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12/10/2006 c3 4Maidengirl
please update soon!
2/21/2006 c3 5The Providence Crow
Okay, it's official, i love you. And do you know why? BECAUSE YOU HAVE THE FRUITY GOODNESS THAT IS MY ADORED ZHANG HE! I love the little fruitcake^^ Go get 'em, He! Attack those miserable butchers of language! Seriously, your genius knows no bounds.
2/21/2006 c2 The Providence Crow
Wow...Thornberry-Saiyans...You know what? I'm putting this on my favorites list just for sheer creativity and randomness.
2/21/2006 c1 The Providence Crow
...i...I think i love you...((cracks up laughing)) Oh wow...Lucky Charms, huh? That ((cracks up again))
2/20/2006 c3 21Reika Itsumi
Yay! I was eating skittles when I was reading And to my liking...ZHANG HE WAS IN IT! YAY! I like the ending line too..."I don't suppose your hungry.." LMAO! I loved it...must update soon!
2/18/2006 c2 Reika Itsumi
THat was hilarious! Please oh please oh PLEASE update! I read your bio thingy or whatever and I want to know the next chapter! *cute puppy dog eyes* pwetty pwease?
10/11/2003 c2 Beautiful headhuntress
That is unfair how there are no girl super saiyans.neither Pan or Bra go super saiyan...they have saiyan blood though.I hope you continue I really love are write about the weird names its just the DBZ Creaters way off style...I guess.I hope to see more Chapters soon.
10/11/2003 c1 Beautiful headhuntress
I like it!Please write more!^_^
8/20/2003 c1 Musou
8/19/2003 c1 1SweetSaphyre
this is pretty hilarious! I love it! update soon and keep up the good work
8/15/2003 c1 Sara

I liked it. I thought the part with the lil Lucky Charms guy wuz hilarious. I always thought he was kinda creepy, if ya know wut i mean.*shudders* Why would kids want that disgusting cereal?
8/7/2003 c1 Mike Consalvi Luver
That was another great story! This part of the story was funny:" Lucky started. "Hold on a second!" He held out a needle. "You'd be great for experiments, wouldn't you?" Diao Chan's eyes widened and she ran out the door and into the woods.And this Part:They ran of into the woods, getting away from a mad man with a Lucky Charms box. Lucky's cries were sounded behind them. "PLEASE COME BACK! YOU'RE THE 16th PERSON TO RUN FOR IT! IT'S JUST ACID AND LEMON JUICE!"

OMG u gotta make another story like that!
8/5/2003 c1 Dragana
interesting...keep up the good work.
8/5/2003 c1 Ms. heartilly
this is a good story... please continue.

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