for A Mother's Last Wish8/24/2003 c2 
23Bluedreamer
Héhé, sounds good... and Sammy throwing paper balls instead of Serena ! Please update as the fics good
23BluedreamerHéhé, sounds good... and Sammy throwing paper balls instead of Serena ! Please update as the fics good
8/23/2003 c1 dizzy4
Wow! I am very impressed! You have quite a talent :) Just a quick little note though; be sure to watch your indents and paragraph strucutre. It's a little to squashed and makes it a little difficult to follow. Other that that, you are doing swimmingly; please continue!
Wow! I am very impressed! You have quite a talent :) Just a quick little note though; be sure to watch your indents and paragraph strucutre. It's a little to squashed and makes it a little difficult to follow. Other that that, you are doing swimmingly; please continue!
8/23/2003 c1 Moon Angel of Heaven
OMG! I can't believe Serena's mother got killed from that dumba** father of Serena's! Shame on him! He should diedIeDIE! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! *ahem* Anyway, the first chapter is Da BomB! ^^ keep up the good work!
~Jen
OMG! I can't believe Serena's mother got killed from that dumba** father of Serena's! Shame on him! He should diedIeDIE! MWAHAHAHAHAHA! *ahem* Anyway, the first chapter is Da BomB! ^^ keep up the good work!
~Jen
8/22/2003 c1 naiyana
hey this was a short chapter but it was a good start off. i hope u will write more cuz i think it will turn out into an interesting fic.
hey this was a short chapter but it was a good start off. i hope u will write more cuz i think it will turn out into an interesting fic.
8/21/2003 c1 iceangel1991
Love this fic...might be on of my fav...
please update soon coz my life is in your fingers ...lol...well cant wait!
lol...hehehe...ok..i'll stop before i do somethiung crazy...lol
Love this fic...might be on of my fav...
please update soon coz my life is in your fingers ...lol...well cant wait!
lol...hehehe...ok..i'll stop before i do somethiung crazy...lol
8/21/2003 c1 LittleAngel4
Though the beginning was a little short, i'm sure this story is going to be a great one!
Though the beginning was a little short, i'm sure this story is going to be a great one!