for Forbidden Fruit9/5/2003 c2 Black Cat
Hey this is actaully a quite a good story so far. Nice to see an author whos not afraid to cuss! Hope to see the next chapter soon
Hey this is actaully a quite a good story so far. Nice to see an author whos not afraid to cuss! Hope to see the next chapter soon
9/5/2003 c2 Catherine
awesome stuff
this is a really good story
i must admit that draco seems to be taking things too fast
or else hes some hormoned-up horny teen who wants to root nething that moves...probably the mroe logical description
but neway
AWESOME
luv ur work
keep writing
awesome stuff
this is a really good story
i must admit that draco seems to be taking things too fast
or else hes some hormoned-up horny teen who wants to root nething that moves...probably the mroe logical description
but neway
AWESOME
luv ur work
keep writing
9/4/2003 c1 Serpent du feu
Where is chapter 2? I have it saved in my computer and I just read it, but now it's totally gone!
Where is chapter 2? I have it saved in my computer and I just read it, but now it's totally gone!
9/4/2003 c1 
5imyourecstasypill
Keep up the story. I love it. THis is a really good story.
If u need a beta reader email me at:
cleo
5imyourecstasypillKeep up the story. I love it. THis is a really good story.
If u need a beta reader email me at:
cleo
9/4/2003 c1 1Dark Angel66
Ok first of all, screw you Shitter me Fruitless. Second, this is a great story, but there are a few problems. First of all, you write Hermione's dialog well, but this is getting too rushed. The whole looking into his eyes that are just like the man in her dreams comes out too fast. You should keep the fact that Herimione sort of likes him until a later chapter. Secondly, Draco hates Hermione, so he wouldn't think of shagging her a all. Other than that keep writing!
1Dark Angel66Ok first of all, screw you Shitter me Fruitless. Second, this is a great story, but there are a few problems. First of all, you write Hermione's dialog well, but this is getting too rushed. The whole looking into his eyes that are just like the man in her dreams comes out too fast. You should keep the fact that Herimione sort of likes him until a later chapter. Secondly, Draco hates Hermione, so he wouldn't think of shagging her a all. Other than that keep writing!
9/4/2003 c1 dracofan
oye! i like this story! I wouldn't mind having draco for forbidden fruit...! UPDATE SOON!
oye! i like this story! I wouldn't mind having draco for forbidden fruit...! UPDATE SOON!
9/4/2003 c1 Shitter me fruitless
We'll not sue that poor hooved creature; we'll sue your sorry arse.
'Begging for a shag'? You can't have a very high opinion of Hermione now can't you?
What are you; some kind of white suprematist?
Gryffindor rules!
We'll not sue that poor hooved creature; we'll sue your sorry arse.
'Begging for a shag'? You can't have a very high opinion of Hermione now can't you?
What are you; some kind of white suprematist?
Gryffindor rules!