
12/4/2021 c12
4FGHermione
Hi!
It's been over sixteen years since you completed this story, and you probably don't even read these reviews anymore, but I just wanted to say that this is among the best H/G stories I've ever read. The characterizations were perfect, the dialogues and the emotions were real and the grammar was spot-on. There were only one or two typos. For one, it's Occlumency, not Occlumancy.
This is a truly wonderful story and I'm sure the sequel will be just as perfect. Thank you for writing this!

Hi!
It's been over sixteen years since you completed this story, and you probably don't even read these reviews anymore, but I just wanted to say that this is among the best H/G stories I've ever read. The characterizations were perfect, the dialogues and the emotions were real and the grammar was spot-on. There were only one or two typos. For one, it's Occlumency, not Occlumancy.
This is a truly wonderful story and I'm sure the sequel will be just as perfect. Thank you for writing this!
1/14/2021 c12 May
Absolutely amazing! Loved the take on harry and Ginny's story! Can't wait for the next post!
Absolutely amazing! Loved the take on harry and Ginny's story! Can't wait for the next post!
1/25/2020 c8 wuuuuuu
I love this story but I just wanted u 2 no that ginny's full name is ginerva not virginia.
I love this story but I just wanted u 2 no that ginny's full name is ginerva not virginia.
11/18/2019 c11 Someone
Ginnys full name is Ginerva not Virginia get it right plz and thank u
Ginnys full name is Ginerva not Virginia get it right plz and thank u
4/12/2019 c12 EmmaLise
Keep going!
Keep going!
4/10/2019 c10 Hinnyisreal
PLEASE get ginny’s full name right, it’s Ginerva not Verginia
PLEASE get ginny’s full name right, it’s Ginerva not Verginia
3/7/2018 c2
39sbmcneil
I think I've read this before, but I started rereading it again. I do not understand why anyone would make Ron Quidditch captain. He's lost more games than he's won and he has zero leadership skills. His much vaunted tactical skills don't seem to count for much outside of chess. It just seems like another way to screw over Harry. Quidditch is something he excells at, he's been on the team much, much longer than Ron, he's a natural leader, and he's a much, much better Quidditch player than Ron. I wish Harry wouldn't isolate himself so much. Draco wouldn't be able to use Ginny against Harry so much if everyone knew they were dating.

I think I've read this before, but I started rereading it again. I do not understand why anyone would make Ron Quidditch captain. He's lost more games than he's won and he has zero leadership skills. His much vaunted tactical skills don't seem to count for much outside of chess. It just seems like another way to screw over Harry. Quidditch is something he excells at, he's been on the team much, much longer than Ron, he's a natural leader, and he's a much, much better Quidditch player than Ron. I wish Harry wouldn't isolate himself so much. Draco wouldn't be able to use Ginny against Harry so much if everyone knew they were dating.
1/17/2018 c12 Auburnskythecool
WHAT IZ THE ZEQUEL. alzo, zorry, my kindle keepz making me turn the, oh, how do I put it without the right key, oo, the key in the middle of a, d, e, and z, into z. Again, zorry for my kindlez behaveior. :( but anywayz, amazing fanfic, I need more. Had that one letter that I can't type. :z
WHAT IZ THE ZEQUEL. alzo, zorry, my kindle keepz making me turn the, oh, how do I put it without the right key, oo, the key in the middle of a, d, e, and z, into z. Again, zorry for my kindlez behaveior. :( but anywayz, amazing fanfic, I need more. Had that one letter that I can't type. :z
8/16/2017 c11 Guest
It's Ginerva, not Virginia.
It's Ginerva, not Virginia.
6/4/2017 c12 Guest
Why did you have to have it end this way! No offense to you but I hate the ending!
Why did you have to have it end this way! No offense to you but I hate the ending!
4/8/2016 c12 gtace.e.muffin
Nooooooooooop why did it have to end why why why ! Plz make more plz !ߘ
Nooooooooooop why did it have to end why why why ! Plz make more plz !ߘ
1/3/2016 c12 Hg
It was very nicely written and i loved it but the only weird thing wwas the her name which isn't virginia it is ginevra but apart from that it was wonderful...looking forward to the sequel
It was very nicely written and i loved it but the only weird thing wwas the her name which isn't virginia it is ginevra but apart from that it was wonderful...looking forward to the sequel
1/3/2016 c12 Guest
I have to ask why youre using the name virginia?its ginevra but apart from that it was awesome i loved it ... Write the sequel soon
I have to ask why youre using the name virginia?its ginevra but apart from that it was awesome i loved it ... Write the sequel soon