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for Domon's fight against Ilubei, and Master Asia

2/29/2004 c1 8LFrankita
Well, the plot line is nice. And your ideas are lovely. But , you see, Kyoji is dead. And in the final episode we found out that Domon does love Rain. So you might want to work on this a little more ^_^
Golden_Tuna
hope I didn't hurt your feelings, I hate flamers and intend to never be one
2/29/2004 c2 10narakunohime
^.^ I thought this was a good chapter..
12/7/2003 c1 Shuffle Queen
Well, Kyoji died in ep. 46 and though people always ressurect him back to life, it's really not possible. You have quite a few spelling mistakes and you seem to have gotten quite a few of your facts mixed up.
Check out Sora-sama's or Straya's sites; they're really good and give in-depth info on the series. See what you can do. Later.
~Shuffle Queen~
9/3/2003 c1 6antemac
Um, you did see the whole series. . . right?
9/3/2003 c1 10narakunohime
It's really good compared to my other one... ^^;;

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