
5/31/2022 c27 phillynz
Why did selene say serera left her with her groom if daridn is her actually groom confused
Why did selene say serera left her with her groom if daridn is her actually groom confused
5/30/2022 c19 Guest
Great story but big time skips
Great story but big time skips
11/9/2018 c31
3Lexie H.M
What an absolutely fantastic story! I really liked the plot. The journey Serena had to take, as well as all the royal characters having deeper feelings and longings really gave depth to the story. Really well done. Only criticism would be all the typos and grammatical errors in the beginning. It made the reading hard. But the writing quality of the last chapter really improved. Great story again!

What an absolutely fantastic story! I really liked the plot. The journey Serena had to take, as well as all the royal characters having deeper feelings and longings really gave depth to the story. Really well done. Only criticism would be all the typos and grammatical errors in the beginning. It made the reading hard. But the writing quality of the last chapter really improved. Great story again!
5/24/2017 c31 Anon
Absolutely fantastic! I loved the plot and how the story progressed. Very well done!
Absolutely fantastic! I loved the plot and how the story progressed. Very well done!
3/13/2015 c30 J.C
In chapter 28, you mentioned that Selene's prince was called Cal and he was the youngest son of Prince Clarence, ruler of Lockay, out of his 6 brothers. But in chapter 30, it said that Selene's prince was called Luke and he was King Titen's youngest son of 7.
In chapter 28, you mentioned that Selene's prince was called Cal and he was the youngest son of Prince Clarence, ruler of Lockay, out of his 6 brothers. But in chapter 30, it said that Selene's prince was called Luke and he was King Titen's youngest son of 7.
9/10/2011 c31
13K.Le-i-gh.B
Why hello~! 3
Just wanting to let you know, I LOVER THIS STORY!
It's soooooo cute 3 haha! And very sad the last few chapters, with Darien not willingly accepting Serena's apologies and wanting to set things right!
But Brilliant ~! Definitely a fav story 3

Why hello~! 3
Just wanting to let you know, I LOVER THIS STORY!
It's soooooo cute 3 haha! And very sad the last few chapters, with Darien not willingly accepting Serena's apologies and wanting to set things right!
But Brilliant ~! Definitely a fav story 3
4/12/2011 c31
1xSapphirexRosesxFanx
awesome story, i really loved it.
keep the great work.
SERENAxDARIEN forever!
;-)

awesome story, i really loved it.
keep the great work.
SERENAxDARIEN forever!
;-)
8/9/2010 c31
1moonxxprincessxx18
Wow, this was your first fan fic! You could have fooled me! Your a very talented writer and i'm facinated with your work! I too have a keen interest in the renissance era! It really catches my attention. Ohhh how Darien and Serena are always the perfect couple to write about!

Wow, this was your first fan fic! You could have fooled me! Your a very talented writer and i'm facinated with your work! I too have a keen interest in the renissance era! It really catches my attention. Ohhh how Darien and Serena are always the perfect couple to write about!
4/30/2010 c31 chimichurri
Wonderful story! Very nicely written and lovely characters! Both Serena and Darien are so stubborn. The ending is very cute :D You did an awesome job!
Wonderful story! Very nicely written and lovely characters! Both Serena and Darien are so stubborn. The ending is very cute :D You did an awesome job!
4/29/2010 c22 chimichurri
Great chapter! Just wondering how come Serenity and Selene haven't showed up to find Serena until now.
Great chapter! Just wondering how come Serenity and Selene haven't showed up to find Serena until now.