for Another Finacee!10/25/2003 c3 Angelineakuma
KEEP WRITING! oh and Make Kyo and Aka kiss infront of Ranma or something I wanna see the reaction of all this...
Ja'ne!
KEEP WRITING! oh and Make Kyo and Aka kiss infront of Ranma or something I wanna see the reaction of all this...
Ja'ne!
10/25/2003 c3 frida
i love it but i think in this one akane should be with the new guy, her new fiancee they could spend a lot of time together and fall in love with each other, i usually like ranma/akane fic but this one could be so much better if it is a akane/Kyo-chan
i love it but i think in this one akane should be with the new guy, her new fiancee they could spend a lot of time together and fall in love with each other, i usually like ranma/akane fic but this one could be so much better if it is a akane/Kyo-chan
10/25/2003 c3 
48psychedelic aya
AH! SHORT! CONTINUE SON! I don't like Kyo that much. And as much as I love Kasumi, she should've been a few minutes late! So that Ranma could've told Akane...
48psychedelic ayaAH! SHORT! CONTINUE SON! I don't like Kyo that much. And as much as I love Kasumi, she should've been a few minutes late! So that Ranma could've told Akane...
10/7/2003 c2 25mewling
He he. Your title says 'Finacee'. Clearly you do know how to spell fiancé, but that's just an interesting mistake.
Erm, while it's an interesting idea you're working on your litrature isn't fantastic. Your dialog seemed strange to me. Perhaps you should make the conversations more natural.
Altogether; intriging, but not as good as possible.
25mewlingHe he. Your title says 'Finacee'. Clearly you do know how to spell fiancé, but that's just an interesting mistake.
Erm, while it's an interesting idea you're working on your litrature isn't fantastic. Your dialog seemed strange to me. Perhaps you should make the conversations more natural.
Altogether; intriging, but not as good as possible.
10/2/2003 c2 11roses in bloom
O...You got me hooked, and then you ended the chappie? How could you!
Hurry and update soon please!
11roses in bloomO...You got me hooked, and then you ended the chappie? How could you!
Hurry and update soon please!
10/2/2003 c2 cecily
Good idea for a story! I am enjoying this very much. It's always nice to see Ranma get a dose of his own medicine. Plwase update soon.
Good idea for a story! I am enjoying this very much. It's always nice to see Ranma get a dose of his own medicine. Plwase update soon.
10/2/2003 c2 Ayachan
Let me guess Kyo is going to block? Anyway I like it, pretty good story. Update soon!
Let me guess Kyo is going to block? Anyway I like it, pretty good story. Update soon!
10/2/2003 c2 tigerrelly
I love the intro with her mimicking ranmas intro to Ukyo. nice. hehe. :) lemme guess, the 'other' fiance catches his fist? I still am throughly enjoying this fic. The only thing that I feel that I have to point out is that ranma would like never hit akane. but whatever, its your story, so no worries, its still good, I just had to get that out there. hehe. hope you don't mind. :) Please continue soon, and if possible, please keep me posted! later! :)
I love the intro with her mimicking ranmas intro to Ukyo. nice. hehe. :) lemme guess, the 'other' fiance catches his fist? I still am throughly enjoying this fic. The only thing that I feel that I have to point out is that ranma would like never hit akane. but whatever, its your story, so no worries, its still good, I just had to get that out there. hehe. hope you don't mind. :) Please continue soon, and if possible, please keep me posted! later! :)
9/21/2003 c1 mikee
uh...its a cliffy! i want to knoe wut ranmas reaction is! pweazze update realy soon! i lub ur story!
uh...its a cliffy! i want to knoe wut ranmas reaction is! pweazze update realy soon! i lub ur story!
9/2/2003 c1 jasmine
a great beginning.. hope to see more chapters...
a great beginning.. hope to see more chapters...
8/29/2003 c1 anifan
I like it! next chapter plz.
I like it! next chapter plz.
8/28/2003 c1 SangoinuKirara
I really liked it and I want you put up the next 3 or 4 chapters onegai? Arigato, Sayonara!
I really liked it and I want you put up the next 3 or 4 chapters onegai? Arigato, Sayonara!
8/27/2003 c1 tigerrelly
Innttereesting...! I like it! Please please please continue soon. very cool. I can't wait to see what happens next. hehe. :)
Innttereesting...! I like it! Please please please continue soon. very cool. I can't wait to see what happens next. hehe. :)