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for Baby, one more time by Harry Potter

8/6/2003 c1 blah
oh sigh...that was odd. sorry...i now it's just your first try but i really hope your seond is better than this. i'm sure you have the potential to write really good fanfics or songfics but this one honestly wasn't that great. i think the reason i really didn't like it is because i don't like b.spears and her music. the issue you're dealing with was well not really suitable for the subject of the song. if you meant it to be funny it wasn't really funny. but after i've said that it was a good attempt, keep trying, you can only get better. peace!
8/6/2003 c1 OceanSoul
It was sad but it was a cute writeover. :)
8/6/2003 c1 Flamingos By Night
Haha! cute! ;p
8/6/2003 c1 mysticblackfairy
::cracking up:: THAT HAS TO BE THE MOST TRAGIC SONG EVER WRITTEN! SPEAR BRITTNEY IS TRULY THE BIGGEST CYLICONE GIT AROUND, NEE? ::giggles madly::
8/6/2003 c1 Karen
Hey, That was funny!

It went together really well :) No need for the F word though. Buh bye!
8/6/2003 c1 8kelpylion
LMAO, that can't be descibed as tragic at all, I'm sorry. But it was F*ing hilarious!
8/6/2003 c1 1darKpetalSofbluE
Was that supposed to be funny? 'Cus it was! But before you jump down my throat let me finish...I think it was good! It was very entertaining!
8/6/2003 c1 Cheerio
Sorry, had to report your story.

NO F-WORD W/ G RATING!

And um...it wasn't funny.

Cheerio!
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