know if it happening to everyone or just me, but when i tried to press 4, i got chapter two but it still said that it was chapter four DEMON on the bottom...is there a way you can fix it? i really would like to read chapter 4!
8/13/2003 c3 6BrilliantCrescentStar
I just decided to review myself because no one else is *sigh* Not that you four people are nothing or anything ('cept for you, lulu: I told you to review my story under the threat of death, so you kinda don't count) I think my story is crap, gay and generally stinky. What do you guys think?
I just decided to review myself because no one else is *sigh* Not that you four people are nothing or anything ('cept for you, lulu: I told you to review my story under the threat of death, so you kinda don't count) I think my story is crap, gay and generally stinky. What do you guys think?
8/11/2003 c3 stephanie
this may be a shot in teh dark but is the whitelighter Prue?...
this may be a shot in teh dark but is the whitelighter Prue?...
8/7/2003 c2 stephanie
this is a great story...i can't wait to find out who teh whitelighter is! your a pretty good writer, ever think of it as your profession?
this is a great story...i can't wait to find out who teh whitelighter is! your a pretty good writer, ever think of it as your profession?
8/6/2003 c2 4destiny-ruler
ok, hey! This story is great. Sorry for not reviewing before now, I kept finding something else to do. lol. It is really good. Keep going and update soon!
ok, hey! This story is great. Sorry for not reviewing before now, I kept finding something else to do. lol. It is really good. Keep going and update soon!
8/6/2003 c2 DarkBeacon
Cool story. I think there should be a little more detail, coz that would make it cooler. Being a Demon, I will Vanquish all your teachers, so you have no excuse not to write more! lol
Cool story. I think there should be a little more detail, coz that would make it cooler. Being a Demon, I will Vanquish all your teachers, so you have no excuse not to write more! lol
8/2/2003 c1 2Evanescent
Good start. That's about all i can say, 'cause not very much happened, but it definitely caught my interest, action is always good.
Good start. That's about all i can say, 'cause not very much happened, but it definitely caught my interest, action is always good.