
12/26/2005 c13
4sqeekers
that was just so great you have to continue that was just a wicked cliffy i loved it this was great it's a great work of fiction love how her character isn't so weak as many other stories make her to be refreshing to see her strong and trying to make it on her own with the burdens she carries can't wait to see how this turns out this was just amazing
laterz

that was just so great you have to continue that was just a wicked cliffy i loved it this was great it's a great work of fiction love how her character isn't so weak as many other stories make her to be refreshing to see her strong and trying to make it on her own with the burdens she carries can't wait to see how this turns out this was just amazing
laterz
11/7/2005 c1
2ladytokyo
Plz you can't just leave us your fans who have been waiting hanging on chap 13. there are just too many thingd that needs to be cleared up! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update

Plz you can't just leave us your fans who have been waiting hanging on chap 13. there are just too many thingd that needs to be cleared up! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update
10/11/2005 c13
2MeatBallHead aka Ally
I really like how this chapter fanned out i haven't been on fanfic in a while so i didn't know this was a new chapter til now you know well keep it up i want to know who took her

I really like how this chapter fanned out i haven't been on fanfic in a while so i didn't know this was a new chapter til now you know well keep it up i want to know who took her
9/5/2005 c13 Tokyo Rabbit
Whoa. Pretty fast paced chapter. Hope to see more soon.
Whoa. Pretty fast paced chapter. Hope to see more soon.
9/1/2005 c13 serenityzkiss
update soonn... i really like it...
update soonn... i really like it...
8/26/2005 c13
2InNerSyMphOnY
Great Plotline...I hope you update on this soon. I wonder what darien's role is...let us all know soon!

Great Plotline...I hope you update on this soon. I wonder what darien's role is...let us all know soon!
7/27/2005 c13 Raspberry-Moko
ARGH! NO CLIF HANGERS! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEZ! I WANNA READ WUT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEZ! UPDATE SOON! I MUST READ WUT HAPPENS NEXT!
ARGH! NO CLIF HANGERS! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEZ! I WANNA READ WUT HAPPENS NEXT! PLEZ! UPDATE SOON! I MUST READ WUT HAPPENS NEXT!
7/11/2005 c13 kara
o its getting really good, u can't just wait another three weeks to update again u must write more NOW! lol...
o its getting really good, u can't just wait another three weeks to update again u must write more NOW! lol...
7/8/2005 c13
4Moon Baby2
This is getting interesting. I wounder why Mina and Serena look alike? Maybe they are twins or they have the same father? But what about Arti looking like Sammy? If his father is Max. Okay I know I can't answer these questions. Only you can. Please answer them soon. And what is with Darien being a detective and what does that have to do with Serena and Sammy? Plus when did they start having a liking thing, I mean the only thing remoantic that they did was he brought her a rose when they were having the meeting about Sammy. I'm a little confused but please update soon.

This is getting interesting. I wounder why Mina and Serena look alike? Maybe they are twins or they have the same father? But what about Arti looking like Sammy? If his father is Max. Okay I know I can't answer these questions. Only you can. Please answer them soon. And what is with Darien being a detective and what does that have to do with Serena and Sammy? Plus when did they start having a liking thing, I mean the only thing remoantic that they did was he brought her a rose when they were having the meeting about Sammy. I'm a little confused but please update soon.
7/6/2005 c13 Crystal Promise
Hmm...a guess on the kidnapper would be her father or something o.o; I guess I'll have to wait for further chapters to find out lol! I hope you update soon! I'm curious.
Hmm...a guess on the kidnapper would be her father or something o.o; I guess I'll have to wait for further chapters to find out lol! I hope you update soon! I'm curious.
7/5/2005 c13
2ladytokyo
Thank you for updating I was starting to get worried that another great fic wont be completed.

Thank you for updating I was starting to get worried that another great fic wont be completed.
7/3/2005 c13
9Neonlights
ARGH! you have to update really soon! i cant wait until we find out what ahappens! darien to the rescue? i hope so!

ARGH! you have to update really soon! i cant wait until we find out what ahappens! darien to the rescue? i hope so!