
7/10/2010 c1
4Yin-Yan-Yum-Yum
Why is it discontinued? I love the plot and I think it should be continued

Why is it discontinued? I love the plot and I think it should be continued
3/12/2007 c1
4Kyetge
Oo, nice plot... may I please use it for another show? (Avatar: The Last Airbender. It's American anime.)

Oo, nice plot... may I please use it for another show? (Avatar: The Last Airbender. It's American anime.)
2/11/2007 c1
4Kitty Cat Meow Meow
aw! why'd it ene there? i know its on hiatus but c'mon its been what 2years? please update soon... it really good.

aw! why'd it ene there? i know its on hiatus but c'mon its been what 2years? please update soon... it really good.
1/13/2007 c1 Sango0013
please update this is good i wana read the rest. this is good will kouga ever find out its sango. is it gona have a big twist? please update!
luv Sango
please update this is good i wana read the rest. this is good will kouga ever find out its sango. is it gona have a big twist? please update!
luv Sango
11/17/2005 c1 demonluver
I think this is a cool story and that you should continue to write. And soon. I love the first chapter and cant wait till you write another one!
I think this is a cool story and that you should continue to write. And soon. I love the first chapter and cant wait till you write another one!
10/10/2005 c1 damari
That chapter was awesome, and thankfully long. Write next chapter as soon I as possible^_^.
That chapter was awesome, and thankfully long. Write next chapter as soon I as possible^_^.
10/4/2005 c1 Manifestation-Of-the-Mind
Alright. Good fic so far...Few flaws, though. One, It' spelled Sessho-u-maru not Sesshomaru. Two, A Hanyou cannot be a Taiyoukai, if you consider the possibility of, well, a Taiyoukai being the meaning of Demon Lord, therefore cutting out the whole half-demon, meaning oe must be of pure blood to,well, inherit the castle. Three, InuTaishou died when he faced Takemaru, therefoe he died when InuYasha was born, so he could not be alive, anyways. Fourht, Izyaoi died shortly afterwards, leaving Inu with no parents, thus making him be completely alone. ;;
Alright. Good fic so far...Few flaws, though. One, It' spelled Sessho-u-maru not Sesshomaru. Two, A Hanyou cannot be a Taiyoukai, if you consider the possibility of, well, a Taiyoukai being the meaning of Demon Lord, therefore cutting out the whole half-demon, meaning oe must be of pure blood to,well, inherit the castle. Three, InuTaishou died when he faced Takemaru, therefoe he died when InuYasha was born, so he could not be alive, anyways. Fourht, Izyaoi died shortly afterwards, leaving Inu with no parents, thus making him be completely alone. ;;
8/12/2005 c1 Sango fan
I know it's been a long time since you've updated and everything, but I happen to stummble across your fanfic and read it! It is REALLY good! An original plot and I wish for you to continue!
I know it's been a long time since you've updated and everything, but I happen to stummble across your fanfic and read it! It is REALLY good! An original plot and I wish for you to continue!
7/18/2005 c1
2DeedeeLovesFanfics
Hi This Is Deedee I got an Account Here. Maybe you can check out some of my stories..of course there not as good as yours.

Hi This Is Deedee I got an Account Here. Maybe you can check out some of my stories..of course there not as good as yours.
7/16/2005 c1 fanggirl002
Please keep on writing I've been waiting on chapter two the storing sounds very intriging
Please keep on writing I've been waiting on chapter two the storing sounds very intriging
6/26/2005 c1 Deedee
nice story its really coolio. i luv sango and kouga. ek please please dont use the last names anymore it gets me confused.
nice story its really coolio. i luv sango and kouga. ek please please dont use the last names anymore it gets me confused.