for A Mother's Last Wish7/3/2005 c13 
9Neonlights
ARGH! you have to update really soon! i cant wait until we find out what ahappens! darien to the rescue? i hope so!
9NeonlightsARGH! you have to update really soon! i cant wait until we find out what ahappens! darien to the rescue? i hope so!
7/3/2005 c13 kimmy
Quick,Quick! I want to read more.
Quick,Quick! I want to read more.
7/2/2005 c13 14Lioness Blackfire
O... this is getting better and better!
Very good story! Usually I don't go for dub-name ones, but AUs never count in that respect. ; ) I like it a lot!
The one thing I didn't see coming was Darien being a detective.
So... is the stalker Diamond? He seems to be the type. And is Max Malachite?
I'm looking forward to the continuation!
Keep it up!
14Lioness BlackfireO... this is getting better and better!
Very good story! Usually I don't go for dub-name ones, but AUs never count in that respect. ; ) I like it a lot!
The one thing I didn't see coming was Darien being a detective.
So... is the stalker Diamond? He seems to be the type. And is Max Malachite?
I'm looking forward to the continuation!
Keep it up!
7/2/2005 c13 11Moonlady9
YAY! Finally! i have been waiting for this chappy for a long time! i luved it. althought the whole scene w/ mina and max could have been more descriptive it was still good. PLEASE HURRY W/ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Laterz,
Josy
11Moonlady9YAY! Finally! i have been waiting for this chappy for a long time! i luved it. althought the whole scene w/ mina and max could have been more descriptive it was still good. PLEASE HURRY W/ THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Laterz,
Josy
7/2/2005 c13 YunalescaDagger
O couldn't u have just written a bit more...but o well...I STILL gotta try rewriteing my story...ttyl r I'll review later.
ffgirlmoonie
O couldn't u have just written a bit more...but o well...I STILL gotta try rewriteing my story...ttyl r I'll review later.
ffgirlmoonie
7/2/2005 c13 1Eternal Moon Power
Darien didn't really seem like a jerk at first, y'know. ::Crows:: i bet i know who that Mystery Guy is! well, please continue! i really like your story, even if the chapters are kinda short.
Bye! :D :)
Eternal Moon Power
1Eternal Moon PowerDarien didn't really seem like a jerk at first, y'know. ::Crows:: i bet i know who that Mystery Guy is! well, please continue! i really like your story, even if the chapters are kinda short.
Bye! :D :)
Eternal Moon Power
7/1/2005 c13 7Evil But Friendly Rival
I'm so glad you updated!
Great chapter! I cannot wait until you update again and find out what happens with Max/Mina & Artimis and most importanly Serena!
Please update soon! :)
~E.B.F.R~
7Evil But Friendly RivalI'm so glad you updated!
Great chapter! I cannot wait until you update again and find out what happens with Max/Mina & Artimis and most importanly Serena!
Please update soon! :)
~E.B.F.R~
6/11/2005 c12 Kara
write more write more write more!
write more write more write more!
6/3/2005 c12 11Moonlady9
it's been a while sice i checked up on this story, but then again u haven't updated lately, so plz hurry, i'm really falling in love with it! it's greatly written!
well, plz hurry w/ the new chappy!
luv josy (aka Moonlady9)
11Moonlady9it's been a while sice i checked up on this story, but then again u haven't updated lately, so plz hurry, i'm really falling in love with it! it's greatly written!
well, plz hurry w/ the new chappy!
luv josy (aka Moonlady9)
5/20/2005 c12 2ladytokyo
Max should be in f or a suprise. heheheheehe! Thank you for writing and updating another chapter. i really love this story. so are we going to see some sparks fly between Darien and Serena? plz update soon I have to know what going to happen. If Max lives or not.
ladytokyo
2ladytokyoMax should be in f or a suprise. heheheheehe! Thank you for writing and updating another chapter. i really love this story. so are we going to see some sparks fly between Darien and Serena? plz update soon I have to know what going to happen. If Max lives or not.
ladytokyo
5/17/2005 c12 kimmy
Wow...I love ur fic. I hope to read more about this. Sammy was always portrayed as the nasty lil' bro in the original version. The part of him trying to set his 'mother' with a his teacher is so kawaii. What's Darien's story? Ja.
Wow...I love ur fic. I hope to read more about this. Sammy was always portrayed as the nasty lil' bro in the original version. The part of him trying to set his 'mother' with a his teacher is so kawaii. What's Darien's story? Ja.