for Chaos in China2/21/2006 c3 
5The Providence Crow
Okay, it's official, i love you. And do you know why? BECAUSE YOU HAVE THE FRUITY GOODNESS THAT IS MY ADORED ZHANG HE! I love the little fruitcake^^ Go get 'em, He! Attack those miserable butchers of language! Seriously, your genius knows no bounds.
5The Providence CrowOkay, it's official, i love you. And do you know why? BECAUSE YOU HAVE THE FRUITY GOODNESS THAT IS MY ADORED ZHANG HE! I love the little fruitcake^^ Go get 'em, He! Attack those miserable butchers of language! Seriously, your genius knows no bounds.
2/21/2006 c2 The Providence Crow
Wow...Thornberry-Saiyans...You know what? I'm putting this on my favorites list just for sheer creativity and randomness.
Wow...Thornberry-Saiyans...You know what? I'm putting this on my favorites list just for sheer creativity and randomness.
2/21/2006 c1 The Providence Crow
...i...I think i love you...((cracks up laughing)) Oh wow...Lucky Charms, huh? That was...wow. ((cracks up again))
...i...I think i love you...((cracks up laughing)) Oh wow...Lucky Charms, huh? That was...wow. ((cracks up again))
2/20/2006 c3 21Reika Itsumi
Yay! I was eating skittles when I was reading this...lol. And to my liking...ZHANG HE WAS IN IT! YAY! I like the ending line too..."I don't suppose your hungry.." LMAO! I loved it...must update soon!
21Reika ItsumiYay! I was eating skittles when I was reading this...lol. And to my liking...ZHANG HE WAS IN IT! YAY! I like the ending line too..."I don't suppose your hungry.." LMAO! I loved it...must update soon!
2/18/2006 c2 Reika Itsumi
THat was hilarious! Please oh please oh PLEASE update! I read your bio thingy or whatever and I want to know the next chapter! *cute puppy dog eyes* pwetty pwease?
THat was hilarious! Please oh please oh PLEASE update! I read your bio thingy or whatever and I want to know the next chapter! *cute puppy dog eyes* pwetty pwease?
10/11/2003 c2 Beautiful headhuntress
That is unfair how there are no girl super saiyans.neither Pan or Bra go super saiyan...they have saiyan blood though.I hope you continue I really love this...you are write about the weird names its just the DBZ Creaters way off style...I guess.I hope to see more Chapters soon.
That is unfair how there are no girl super saiyans.neither Pan or Bra go super saiyan...they have saiyan blood though.I hope you continue I really love this...you are write about the weird names its just the DBZ Creaters way off style...I guess.I hope to see more Chapters soon.
8/20/2003 c1 Musou
MORE! MORE! MORE!
MORE! MORE! MORE!
8/19/2003 c1 1SweetSaphyre
this is pretty hilarious! I love it! update soon and keep up the good work
1SweetSaphyrethis is pretty hilarious! I love it! update soon and keep up the good work
8/15/2003 c1 Sara
Hey-
I liked it. I thought the part with the lil Lucky Charms guy wuz hilarious. I always thought he was kinda creepy, if ya know wut i mean.*shudders* Why would kids want that disgusting cereal?
Hey-
I liked it. I thought the part with the lil Lucky Charms guy wuz hilarious. I always thought he was kinda creepy, if ya know wut i mean.*shudders* Why would kids want that disgusting cereal?
8/7/2003 c1 Mike Consalvi Luver
That was another great story! This part of the story was funny:" Lucky started. "Hold on a second!" He held out a needle. "You'd be great for experiments, wouldn't you?" Diao Chan's eyes widened and she ran out the door and into the woods.And this Part:They ran of into the woods, getting away from a mad man with a Lucky Charms box. Lucky's cries were sounded behind them. "PLEASE COME BACK! YOU'RE THE 16th PERSON TO RUN FOR IT! IT'S JUST ACID AND LEMON JUICE!"
OMG u gotta make another story like that!
That was another great story! This part of the story was funny:" Lucky started. "Hold on a second!" He held out a needle. "You'd be great for experiments, wouldn't you?" Diao Chan's eyes widened and she ran out the door and into the woods.And this Part:They ran of into the woods, getting away from a mad man with a Lucky Charms box. Lucky's cries were sounded behind them. "PLEASE COME BACK! YOU'RE THE 16th PERSON TO RUN FOR IT! IT'S JUST ACID AND LEMON JUICE!"
OMG u gotta make another story like that!
8/5/2003 c1 Dragana
interesting...keep up the good work.
interesting...keep up the good work.
8/5/2003 c1 Ms. heartilly
this is a good story... please continue.
this is a good story... please continue.