for Forbidden Fruit9/7/2003 c3 
7wallfl0wer
AH! What's the confession! Oh god! I started smacking my computer when it didin't tell me! EK! Great cliffie, but ooh! I hope you update super soon!
7wallfl0werAH! What's the confession! Oh god! I started smacking my computer when it didin't tell me! EK! Great cliffie, but ooh! I hope you update super soon!
9/7/2003 c3 Silent Storms
Oh! you Dirty Rotten BITCH!(assuming your female, if not substitute scoundral)that was the single most abbrupt cliffhanger in this fic yet. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! Anyway I am by NO means flaming you, Hell I love this storie! its definitly gonna be intresting. Im sure I sould know this but, is this a harry/hermione or a Draco/hermione? I think its h/her but I hope its D/h either way, its good! one suggestion though, you might want to consider useing *though* for thoughts and useing he said she said ect. less often, of course I really shouldn't talk. anyway please update soon, that was a nasaty cliffy
Oh! you Dirty Rotten BITCH!(assuming your female, if not substitute scoundral)that was the single most abbrupt cliffhanger in this fic yet. I HATE CLIFFHANGERS! Anyway I am by NO means flaming you, Hell I love this storie! its definitly gonna be intresting. Im sure I sould know this but, is this a harry/hermione or a Draco/hermione? I think its h/her but I hope its D/h either way, its good! one suggestion though, you might want to consider useing *though* for thoughts and useing he said she said ect. less often, of course I really shouldn't talk. anyway please update soon, that was a nasaty cliffy
9/7/2003 c3 DracoFan
Omg... This better not turn out to be Harry/Hermione! I'll be so pissed! GR! I hope you update soon and I want some Hermione - Draco action! :)
Omg... This better not turn out to be Harry/Hermione! I'll be so pissed! GR! I hope you update soon and I want some Hermione - Draco action! :)
9/7/2003 c3 HPFanatics311
SUCH A GOD DAMN CLIFFHANGER! GR! Well anyways I really like your story so please update soon!
SUCH A GOD DAMN CLIFFHANGER! GR! Well anyways I really like your story so please update soon!
9/7/2003 c3 Jerry
This is really good oohh cliffhanger. I love the dream and what sort of things has she written in her journal ahh. Update soon x
This is really good oohh cliffhanger. I love the dream and what sort of things has she written in her journal ahh. Update soon x
9/6/2003 c3 StAlKaHoLiC
What was Harry gonna say damnit. Lol. Something like "I love you". Probably.
I think that theyll get interupted my Draco. But its just my guess.
Lol. Good job. Continue!
What was Harry gonna say damnit. Lol. Something like "I love you". Probably.
I think that theyll get interupted my Draco. But its just my guess.
Lol. Good job. Continue!
9/5/2003 c2 Serpent du feu
It turns me on when Draco’s blackmailing Hermione for sex! *lick lips*
I’m looking forward to the R rated scenes.
It turns me on when Draco’s blackmailing Hermione for sex! *lick lips*
I’m looking forward to the R rated scenes.
9/5/2003 c2 PeppermintPat
Hi! Well, I have to say only the truth. It's so good! I don't think that things are going too fast, actually, it's a little bit boring when things go snail-speed, thing that isn't hapenning with your story!
Though ther are tiny little grammar mistakes, that can be fixed with a beat reader.
Anyway, would you please, please e-mail me when you update, I think that you are very good writer, keep it on!
: : : Peppermint P@tty : : :
Hi! Well, I have to say only the truth. It's so good! I don't think that things are going too fast, actually, it's a little bit boring when things go snail-speed, thing that isn't hapenning with your story!
Though ther are tiny little grammar mistakes, that can be fixed with a beat reader.
Anyway, would you please, please e-mail me when you update, I think that you are very good writer, keep it on!
: : : Peppermint P@tty : : :
9/5/2003 c2 5Apollonia2
Nice little fight scene. An I always love the inner conflict Draco has with himself when he tries to logically explain his attraction to Hermione to himself. Please update soon!
5Apollonia2Nice little fight scene. An I always love the inner conflict Draco has with himself when he tries to logically explain his attraction to Hermione to himself. Please update soon!
9/5/2003 c1 Apollonia2
I love this story already!
And to respond to DarAngel66's comment, yes, even though Draco hates Hermione (although I really don't think that he really hates her. That's a bit strong.) he can still want to shag her. Guys can want to screw you and not like you. Men are flexible like that because they are dogs. (I don't hate guys. I love them to death, but that's how many of them are.) Keep writing!
I love this story already!
And to respond to DarAngel66's comment, yes, even though Draco hates Hermione (although I really don't think that he really hates her. That's a bit strong.) he can still want to shag her. Guys can want to screw you and not like you. Men are flexible like that because they are dogs. (I don't hate guys. I love them to death, but that's how many of them are.) Keep writing!
9/5/2003 c2 DracoFan
Um... Not poor Pansy... HAHAHAHAHA! I started to laugh when i read that! Serves her right! Hehe... Update soon so i can read what happens!
Um... Not poor Pansy... HAHAHAHAHA! I started to laugh when i read that! Serves her right! Hehe... Update soon so i can read what happens!