for Forbidden Fruit1/11/2004 c8 
5dragon-femme-fatale
nice, that was kind of sudden though... it's been made kinda ooc on Hermione's part because i doubt she'd actually do that when she likes harry and you haven't given us anything to really correct that. So ya. Just my 2 cents.
5dragon-femme-fatalenice, that was kind of sudden though... it's been made kinda ooc on Hermione's part because i doubt she'd actually do that when she likes harry and you haven't given us anything to really correct that. So ya. Just my 2 cents.
1/10/2004 c8 Draco and Hermione FOREVER
You EVIL LITTLE! AH
Graet Story hunny! you roick keep writing!
You EVIL LITTLE! AH
Graet Story hunny! you roick keep writing!
1/9/2004 c8 i am who i am
damn! ur so good..anf finally i found some stories with correct spellings..coz it's kinda hard to read if it's not..anyway update soon..
damn! ur so good..anf finally i found some stories with correct spellings..coz it's kinda hard to read if it's not..anyway update soon..
1/9/2004 c8 3kaleidx
Bah! Evil, evil person! Leaving us at SUCH a good part! Argh. Adding this to my favourites. Absolutely amazing! Mini JKR! Completely brilliant!
3kaleidxBah! Evil, evil person! Leaving us at SUCH a good part! Argh. Adding this to my favourites. Absolutely amazing! Mini JKR! Completely brilliant!
1/9/2004 c8 babyface7000
wow this is a very good story. well written. i like it. and how harry and ron reacted to the news. what ass holes sorry bout that. but its true. g2g bye and have a good one.
wow this is a very good story. well written. i like it. and how harry and ron reacted to the news. what ass holes sorry bout that. but its true. g2g bye and have a good one.
1/9/2004 c8 angeloffear2006
ok thats just wrong to leave everyone hanging like that. lol. But personally the "love making" would end as soon as he said that last sntence. I would kick him so hard he would be unable to produce kids at all.. lol.. can't wait to read more soon!
ok thats just wrong to leave everyone hanging like that. lol. But personally the "love making" would end as soon as he said that last sntence. I would kick him so hard he would be unable to produce kids at all.. lol.. can't wait to read more soon!
1/9/2004 c8 frozenflames929
can you please please please have her slap him for calling her a mudblood?
can you please please please have her slap him for calling her a mudblood?
1/9/2004 c8 Heather
update soon!
update soon!
1/9/2004 c8 vivian
lovely exactly how i love it
lovely exactly how i love it
1/8/2004 c7 4dRAcO hErMIonE FiX rOcK
god, plz dont stop now! this is getting really good! continue! continue! =)
4dRAcO hErMIonE FiX rOcKgod, plz dont stop now! this is getting really good! continue! continue! =)
1/7/2004 c7 Jess
great story so far
great story so far
1/7/2004 c7 3FracturedFaerie
Your story is very...interesting. I really like the direction you're taking it in, and I think the marriage idea might be a solid one. I would, however, just caution you to make sure it doesn't get too cliche. I can't wait to read some more and see what you do next.
3FracturedFaerieYour story is very...interesting. I really like the direction you're taking it in, and I think the marriage idea might be a solid one. I would, however, just caution you to make sure it doesn't get too cliche. I can't wait to read some more and see what you do next.