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Why one sided...
Why one sided...
12/17/2014 c1 Guest
why didn't they end up together?
why didn't they end up together?
4/20/2014 c1 
4Natarumi
Liked it?
This was one of the first fics we read (that's about 6 or 7 years in the past) and it has been one of our favorites since!
Sorry that the review took so long to arrive, but it was very hard to find your fic again.
4NatarumiLiked it?
This was one of the first fics we read (that's about 6 or 7 years in the past) and it has been one of our favorites since!
Sorry that the review took so long to arrive, but it was very hard to find your fic again.
4/7/2008 c1 Naomi-imoaN
Uwaah! T-T I loved it! It as beautifully written, and the fact that you didn't have them live happily ever after made it even BETTER. Continue writing more NejiHina; you're good at it!
Buh-bye now~
Uwaah! T-T I loved it! It as beautifully written, and the fact that you didn't have them live happily ever after made it even BETTER. Continue writing more NejiHina; you're good at it!
Buh-bye now~
3/26/2008 c1 janine
T_T poor neji-niisan! I feel so bad for him:-( but this was a good STORY! NEJIHINA
T_T poor neji-niisan! I feel so bad for him:-( but this was a good STORY! NEJIHINA
2/8/2008 c1 poppy
Aww, I just wanted to cry when it came to the last paragraph. Aw. Aw.
Aww, I just wanted to cry when it came to the last paragraph. Aw. Aw.
1/4/2008 c1 11heavenlyhuntress
sad! wish I could write as well as you (,"), here's a cookie! good job XD
11heavenlyhuntresssad! wish I could write as well as you (,"), here's a cookie! good job XD
7/13/2007 c1 6talapadme
AH! NO NO NO NONNonononononononono! Write sequel please please! oh pretty please! Let Hina-chan like him! So sad!
Lots of Love,
Talapadme
6talapadmeAH! NO NO NO NONNonononononononono! Write sequel please please! oh pretty please! Let Hina-chan like him! So sad!
Lots of Love,
Talapadme
4/26/2007 c1 Merly
AW! That was so sad, but I loved it, that really captured my heart. You should make a sequel it might be good! However you are the writer and respect every desicion you make, but I loved it! It was so beautiful! How sad for Neji to be rejected, aw!
AW! That was so sad, but I loved it, that really captured my heart. You should make a sequel it might be good! However you are the writer and respect every desicion you make, but I loved it! It was so beautiful! How sad for Neji to be rejected, aw!
10/25/2006 c1 Haruka
AW so sweet but so sad! U CANT STOP THERE! U GOT TO FINISH IT!/CARRY ON WITH IT SO THAT THERES A HAPPY ENDING! *Tears in the eyes* i feel so sorry for neji *sob*
nejixhinata always :)
AW so sweet but so sad! U CANT STOP THERE! U GOT TO FINISH IT!/CARRY ON WITH IT SO THAT THERES A HAPPY ENDING! *Tears in the eyes* i feel so sorry for neji *sob*
nejixhinata always :)
2/10/2006 c1 2Tingmeow
I was happy in the beginning but sad in the end. _ Come on, you can't leave Neji sad like this, please write a sequel. (this pairing of course)
For some reason I thought Hinata didn't truly love Naruto. It could be admire.
2TingmeowI was happy in the beginning but sad in the end. _ Come on, you can't leave Neji sad like this, please write a sequel. (this pairing of course)
For some reason I thought Hinata didn't truly love Naruto. It could be admire.
1/8/2006 c1 4Sariachan-KokiriLeaf
I like the way this story was written. It's very descriptive! :)
Anyway I don't like the pairing, but this isn't really important since it's a matter of taste at the end. Unfortunately, writing this pairing makes Neji OOC almost all the times. For example, the fact that he's jealous of Naruto while in the manga he admires him.
Furthermore, the canon Neji seems a person only dedicated on perfectioning (sp?) his fighting abilities, and he is one of those few characters in Naruto who fights for the fighting itself.
Maybe later in the manga, he will show the will to protect the main family (and Hinata), but he hadn't yet (even if after his deafet during the Chuunin Exam he cares about her).
Anyway, your story was wort reading.
4Sariachan-KokiriLeafI like the way this story was written. It's very descriptive! :)
Anyway I don't like the pairing, but this isn't really important since it's a matter of taste at the end. Unfortunately, writing this pairing makes Neji OOC almost all the times. For example, the fact that he's jealous of Naruto while in the manga he admires him.
Furthermore, the canon Neji seems a person only dedicated on perfectioning (sp?) his fighting abilities, and he is one of those few characters in Naruto who fights for the fighting itself.
Maybe later in the manga, he will show the will to protect the main family (and Hinata), but he hadn't yet (even if after his deafet during the Chuunin Exam he cares about her).
Anyway, your story was wort reading.