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11/4/2016 c1 7Brainless Genius
AGH THE LAST SENTENCE GIVES ME SO MUCH PAIN
Seriously though, great job! I think "It's a little rude; I'm trying to sleep" is definitely something Dory would think, and you really captured what it would be like to be in that situation.
Nice job!
5/12/2014 c1 5The Divide - Death Bringer
awwwww sooo cute I love it
4/4/2009 c1 abandonedaccount123456790000
THAT

WAS

A

MAIZING!

AND SO IN CHARACTER!

it was also really funny!

I loved the line ,

"What a silly question! And it's a little rude; I'm trying to sleep..."

and also,

"Her last conscious thought was the realization of what had happened, and how brave Marlin was."

just awesome.
1/26/2009 c1 shifufangirl95
i totally agreed with Dory on this one. Marlin was brave. WHOO! GO MARLIN! YEAH! KICK THIER PINKY TENTACLES! SHOW 'EM WHO'S BOSS! YOU ROCK!
4/12/2008 c1 77sweetysmart0505
Somple and perfect. Good job!
3/17/2008 c1 3Gracelove93
Nice drabble!

I love looking through Dory's eyes:)
1/6/2008 c1 LittleBlue33
wow very nice part of describing what they were feeling while being in with the jellys
12/3/2004 c1 evezzz
ahw... so sweet! Dory is just so cool... And you should really write more of this stuff! ^_^
11/26/2003 c1 Thrayonlosa
Luffed it. ^-^ That simple: luffed it.
11/18/2003 c1 The Great Red Dragon lazy as usual
I like this...I only wish it were longer! You could really go far with this!
9/9/2003 c1 MD fan
This was REALLY good! You should write more Finding Nemo fics.
9/8/2003 c1 26Florida's Firefly
Hey! A continuation of my story! SWEET! Can you review my version of it?

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