for Uncontrolled11/7/2017 c19 Jobless
Hello:
I loved this story. It was...like...magical...Christmas...sparkles...night club...Barbie life in the dreamhouse...My little pony...My little pony humans...and real life...
Hello:
I loved this story. It was...like...magical...Christmas...sparkles...night club...Barbie life in the dreamhouse...My little pony...My little pony humans...and real life...
1112/29/2016 c19 Guest
I loved this fan fic! The characters were fun and written well. The author didn't rely on the already present emotional attachment the reader has for the characters, she made you love them again. I also enjoyed how long this was. A lot of fan fiction is short and unfinished. Good job!
I loved this fan fic! The characters were fun and written well. The author didn't rely on the already present emotional attachment the reader has for the characters, she made you love them again. I also enjoyed how long this was. A lot of fan fiction is short and unfinished. Good job!
12/31/2014 c19 SereStarOfGaea
I just loved the story... The guards as babies Was just so fun! And the club with all of Them watching them dance... Poor kunzite I think he Was the most affected bby the dance besides darien! I kinda wish evil kunzite had kidnap mina or made kunzite watch as he kissed her... I just enjoyed the story so much... And the sex scenes were al good!
I just loved the story... The guards as babies Was just so fun! And the club with all of Them watching them dance... Poor kunzite I think he Was the most affected bby the dance besides darien! I kinda wish evil kunzite had kidnap mina or made kunzite watch as he kissed her... I just enjoyed the story so much... And the sex scenes were al good!
1/29/2014 c19 Guest
Aww.. Such a lovely story!
Aww.. Such a lovely story!
4/1/2013 c8 akuma no hime
oh my kami-sama i laugh so hard i rool of my high bed and on to the tiled floor laughing while my bf and sis and her bf fell laughing very hard this is so good MAKE MORE PLEASE!
oh my kami-sama i laugh so hard i rool of my high bed and on to the tiled floor laughing while my bf and sis and her bf fell laughing very hard this is so good MAKE MORE PLEASE!
8/20/2012 c19 nickybluejess
I liked this story. It was very funny when the guys were baby's and talking to one another. Then with the Girls, to funny. The last few chapters were a little sad with all that drama but overall I liked the story plot. :)
I liked this story. It was very funny when the guys were baby's and talking to one another. Then with the Girls, to funny. The last few chapters were a little sad with all that drama but overall I liked the story plot. :)
6/28/2012 c2 angeljme
yey! found another story with a great plot, well written, kidney-popping funny and soooo sweet!
yey! found another story with a great plot, well written, kidney-popping funny and soooo sweet!
2/13/2010 c3 sailorstarcharmer
How old are they?" Mina asked, looking at the five boys, sprawled on the huge bed with their clothes almost ripping at the seams. There was beeping from the computer and Ami looked back at the boys.
"It says they're five years old." Was her final answer
FIVE BOYS? WEREN'T THERE FOUR!1
How old are they?" Mina asked, looking at the five boys, sprawled on the huge bed with their clothes almost ripping at the seams. There was beeping from the computer and Ami looked back at the boys.
"It says they're five years old." Was her final answer
FIVE BOYS? WEREN'T THERE FOUR!1